The document provides feedback on a student's GCSE photography coursework tasks. For one task, the teacher praises the student's sense of discovery but notes they would have liked to see more close-up images. For another task, the teacher likes the mix of black and white and color photos and the framing, and finds the analysis of exhibitions to be excellent. Overall the work shows understanding, but gaps need to be filled in and ideas further developed. Further feedback addresses experimenting with melting plastic, suggested artists to research, reworking light painting and close-up photos, and moving landscape photos together.