This document contains reviews and edits of sample texts on various topics such as toys, floods, careers, language learning, jobs, technology, and weddings. The reviews provide corrections and improvements to the writing with a focus on grammar, punctuation, cohesion and clarity. Many of the suggested edits are minor changes to word choice, punctuation, grammar or phrasing to improve flow and understanding.

2. ‫کالمستان‬ ‫زبان‬ ‫بنیاد‬
Kalaamestan Language Foundation

3. Brainstorming
HowToWrite Introduction

4. Review
‫ف‬.‫م‬
Toys are one of the key factors for playing
by children. Parents and adults should be
careful in selecting the toys for kids
according to their age level. If the toys are
not chosen carefully, it can have bad effects
and make the children less creative.

5. ‫ف‬.‫م‬
Toys are one of the key factors 0f playing for
children.Therefore, parents and adults should
be careful about selecting the toys for kids
according to their age level. If the toys are not
chosen carefully, they will have bad effects and
make --- children less creative.
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6. ‫ه‬.‫ص‬
Floods are an increasing threat to human lives
and ecology. All over the world many flood
events take place each year which have
detrimental economic losses, for example, the
damage to agricultural lands and buildings.
Moreover, fatal losses caused by floods are
tremendous.
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7. ‫ر‬.‫م‬
Today, going to university is an indispensable part of
Iranian lifestyle. it’s quite normal for the Iranian high
school graduates to attend universities after receiving
their High school diploma.The most important
question remaining to be answered is how well the
universities prepare students for their future carrier?
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8. ‫ر‬.‫م‬
Today, going to university is an indispensable part
of Iranian lifestyle. It’s quite normal for Iranian
high school graduates to attend universities after
receiving their high school diploma.Therefore,
the most important question remaining to be
answered is, how well the universities prepare
students for their future career.
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9. ‫ف‬.‫م‬
Learning a new language is so challenging for
everyone.One of the popular languages in the
world is English. People can learn it in different
ways. Some people like to attend the classes,
some of them like to self study or learn online.
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10. ‫ف‬.‫م‬
Learning a new language is so challenging for
everyone.One of the popular languages in the
world is English and people can learn it in
different ways. In order to learn, Some people
like to attend the classes whereas, others prefer
self study or online learning.
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11. ‫ش‬.‫د‬
Learning English is hard, but at the
same time it can be fun. I like to learn
English by watching different videos
and reading educational books.
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12. ‫س‬.‫ا‬
I like to learn English through teaching
English. Learning is my ambition for ever,
from my childhood up to now. One way for
learning English is read books…
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13. ‫س‬.‫ا‬
I like to learn English through teaching -.
Learning has been my ambition for ever,
from my childhood up to now and one way
for learning English is, reading books…
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14. ‫آ‬.‫ر‬
Finding a well-paid job has some advantages.
One of the most important ones is that when you
have a job, you can have a better social life
because there are a lot of people who can be
met.The other benefit is that you can be
independent to make money. Finally, by finding a
well-paid job, people can have more
communication and make money.
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15. ‫آ‬.‫ر‬
Finding a well-paid job has some advantages.
One of the most important ones is that when
you have a job, you can have a better social
life. Because, there are many people who can
be met.The other benefit is, - you can be
independent to make money. Finally, by finding
a well-paid job, people can have more
communication and make money.
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16. ‫ر‬.‫م‬
Modern technology has greatly influenced language
teaching.Today, a lot of teachers and students use
application or social media for learning and teaching.
One of the greatest advances in the use of modern
technology is the use of internet in teaching, that is,
online teaching.
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17. ‫ر‬.‫م‬
Modern technology has greatly influenced
language teaching.Today, many teachers and
students use applications or social media for
learning and teaching. One of the greatest
advances in applying modern technology is the
use of internet in teaching, which is - online
teaching.
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18. ‫م‬.‫ج‬
There are so many ways to improve our
listening abilities for example watching
movies or series in English, making
conversations with native speakers and so
on.To improve our abilities in this field we
have to be patient.
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19. ‫م‬.‫ج‬
There are so many ways to improve our listening
abilities. For instance, watching movies or series
in English, making conversations with native
speakers and so on.To improve our abilities in
this field we have to be patient.
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20. ‫م‬.‫گ‬
A wedding cake should be a beautiful cake,
beautiful enough to remember. Baking chef
should be a master one if she/he isn’t,
he/she will ruine your moment.
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21. ‫م‬.‫گ‬
A wedding cake should be - beautiful ---.
Beautiful enough to remember. Baking chef
should be a master one. If not, they will ruin
your moment.
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22. Brainstorming

23. Today, social networks are useful to
help people have a better life. In
what extent do you agree?
Brainstorming

24. What is your opinion about the role of
governments to reduce air pollution?
Brainstorming

25. Longer life and improvements in the health
of older people suggest that people over
the age of sixty-five can continue to live
actively.What are the reasons?
Brainstorming

26. Introduction

27. Air pollution is an important problem in most
countries and in my opinion, there are some
ways to control it like governments role, by
making some law.
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28. People today can expect to live longer and have
healthier life than people in the past. People
often see retirement as a time for relaxation.
However, many who reach retirement age are
more interested in being active.
Introduction

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