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Secrets to Essay
Writing in Legal
Studies
Mr Shipp, 2015
“If you fail to plan you plan to fail”
• Question:
• Evaluate the effectiveness of legal responses
achieving just outcomes for Young People
Shipp’s Six Sentence Structure Level 1
1. Topic Sentence
(THEME)
2.Elaboration
Sentence
3. Case Example
Sentence
4. Explain Relevance
Sentence (LAYER)
5. Counter Argument
Sentence (HOOK)
6. Reflect Sentence
(LINK)
EFFECTIVENESS
INNEFFECTIVE
ARGUE BACK TO THE QUESTION AND
REINFORCE
YOUR ARGUMENT INTENT
DONT FORGET
YOUR
EFFECTIVENESS
CRITERIA
Resource
Efficiency Protection/
Recognition
of Rights
Enforceability
Equality
Justice
International
Law
Application
of the Rule
of Law
Accessibility
Meeting
Society’s Needs
Effectiveness Criteria
Responsiveness
of the Law
Shipp’s Essay Structure Level 2
Essay 1 - Structure and Framework of
Paragraphs
15-18 Marks
Essay 2 - Legal Examples (Rubric)
19-20 Marks
Essay 3 - ARGUMENT - Topic/Hook/
Reflect Sentences
21 Magic Mark
Essay 4 - Effectiveness Examples
Layering
22-23 Marks
Essay 5 - Professional Legal Layering 24-25 Marks
Email Essay Tennis
adrian.shipp1@det.nsw.edu.au
YOU
THE ESSAY
MR SHIPP

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