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Argumentative Essay Braden Rawson Social Networking or the use of specific websites or
applications to interact with other users is one of the many key and driving factors today in our
world. We find ourselves lost for many minutes or possibly hours at a time on any particular app
or website. Looking deeper into the issue of social networking and its impact on our life, I highly
doubt we have accomplished anything at all. A very smart man once said, "Time is money." If
that quote is true do we find ourselves in the twenty first century wasting money on pictures of
people we don't even know and moments we were not a part of? As technology has evolved and
become so apart of our world its effect spread to all ends of the spectrum of every...show more
content...
ProCon.org reports that 59% of students with this access use social networking sites to discuss
educational topics and 50% use the sites to talk about school assignments. After the student leaves
school grounds he or she is still required to complete various assignments or projects. With these
comes many questions or concerns on how the teacher may want a specific item completed, or
even maybe how to even start an assignment. Social networking and the ability to interact with
fellow teachers and students after school hours is crucial to the success of every student. There
truly is not enough time in each school day to cover or complete all work that is necessary. With
Facebook and our friends just a click away we enter in a world of more focused student centered
learning. Those self–driven students will seek our answers and solutions to any work assigned for
outside of the classroom. Collaborating and working with like–minded people will not only benefit
them in the classroom, but also be a crucial skill in the work force of our world. Social Networking
brings along a few negative but controllable aspects. There are countless stories about people of
all ages who have been affected in some way or another by cyber bulling. The Story of Megan Meier
was one that you will never forget. She hung herself in a closet because a certain boy
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Argumentative Essay
Jenna #7
"You may not always have a comfortable life and you will not always be able to solve all of the
world's problems at once but don't ever underestimate the importance you can have because history
has shown us that courage can be contagious and hope can take on a life of its own."– Michelle
Obama (ask about this transition) the Jews constrained in the Warsaw ghetto of Poland definitely did
not experience comfort during 1941–43. During that time, Hitler and his Nazi party had decided that
Germany needed to have a pure blood–line, so that meant getting rid of anyone who didn't meet the
idea of a "perfect person" in the Nazis mind. The standards of removal included being a different
religion, being from a different country, having a disability...show more content...
He recruited more than 750 fighters, but gathered only 9 rifles, 59 pistols and a few hundred
grenades. When he became leader Mordechai was determined to reinvigorate the Z.O.B. and
actively fight back against the Nazis. Sadly, on March 8, 1943 historians believe that Mordechai
Anielewicz committed suicide along with his girlfriend Mira Fuchrer because they probably
thought that killing themselves would be a better option than letting the Nazis capture them. But
he will always be known as a fierce leader who threw himself into the defense activity with all his
effort. The heart and soul of the organization, one of its most devoted workers. As Mordechai said
in his final letter to Ghetto Revolt Commander, "It is impossible to put into words what we have
been through. One thing is clear, what happened exceeded our boldest dreams. With the aid of our
transmitter we heard the marvelous report on our fighting by the "Shavit" radio station. The fact
that we are remembered beyond the ghetto walls encourages us in our struggle. Peace go with you,
my friend! Perhaps we may still meet again! The dream of my life has risen to become fact.
Self–defense in the ghetto will have been a reality. Jewish armed resistance and revenge are facts. I
have been a witness to the magnificent, heroic fighting of Jewish men in battle. –M.
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Argumentative Essays
Failure is the step towards success. Do you agree?
It is often assumed that failure is a deterrent to achievement. Rather, failure should be seen as a
motivator for a person to keep trying until the objective or aim of a particular mission is fulfilled.
Failure often times leads a person to feel helpless, disappointed and depressed. However,one should
not allow this to set them back in trying to achieve the ultimate aim one has set out to do. Failure in
the beginning can often be a powerful incentive to reassess one's position in wanting to achieve the
particular aims; to analyse whether the purpose is worth the trouble the person has to undergo and
the whether the obstacles are surmountable. Practical and...show more content...
Another disadvantage of being an only is that he lacks companionship. He has no brother or sister
to confide in. Growing up as an only child can be very lonely. If you have siblings you will have
to share everything, so you get less; but you also get less of the bad things. Siblings can support
and comfort each in times of trouble. The elder siblings learn to care for the younger ones and the
younger ones learn to respect their elder siblings and have someone to look up to besides their
parents. You are more balanced person than an only child. Another advantage of having siblings is
that your parents' attention is divided among your siblings. As a result, there is less pressure on you
to perform well, be it academically or in other areas. Having siblings also means that you have
companionship, the joy of caring and sharing, and security. I, personally, am happy that I am not an
only child.
Students should not take up part time jobs. Discuss.
Nowadays, students love to have part–time jobs. Their parents approve it easily as they are said to
gain experience from working. However, having a job is a big responsibility for a student. Before,
teenagers at their age were working to help their family because of poverty. Nevertheless, they
were actually eager to study and learn at school for their future. It was not the same as the teenagers
nowadays where they are more likely competing to each other to have a job. Most of the
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Argumentative Reflection
Argumentative Essay Reflection One of my central struggles throughout high school has been
writing essays and reports for all classes not just english. I was a little worried when I signed up to
take this course, since it counted as a college credit. Even though I was worried about taking this
course, but I am thankful that I did. The main reason behind my decision to take this course is
because I thought it would better prepare me for college. This argumentative essay was one of the
hardest essay that I have written. I have never written in this style before this essay. Even though, I
have never been the best writer, I have always got good grades. After receiving my first rough draft I
knew this class was not going to be easy. The part...show more content...
One of the areas of my writing where I was struggling in using my voice. Granite, there were parts
of my essay where I successfully integrated quotes within my voice, but for the most part that was
my weakest area. For example of one of my better integrated quotes, in my third paragraph when I
say, "Today, consumers rely on social media for everything, whether it is communicating with old
friends, finding new friends, shopping, researching, and staying informed with the latest news.
Daniel adds that, "'Americans who take part in political activities on social networking sites also
tend to be highly active in other areas of political or civic life'" (29), which insinuates that people
rely on social media more today than we have in the past". This was one of my better examples
because I further explain and analyze the quote in my voice instead of just ending the sentence
after the quote. One of my poor examples is, "Many people who suffer from depression care a lot
about what others think about them. That is why many of those people tend to turn to social
media as an outlet to express their feelings". I made a bold statement and did not back up what I
said with my voice I just ended that sentence and moved on. Instead of moving on I should have
explained it further and told them why people tend to turn to social media to express their feelings.
One of the areas of my writing where I was
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  • 1. Argumentative Essay Argumentative Essay Braden Rawson Social Networking or the use of specific websites or applications to interact with other users is one of the many key and driving factors today in our world. We find ourselves lost for many minutes or possibly hours at a time on any particular app or website. Looking deeper into the issue of social networking and its impact on our life, I highly doubt we have accomplished anything at all. A very smart man once said, "Time is money." If that quote is true do we find ourselves in the twenty first century wasting money on pictures of people we don't even know and moments we were not a part of? As technology has evolved and become so apart of our world its effect spread to all ends of the spectrum of every...show more content... ProCon.org reports that 59% of students with this access use social networking sites to discuss educational topics and 50% use the sites to talk about school assignments. After the student leaves school grounds he or she is still required to complete various assignments or projects. With these comes many questions or concerns on how the teacher may want a specific item completed, or even maybe how to even start an assignment. Social networking and the ability to interact with fellow teachers and students after school hours is crucial to the success of every student. There truly is not enough time in each school day to cover or complete all work that is necessary. With Facebook and our friends just a click away we enter in a world of more focused student centered learning. Those self–driven students will seek our answers and solutions to any work assigned for outside of the classroom. Collaborating and working with like–minded people will not only benefit them in the classroom, but also be a crucial skill in the work force of our world. Social Networking brings along a few negative but controllable aspects. There are countless stories about people of all ages who have been affected in some way or another by cyber bulling. The Story of Megan Meier was one that you will never forget. She hung herself in a closet because a certain boy Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 2. Argumentative Essay Jenna #7 "You may not always have a comfortable life and you will not always be able to solve all of the world's problems at once but don't ever underestimate the importance you can have because history has shown us that courage can be contagious and hope can take on a life of its own."– Michelle Obama (ask about this transition) the Jews constrained in the Warsaw ghetto of Poland definitely did not experience comfort during 1941–43. During that time, Hitler and his Nazi party had decided that Germany needed to have a pure blood–line, so that meant getting rid of anyone who didn't meet the idea of a "perfect person" in the Nazis mind. The standards of removal included being a different religion, being from a different country, having a disability...show more content... He recruited more than 750 fighters, but gathered only 9 rifles, 59 pistols and a few hundred grenades. When he became leader Mordechai was determined to reinvigorate the Z.O.B. and actively fight back against the Nazis. Sadly, on March 8, 1943 historians believe that Mordechai Anielewicz committed suicide along with his girlfriend Mira Fuchrer because they probably thought that killing themselves would be a better option than letting the Nazis capture them. But he will always be known as a fierce leader who threw himself into the defense activity with all his effort. The heart and soul of the organization, one of its most devoted workers. As Mordechai said in his final letter to Ghetto Revolt Commander, "It is impossible to put into words what we have been through. One thing is clear, what happened exceeded our boldest dreams. With the aid of our transmitter we heard the marvelous report on our fighting by the "Shavit" radio station. The fact that we are remembered beyond the ghetto walls encourages us in our struggle. Peace go with you, my friend! Perhaps we may still meet again! The dream of my life has risen to become fact. Self–defense in the ghetto will have been a reality. Jewish armed resistance and revenge are facts. I have been a witness to the magnificent, heroic fighting of Jewish men in battle. –M. Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 3. Argumentative Essays Failure is the step towards success. Do you agree? It is often assumed that failure is a deterrent to achievement. Rather, failure should be seen as a motivator for a person to keep trying until the objective or aim of a particular mission is fulfilled. Failure often times leads a person to feel helpless, disappointed and depressed. However,one should not allow this to set them back in trying to achieve the ultimate aim one has set out to do. Failure in the beginning can often be a powerful incentive to reassess one's position in wanting to achieve the particular aims; to analyse whether the purpose is worth the trouble the person has to undergo and the whether the obstacles are surmountable. Practical and...show more content... Another disadvantage of being an only is that he lacks companionship. He has no brother or sister to confide in. Growing up as an only child can be very lonely. If you have siblings you will have to share everything, so you get less; but you also get less of the bad things. Siblings can support and comfort each in times of trouble. The elder siblings learn to care for the younger ones and the younger ones learn to respect their elder siblings and have someone to look up to besides their parents. You are more balanced person than an only child. Another advantage of having siblings is that your parents' attention is divided among your siblings. As a result, there is less pressure on you to perform well, be it academically or in other areas. Having siblings also means that you have companionship, the joy of caring and sharing, and security. I, personally, am happy that I am not an only child. Students should not take up part time jobs. Discuss. Nowadays, students love to have part–time jobs. Their parents approve it easily as they are said to gain experience from working. However, having a job is a big responsibility for a student. Before, teenagers at their age were working to help their family because of poverty. Nevertheless, they were actually eager to study and learn at school for their future. It was not the same as the teenagers nowadays where they are more likely competing to each other to have a job. Most of the Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 4. Argumentative Reflection Argumentative Essay Reflection One of my central struggles throughout high school has been writing essays and reports for all classes not just english. I was a little worried when I signed up to take this course, since it counted as a college credit. Even though I was worried about taking this course, but I am thankful that I did. The main reason behind my decision to take this course is because I thought it would better prepare me for college. This argumentative essay was one of the hardest essay that I have written. I have never written in this style before this essay. Even though, I have never been the best writer, I have always got good grades. After receiving my first rough draft I knew this class was not going to be easy. The part...show more content... One of the areas of my writing where I was struggling in using my voice. Granite, there were parts of my essay where I successfully integrated quotes within my voice, but for the most part that was my weakest area. For example of one of my better integrated quotes, in my third paragraph when I say, "Today, consumers rely on social media for everything, whether it is communicating with old friends, finding new friends, shopping, researching, and staying informed with the latest news. Daniel adds that, "'Americans who take part in political activities on social networking sites also tend to be highly active in other areas of political or civic life'" (29), which insinuates that people rely on social media more today than we have in the past". This was one of my better examples because I further explain and analyze the quote in my voice instead of just ending the sentence after the quote. One of my poor examples is, "Many people who suffer from depression care a lot about what others think about them. That is why many of those people tend to turn to social media as an outlet to express their feelings". I made a bold statement and did not back up what I said with my voice I just ended that sentence and moved on. Instead of moving on I should have explained it further and told them why people tend to turn to social media to express their feelings. One of the areas of my writing where I was Get more content on HelpWriting.net