What about my idea?

1. Obesity is a crucial problem today .It is related to various problems.It causes many diseases ,some of
which are life threatening .So, we need to be aware of this and also need to reduce overweight.From
this thinking ,we have decided to create a website related to this problem.
From customers' initial interview it is understood that there is no website at present that fulfills their
requirements because ,they need specific information and they think the websites are serving only their
particular product's marketing purpose.
So,we have decided to make one website which will be a single platform that provides all necessary
information how to reduce obesity.This will be helpfull for those who are really sufferers of this problem
and who are health connscious.we have named this product-Be Healthy.