Submit Peer Review Exercise #2
1. What is the primary idea of the content in the document?
By ripping a DVD from the disc onto your computer, you can enjoy the video on a
display with computer programs such as media players.
Also, you can burn the video file straight to disc by using some software.
In this article, the way of ripping and copying the DVD is explained.
2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent
the idea that was communicated.Explain the reasons behind your comments.
I think headings clearly represent the idea but sections don't it.
It is because heading is written what to do from now but section isn't done it.
The sections are written only what to do now and aren't written what we are doing.
In the sections, I think, insert subtitles that handling for what now.
3. What details are included in the document?
This document is written about how to use duplicate DVD movies with much software
like DVD Decrypter. Most of the contents are manual for light user to copy our movies.
The content is that what is needed to copy and how to use mode of each buttons.
Also, it is written in how to start and how to step.
4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?
This article is easy to understand, but there is one confusing thing. It is that there are
An illustration that shows us what to do is help us to understand what an article
So, illustration should be attached to article, especially like this, an educational
article that explains a way to do something.
Only letters, articles sometimes become confusing for us.
5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?
It was not sure which tools because there are the names of tools to use in this article.
And, I was able to carry it out smoothly without confusing a procedure because each
step was explained very carefully.
In addition, it was easy to read because each sentences are briefly.
6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
I think there aren't errors about sentence.
But, this page should use the screenshot of software.
This page explain only sentence how to use the software.
So, if this page posts the screenshots, I think we easily know what each sentences
Also, I think line break should be inserted for legibly.
7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?
This article is enough easy to understand, but there are only many letters and no
I think it is sometimes a little confusing for us, so if there was some illustrations to
show what to do, this article would be easier to understand.
For example, "Step 2" in Easy DVD Clone section is a little confusing and should
explain with some illustrations
8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar
document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).
Our way to explain how to copy is simple. Different thing have three points.
First we list up software what we need to copy DVD.
1. DVD Decrypter
2. DVD Shrink
3. DVD-Burning Software
4. Easy DVD Clone
Second, step is simpler which one line start to finish.
Third, to paste picture therefore it may become friendly website.