The document outlines the generic conventions, location, positives, and areas for improvement for a thriller opening scene. It will use conventions like a hidden antagonist identity, weapons, and fast pacing. The location chosen is a small, dark rehearsal room to create an unsafe feel. Positives included an engaging storyline, good characters, and a narrative mystery. Further detail, terminology, and specificity on conventions could strengthen the presentation.

1. Generic
The generic conventions
are
Conventions which weare:
going to use in our thriller opening
1.Hidden identity of the antagonist
2.Weapons- gun
3. Narrative enigma - we do not know who
the Hit-man is.
4.Death - antagonist
5. Fast paced editing

2. Location
the location which we are going to use in
this scene is one of the rehearsing rooms
opposite the music room. the reason why
we have chose this location is because it is
nice and small. also it is very dark. this
adds effect as the darkness signifies the
area is not safe.

3. WhatWentWell
we have a good interesting story line which
would grip the audiences attention
A good location
good characters
a good narrative enigma
a twist as we are having the story in the
eyes of the antagonist

4. EvenBetterIf
more detail in the presentation
more terminology written in the
presentation
be more specific in the generic convention
area of the presentation