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Writing 2

    IECP
  Fall 2012
Nikki Mattson
Agenda
Descriptive writing activity
Peer editing – descriptive writing
Editing sentences – run ons and comma
splices
TOEFL Writing Prompts
Descriptive Writing Activity
Draw a picture of the description that
you hear.
Peer Editing
Complete the checklist about your
partner’s paragraph.
Give your partner suggestions about
how to improve his/her paper.
Editing
Paragraph vs. Essay (pg. 147)
Paragraph               Essay
  Topic Sentence          Introduction
  Supporting Point 1      Thesis
  Examples                Paragraph 1 (Topic Sentence)
  Supporting Point 2      Paragraph 2 (Topic Sentence)
  Examples                Paragraph 3 (Topic Sentence)
  Supporting Point 3      Conclusion
  Examples
  Concluding Sentence
TOEFL Prewriting
Topic Sentence
3 Supporting Sentences
Example:




Thesis Statement: I believe that most people attend college in order
to gain a better job, expand their knowledge, and to meet society's
expectations.

Topic Sentence: The first reason that people attend college is to get a
better job than what a high school education affords.
Topic Sentence: Individuals also attend college in order to broaden
their worldview.
Topic Sentence: Finally, people attend college because that is what
they think they are supposed to do.
TOEFL Outlines
Choose 3 TOEFL questions. Write a
thesis statement and 3 topic sentences
for each question that you chose. (12
sentences)
HW
Type your TOEFL outlines + bring them
to class next time.

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D ay 10

  • 1. Writing 2 IECP Fall 2012 Nikki Mattson
  • 2. Agenda Descriptive writing activity Peer editing – descriptive writing Editing sentences – run ons and comma splices TOEFL Writing Prompts
  • 3. Descriptive Writing Activity Draw a picture of the description that you hear.
  • 4. Peer Editing Complete the checklist about your partner’s paragraph. Give your partner suggestions about how to improve his/her paper.
  • 6.
  • 7.
  • 8. Paragraph vs. Essay (pg. 147) Paragraph Essay Topic Sentence Introduction Supporting Point 1 Thesis Examples Paragraph 1 (Topic Sentence) Supporting Point 2 Paragraph 2 (Topic Sentence) Examples Paragraph 3 (Topic Sentence) Supporting Point 3 Conclusion Examples Concluding Sentence
  • 9. TOEFL Prewriting Topic Sentence 3 Supporting Sentences Example: Thesis Statement: I believe that most people attend college in order to gain a better job, expand their knowledge, and to meet society's expectations. Topic Sentence: The first reason that people attend college is to get a better job than what a high school education affords. Topic Sentence: Individuals also attend college in order to broaden their worldview. Topic Sentence: Finally, people attend college because that is what they think they are supposed to do.
  • 10. TOEFL Outlines Choose 3 TOEFL questions. Write a thesis statement and 3 topic sentences for each question that you chose. (12 sentences)
  • 11.
  • 12. HW Type your TOEFL outlines + bring them to class next time.