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BAD POINTS
The editing throughout the music video wasn’t clear; editing
was black, white and blurry which wasn’t clear. At some
parts couldn’t see her face.
The slow motion effect that was used wasn’t timed properly
and it was too slow for the song.
the locations used In the video wasn’t relevant to the song;
the location didn’t change and wasn’t clear enough for the
viewer to know where it was located.
She was mostly standing still and lip syncing throughout the
music video which made the music video boring to watch.
The members acting skills wasn’t enjoyable to watch.
GOOD POINTS
Most of the time her lip syncing was proficient
throughout her music video; it looked like she sang the
song.
Her facial expressions and body language were good.
The editing at some parts in the music video were
superior; her fading, shot types and angles were skilled.
IMPROVEMENTS
The editing could have been better; the black, white and
blurry editing used in the music video wasn’t clear. If the
blurry effect wasn’t in the music video it would have
improved.
The slow motion timing could have been earlier to make it
look on time with the song.
The movement of the girl lip syncing was poor; she could
of used hand gestures and look more involved with the
song.
The actor in the music video was awful; she could of
shown her emotions to make it more realistic.

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16 at war

  • 2. BAD POINTS The editing throughout the music video wasn’t clear; editing was black, white and blurry which wasn’t clear. At some parts couldn’t see her face. The slow motion effect that was used wasn’t timed properly and it was too slow for the song. the locations used In the video wasn’t relevant to the song; the location didn’t change and wasn’t clear enough for the viewer to know where it was located. She was mostly standing still and lip syncing throughout the music video which made the music video boring to watch. The members acting skills wasn’t enjoyable to watch.
  • 3. GOOD POINTS Most of the time her lip syncing was proficient throughout her music video; it looked like she sang the song. Her facial expressions and body language were good. The editing at some parts in the music video were superior; her fading, shot types and angles were skilled.
  • 4. IMPROVEMENTS The editing could have been better; the black, white and blurry editing used in the music video wasn’t clear. If the blurry effect wasn’t in the music video it would have improved. The slow motion timing could have been earlier to make it look on time with the song. The movement of the girl lip syncing was poor; she could of used hand gestures and look more involved with the song. The actor in the music video was awful; she could of shown her emotions to make it more realistic.