1. Reviewer: Joanna Brookland
Feedback Chart for IU1
Criteria Target Description Comments
Instructional setting described with needed resources listed
The instructional setting is clearly described and accounted for. I like the specifics used in your
including its characteristics, resources, and description. It allows the reader to picture the learning
Learning
constraints. The learning environment environment.
Environment
description differentiates between the
learning context and performance context. Distinguished between the learning and performance
context.
Described the characteristics.
***Is the instructional unit supposed to be “stand alone” or
can it involve a facilitator?
Are there any other characteristics that could be given?
Intended The learner characteristics accurately How many years teaching experience? Do they already
Audience describe the target audience. have classroom websites?
***Your last sentence looks like it describes the learning
environment more than the audience. Maybe re-read it and
see if you agree with me.
***You may need to re-word your overarching goal so that
it reads more like “what the learners will be able to do after
Overarching The overarching goal is well written and
the training has been completed. I think it should be
Instructional clearly states what learners will be able to do
general and then your specific goal incorporates all the
Goal upon completion of the instruction.
tasks needed to complete the overarching one.
The specific goal (sub-goal) is well written ***If you have more tasks in your specific goal you could
and clearly describes the task(s) that will be use bulleting or numbering to show them or break it down
Specific addressed in the proposed 30-minute more.
Goal instructional unit. The goal is stable, ***Your first sentence looks like it can be revised to be
instructional in nature, and is realistic in your overarching goal.
terms of available time and resources.
Explanation of An explanation of the specific goal is It looks like your school is very supportive and excited
goal presented to selected students from the about this training. Good job!
to selected intended audience and their reactions were
target recorded. Feedback from target members was ***Did the member add any other information or give
audience used to modify or support the instructional feedback about the goal and/or training?
members need for the specific goal.
The introduction gave enough background knowledge to
show the learner and audience the purpose and importance
of training about YouTube.
IU #1 effectively addresses the five essential
elements of this assignment, including a
This looks like it will be very beneficial to the staff at your
description of the learning environment,
school. Overall it looks very well organized. I like your
intended audience, overarching goal, specific
Overall quote at the end of your IU1.
goal, and explanation of the goal to members
of the target audience. The paper is free of
*****Please note that my comments are only suggestions
grammatical and spelling errors and includes
or observations that may be very different from yours. I
an introduction and a conclusion/summary.
used Dr. Corbeil’s rubric for this feedback. 