8-1
Mills
Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
Action Research
Geoffrey E. Mills
Fifth Edition
© 2014, 2011, 2007, 2003, 2000
Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
A Guide for the Teacher Researcher
8-2
Mills
Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
Chapter 8
Writing Up Action Research
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Mills
Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
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Why?
 Clarification: Writing helps us
better understand the story
 Validation as educator
 Empowerment as agent of change
 Generativity: A permanent,
accessible record
 Accomplishment
8-4
Mills
Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
Format and Style
 Format: general pattern of
organization and arrangement
 Style: rules of grammar, spelling,
capitalization, punctuation, and
word processing
8-5
Mills
Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
APA Style Manual
 Publication Manual of the American
Psychological Association
 most widely accepted by colleges,
universities, journals
8-6
Mills
Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
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Writing Rituals
 May be irrational or magical
 writing can only occur between
7am and 12pm
 writing can only be done longhand
using a blue pen and white legal
pad
 the house must be clean before
writing can start
 everything must be in order before
writing can start
8-7
Mills
Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
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Establish a Writing Routine
 Make writing part of your
professional life and responsibility.
8-8
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Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
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Tips for Avoiding Writing
8-9
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Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
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Tips to Help Write
 Write at the same time every day.
 Write your story as though you are
sending an email to a friend.
 Tell a story as you write.
 Write the way you talk.
 Organize your thoughts using an
outline.
 Don’t worry about grammatical
errors in the early stages.
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Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
Tips to Help Write
 Write whatever comes to mind.
 Write boldly, then say it again—better.
 Write, edit, rewrite, re-edit.
 Remember that nobody knows your
work better than you do.
 Edit after you have all your thoughts on
paper.
 Accept that your first draft is not your
last draft.
8-11
Mills
Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
Outline, Action Research
Report
 Area-of-focus statement
 Related literature
 Definition of variables
 Research questions
 Description of intervention or innovation
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Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
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Outline, Action Research
Report
 Data collection
 Data considerations
 Data analysis and interpretation
 Action plan
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Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
Other Structures
 Journals include “Notes for
Contributors”
 Requirements differ depending on
journal
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Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
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Action Research Journals
8-15
Mills
Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
General Guidelines for
Submissions to Journals
 Attend to the context of your
study.
 Use a clear, reader-friendly style.
 Attend to structure and style of
published research.
 Include a brief description of what
you did.
 Write in an honest, open manner.
8-16
Mills
Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
General Guidelines for
Submissions to Journals
 Keep readers’ attention.
 Follow professional format and
style — but also
 Use the structure and writing style
for the specific journal.
8-17
Mills
Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
Digital Research Tools for
the 21st century
 Managing Citations
 RefWorks
 Zotero
 Endnote
8-18
Mills
Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
Self-Assessment
 Organization and use of
conventions
 Area of focus
 Data collection
 Review of literature
 Context
 Writing style
 Action plan
8-19
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Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
Integrating Teaching, Research,
Writing
 Journal-writing time
 “Down time” in school
 Professional development days
 Vacation
 Time dedicated to grant writing
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Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
“How long?”
 For submission to journal
 2,500 to 3,500 words
 For distribution to local colleagues
 brief summary
8-21
Mills
Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
Seeking Feedback
 Questions to promote feedback from
friends and colleagues:
 Does the write-up provide a complete
picture of the research?
 Is the write-up reader-friendly?
 Is the write-up engaging?
 Will someone (besides loved ones) want
to read it?
 Do not expect your friends and
colleagues to do your editing for you.
8-22
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Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
The Title
 Make it memorable.
 Use it to provide a focus for your
writing.
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Action Research: A Guide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e
© 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved.
Concluding Thoughts
 Polish your text.
 Do not hurry.

Mills Chapter 08

  • 1.
    8-1 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Action Research Geoffrey E. Mills Fifth Edition © 2014, 2011, 2007, 2003, 2000 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. A Guide for the Teacher Researcher
  • 2.
    8-2 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Chapter 8 Writing Up Action Research
  • 3.
    8-3 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Why?  Clarification: Writing helps us better understand the story  Validation as educator  Empowerment as agent of change  Generativity: A permanent, accessible record  Accomplishment
  • 4.
    8-4 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Format and Style  Format: general pattern of organization and arrangement  Style: rules of grammar, spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and word processing
  • 5.
    8-5 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. APA Style Manual  Publication Manual of the American Psychological Association  most widely accepted by colleges, universities, journals
  • 6.
    8-6 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Writing Rituals  May be irrational or magical  writing can only occur between 7am and 12pm  writing can only be done longhand using a blue pen and white legal pad  the house must be clean before writing can start  everything must be in order before writing can start
  • 7.
    8-7 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Establish a Writing Routine  Make writing part of your professional life and responsibility.
  • 8.
    8-8 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Tips for Avoiding Writing
  • 9.
    8-9 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Tips to Help Write  Write at the same time every day.  Write your story as though you are sending an email to a friend.  Tell a story as you write.  Write the way you talk.  Organize your thoughts using an outline.  Don’t worry about grammatical errors in the early stages.
  • 10.
    8-10 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Tips to Help Write  Write whatever comes to mind.  Write boldly, then say it again—better.  Write, edit, rewrite, re-edit.  Remember that nobody knows your work better than you do.  Edit after you have all your thoughts on paper.  Accept that your first draft is not your last draft.
  • 11.
    8-11 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Outline, Action Research Report  Area-of-focus statement  Related literature  Definition of variables  Research questions  Description of intervention or innovation
  • 12.
    8-12 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Outline, Action Research Report  Data collection  Data considerations  Data analysis and interpretation  Action plan
  • 13.
    8-13 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Other Structures  Journals include “Notes for Contributors”  Requirements differ depending on journal
  • 14.
    8-14 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Action Research Journals
  • 15.
    8-15 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. General Guidelines for Submissions to Journals  Attend to the context of your study.  Use a clear, reader-friendly style.  Attend to structure and style of published research.  Include a brief description of what you did.  Write in an honest, open manner.
  • 16.
    8-16 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. General Guidelines for Submissions to Journals  Keep readers’ attention.  Follow professional format and style — but also  Use the structure and writing style for the specific journal.
  • 17.
    8-17 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Digital Research Tools for the 21st century  Managing Citations  RefWorks  Zotero  Endnote
  • 18.
    8-18 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Self-Assessment  Organization and use of conventions  Area of focus  Data collection  Review of literature  Context  Writing style  Action plan
  • 19.
    8-19 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Integrating Teaching, Research, Writing  Journal-writing time  “Down time” in school  Professional development days  Vacation  Time dedicated to grant writing
  • 20.
    8-20 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. “How long?”  For submission to journal  2,500 to 3,500 words  For distribution to local colleagues  brief summary
  • 21.
    8-21 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Seeking Feedback  Questions to promote feedback from friends and colleagues:  Does the write-up provide a complete picture of the research?  Is the write-up reader-friendly?  Is the write-up engaging?  Will someone (besides loved ones) want to read it?  Do not expect your friends and colleagues to do your editing for you.
  • 22.
    8-22 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. The Title  Make it memorable.  Use it to provide a focus for your writing.
  • 23.
    8-23 Mills Action Research: AGuide for the Teacher Researcher, 5e © 2014 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Concluding Thoughts  Polish your text.  Do not hurry.