Response in 1-3 paragraphs, relevent,  on topic, professionally written in college level dialog Respond to these remarks, in 1-3 paragraphs with relevant college level content professionally written remaining on topic. I do believe that capitalism is natural because beginning in the early times such as the biblical days, bartering was prevalent and there was trade for one item for another. For example, bartering began in the agrarian atmosphere where trading items such as barley for livestock or needs for a particular material or service was prevalent. As the banking world was created, the accurate account for equal trading of materials and goods was established. As time passed by, gold and silver became the standard bearer of trade and is (still) the common denominator when it comes to the value of trade and commerce:  "The use of money (minted coins) began in Palestine when the Persians ruled the land (530-330 B.C.). Gold darics, silver shekels, and minas were used to buy and sell things (Neh 5.15). Coins circulated from many different places. Even the Persian province of Judea was given permission to make its own silver coins. After the Jewish people won their independence under the Maccabees (164 B.C.), they again made their own coins.”1 As the above passage clearly states the aspect of capitalism has been around a long time.  As far as Marx’s opinion of capitalism’s political aspect, there are larger than life individuals who own more than the “the little man” and hold more weight in the world economic and political arena, but there are also millions of individuals on the smaller scale who independently own their own businesses.  With the rise of technology and shortage of satisfying jobs in the workplace, many individuals are creating and using apps such as UBER, LYFT and GRUBHUB, which encourage various people to explore their minds and become entrepreneurs.  The survival curve in the United States is gradually changing from working for someone to becoming an independent business owner who can control his or her hours during the day and can dictate how much money they will make daily without the set rate of income dictated by another business owner.  The strong dynamic of America is that through immigration and creation of authentic and diverse businesses, it makes our country more economically viable relative to the world because of the showcase of attractive and essential goods for lucrative trade.  I believe Capitalism will not transform to Socialism in America because it will hinder the use of our diversity and talent provided via our melting pot of our nation. .

1. Response in 1-3 paragraphs, relevent, on topic, professionally
written in college level dialog
Respond to these remarks, in 1-3 paragraphs with relevant
college level content professionally written remaining on topic.
I do believe that capitalism is natural because beginning in the
early times such as the biblical days, bartering was prevalent
and there was trade for one item for another. For example,
bartering began in the agrarian atmosphere where trading items
such as barley for livestock or needs for a particular material or
service was prevalent. As the banking world was created, the
accurate account for equal trading of materials and goods was
established. As time passed by, gold and silver became the
standard bearer of trade and is (still) the common denominator
when it comes to the value of trade and commerce: "The use of
money (minted coins) began in Palestine when the Persians
ruled the land (530-330 B.C.). Gold darics, silver shekels, and
minas were used to buy and sell things (Neh 5.15). Coins
circulated from many different places. Even the Persian
province of Judea was given permission to make its own silver
coins. After the Jewish people won their independence under the
Maccabees (164 B.C.), they again made their own coins.”1 As
the above passage clearly states the aspect of capitalism has
been around a long time.
As far as Marx’s opinion of capitalism’s political aspect, there
are larger than life individuals who own more than the “the
little man” and hold more weight in the world economic and
political arena, but there are also millions of individuals on the
smaller scale who independently own their own businesses.
With the rise of technology and shortage of satisfying jobs

2. in the workplace, many individuals are creating and using apps
such as UBER, LYFT and GRUBHUB, which encourage various
people to explore their minds and become entrepreneurs. The
survival curve in the United States is gradually changing from
working for someone to becoming an independent business
owner who can control his or her hours during the day and can
dictate how much money they will make daily without the set
rate of income dictated by another business owner. The strong
dynamic of America is that through immigration and creation of
authentic and diverse businesses, it makes our country more
economically viable relative to the world because of the
showcase of attractive and essential goods for lucrative trade. I
believe Capitalism will not transform to Socialism in America
because it will hinder the use of our diversity and talent
provided via our melting pot of our nation.