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Response to Rough Cut Feedback<br />We used the responses found from presenting the rough cut to an audience so that we could make improvements to the final cut that we either had not noticed or needed to be reinforced as a problem that needs fixing. Following the responses we aimed to do these action points to improve our opening sequence:<br />,[object Object]

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Response to rough cut feedback

  • 1.
  • 2. Added titles to the sequence that were missing previously.
  • 3. We also added more efficient fading to the film, to allow more elliptical editing indications.
  • 4. A voiceover for the bar scene to make the shot more believable and less bare.
  • 5. The sound throughout the whole sequence to be more continuous and levels to be more adjusted to each scene.
  • 6. Addition of ambient sound in the likes of the bar scene. Even after adding these additions to the sequence we used the feedback given to expand on what we already wanted to change and highlight areas that we may have not noticed before.<br />