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1. Basics of public SpeakingThe basic do and don'ts of public speaking By Jamie Partin

3. The speaker just started talking about the topic didn’t draw in the audience attention.

4. It is clear that the speaker has no knowledge of the topic. As she states “My mom told me they are bad”.

6. The speaker should adapt herself to her audience, she did not do this with her choice of clothes, behaviors or language, she came across as unprofessional.

8. A narrative is ok to use but only if it has purpose, her narrative about her dog had no point in the speech.

9. To go from point to point you should use some sort of transition so the flow of the speech is not disrupted, she just stopped one topic and went into the next with no connection.

11. Speaker mentions blogs as a source which are not credible sources of information

12. She uses pauses but they are to long and seem to be unplanned.

14. Throughout the speech the speaker is using a manuscript mode of delivery, she looks at her notes the whole, does not make eye contact with the audience, dose not engage audience participation as she ignores questions.

15. The speaker dose not have a conclusion audiences don’t know what she wanted them to get out of the speech.