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Editing process
Towards the end of my final product, I changed my double page spread to
more obvious conventions. As I felt it needed to look more secure.

  First product
= The arrows show which forms and conventions I have changed
and manipulated.
 Second, complete product
Mast head is a larger font, rotated slightly and colour has changed from
       yellow to black, and pink
       This looks more professional to my original spread. It stands out much
       more, as it larger however it is positioned dominantly on the left hand
       side as this makes it look bolder

       The text explaining what the cover story is about has been expanded so
       it covers more of the spread. It is also larger and bolder compared to the
       question and answers which gives it more a conventional style compared
       to it all being the same size
        The image which dominates the right hand side of the page is over lapped by
        the text and is blurred into the background which shows that the celebrities
        information is just as important as her appearance

        The darker shade of pink on the older product was too over
        whelming so I used a lighter shade of pink so it gave it a more
        subtle tone, which adds onto the effect of being girly and delicate
        which is what the target audience is attracted to

This process has taught me is that simple conventions change the look.

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Editing process

  • 2. Towards the end of my final product, I changed my double page spread to more obvious conventions. As I felt it needed to look more secure. First product
  • 3. = The arrows show which forms and conventions I have changed and manipulated. Second, complete product
  • 4. Mast head is a larger font, rotated slightly and colour has changed from yellow to black, and pink This looks more professional to my original spread. It stands out much more, as it larger however it is positioned dominantly on the left hand side as this makes it look bolder The text explaining what the cover story is about has been expanded so it covers more of the spread. It is also larger and bolder compared to the question and answers which gives it more a conventional style compared to it all being the same size The image which dominates the right hand side of the page is over lapped by the text and is blurred into the background which shows that the celebrities information is just as important as her appearance The darker shade of pink on the older product was too over whelming so I used a lighter shade of pink so it gave it a more subtle tone, which adds onto the effect of being girly and delicate which is what the target audience is attracted to This process has taught me is that simple conventions change the look.