Screenplay which has been tweaked.

1. Hero Film
Written By
Charlie Hall
Based on, if any
PRODUCTION DRAFT
Blue Revised Nov 15, 2013
Long Road Sixth Form College
Phone Number

2. 1
Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013
1.
FADE IN:
2.
EXT. THE SCHOOL CAR PARK - MORNING
Nick stares off towards the school entrance. His heart is
beating fast and he is shaking slightly. His Mother is
beside him and waves him off for his first day at College.
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NICK
Jesus Mum, I can't go in there, I
won't know anyone. Please don't
make me.
MOTHER
Do you want to have a good job Son?
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NICK
Of course I want a good job but I
don't know anybody and I won't fit
in. I really don't want to start
here.
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MOTHER
You will be fine, now off you go!
3.
INT. THE SCHOOL ENTARANCE
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The camera is above Nick and is looking down on him looking
around the place. He is hot and is still nervous.
STAFF MEMBER
Hi there, do you know where you are
supposed to be?
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NICK
No, i don't have a clue.
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Nick hands over his paperwork.
STAFF MEMBER
Everything seems to look fine. But
you are in the wrong place.
NICK
Thanks, where do I go from here?
STAFF MEMBER
You take the next door on your left
and you will see someone in there
and they will take you to your
tutor.
4.
INT. THE CLASSROOM
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3. 1A
Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013
Nick is standing in the doorway with his papers out. The
teacher invites him into the room. The camera is at the back
Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013

4. 2
of the room looking to Nick at the door.
TEACHER
Hello ... You must be Nick?
NICK
Yes I am.
The teacher has a power to float. She floats over to the
doorway where Nick is.
TEACHER
Come on in, were showing the class
eachothers special powers.
NICK
I don't have a 'special power'
miss.
Nick shrugs his shoulders.
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5. 3
1
Spelling mistakes corrected.
Charlie Hall Nov 15, 2013 1:42 PM
2
Ben thinks that the correct word to use is levatate.
Charlie Hall Nov 15, 2013 1:37 PM
3
The super powers may have been introduced too early.
Charlie Hall Nov 15, 2013 1:38 PM