2.  “ I like the idea of the composition; I think
that if flows well.”
 “I really like the contrast between the
colourful image on the bottom and the black
and white image on the top.”
 “ I think that juxtaposing the image of the
girl with the closed eyes with the image of
the girl with open eyes really supports the
title of the album.”
 “The idea reflects the video well- you have
established a really strong sense of band
identity.”

3.  “I like the idea but in terms of execution there
are some areas which need work.”
 “ The bottom image is quite pixelated- you could
do with replacing some colours to fix this- there
are a few really visible blue and red pixels which
makes the image appear grainy”
 “The text used for the album title is too small,
and I don’t think that it matches up well with
the font used for the artist’s name. Try to find a
font more similar to that.”
 “The strip with the flowers is a bit too bright- it
overpowers the text in front of it.”