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Joshua Mohr
You and You:
How to Access
the Two "I's" of
Memoir Writing
The Danger Draft
š Draft one is just for you
š Pull no punches
š Contemplate the "Mom Factor" in
future drafts
š Veto Power
Conflict
š What a character wants
š What are the obstacles in her path
š And how does that relate to POV?
š Defining the Retrospective Narrator
š Defining the "I' in the action
The Two “I’s”
Fight with Yourself
š Dissonance & Complication
š Character Realignment
š A concrete example from SIRENS
Asset vs. Liability
š How to use retrospective narrator effectively
š Keep up pace, keep readability factor high
š A cohesive whole doesn't mean enlightenment
š Write your story in your nuanced way
š It's not The What of the story. It's the HOW
š Write for your target audience
Your Imagination Is as
Unique as Your Fingerprint
Q&A

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You and You: How to Access the Two "I's" of Memoir Writing, with Joshua Mohr

  • 1. Joshua Mohr You and You: How to Access the Two "I's" of Memoir Writing
  • 2. The Danger Draft š Draft one is just for you š Pull no punches š Contemplate the "Mom Factor" in future drafts š Veto Power
  • 3. Conflict š What a character wants š What are the obstacles in her path š And how does that relate to POV?
  • 4. š Defining the Retrospective Narrator š Defining the "I' in the action The Two “I’s”
  • 5. Fight with Yourself š Dissonance & Complication š Character Realignment š A concrete example from SIRENS
  • 6. Asset vs. Liability š How to use retrospective narrator effectively š Keep up pace, keep readability factor high š A cohesive whole doesn't mean enlightenment
  • 7. š Write your story in your nuanced way š It's not The What of the story. It's the HOW š Write for your target audience Your Imagination Is as Unique as Your Fingerprint
  • 8. Q&A