Writing and the Common Core
       State Standards
                       Esther Wojcicki
     Founder, Palo Alto High School Journalism Program
California State Teacher Credentialing Commission Teacher of
                      the Year in 2002.
Discussion topics today

•   What are the Common Core State Standards in
    Writing and Language Arts?

•   The challenge: including non-fiction in the
    classroom

•   How to meet the State Standards
•   requirements in your classroom

•   Examples from the real world
Education yesterday
Not much has changed in 100 years


•   Little or no project based learning
•   Lots of worksheets—now online
•   Little student control of learning
•   Collaboration is seen as cheating

      • CHANGE IS IN THE COMMON CORE STATE
                     STANDARDS
What should school today look
           like ?
  CREATIVE, INNOVATIVE, EXCITING,
         COLLABORATIVE
Differentiated instruction
Share their work online
Collaborative classroom
Give them control
Encourage collaboration
Encourage creativity
Lots of creativity
Teach kids to share
CREATIVE COMMONS
Teach them to SEARCH
Let them work in groups
students
Work collaboratively
Not afraid to take risks
Teacher as COACH
Project based learning
Teach   by respecting them
Is it happening today??
Probably not in a school near you



        80% of teachers
       LECTURE full-time
Classroom 2013
Another classroom 2013
Schools today discourage creativity

          • TESTS, TESTS, TESTS
     • STANDARDIZED CURRICULUM
         • SCRIPTED EDUCATION
             • WORKSHEETS
All kids have tremendous capacity for
               innovation

   We educate innovation and creativity out
       of them with all the testing and
            controlled curriculum
We are educating kids for a future that
          we don’t know


      We need to teach them to think,
     to find information for themselves.
        not to memorize useless facts
How do you get creativity into the
            schools?


Add project based learning into
   the scripted curriculum
Make school RELEVANT



Let them explore and write
     about their world
WHY JOURNALISM?

             Journalism is the
most effective and authentic project based
                  learning
              for all students

                  WHY?
                 It’s real
Why Journalism?


• It ties directly to the Common Core
  State Standards

• The Common Core State Standards
  can help change the classroom
CCSS---Key Design Consideration

  Research and media skills blended into the Standards as a
                           whole
....students need the ability to gather, comprehend, evaluate,
synthesize, and report on information and ideas, to conduct
original research in order to answer questions or solve
problems, and to analyze and create a high volume and
extensive range of print and nonprint texts in media forms old
and new. The need to conduct research and to produce and
consume media is embedded into every aspect of today’s
curriculum...
WRITING STANDARD



CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.3.10 Write routinely over
  extended time frames (time for research,
  reflection, and revision) and shorter time
  frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a
  range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes,
  and audiences.
Journalism is research,
         primary research

 It provides….the ability to gather,
comprehend, evaluate, synthesize,
   and report on information and
      ideas, to conduct original
              research….
WRITING STANDARD



 CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.1.7 Participate in shared
 research and writing projects …
Come up with a story idea


         Pay attention to
        what is happening
    in the world around you
ability to gather information...


          How to Search
           intelligently
           on the web
SEARCH EDUCATION--GOOGLE
LESSON PLANS & ACTIVITIES
POWER SEARCHING
A GOOGLE A DAY CHALLENGE
LIVE TRAININGS
JOURNALISM MEANS INTERVIEWING


Students need to know how to interview, how to
  ask good questions, how to do primary
  research. Students learn by doing…(John
  Dewey)
WRITING STANDARD



 CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.3.3 Write narratives to
 develop real or imagined experiences or events
 using effective technique, descriptive details,
 and clear event sequences.
Example: PERSONALITY FEATURE


  At the beginning of the school year, have
  students interview each other and write a
 personality feature (profile) about each other
The NY Times Learning Network has
   100s of resources supporting
     the teaching of journalism
NY Times Learning Network
Writing a Personality Feature
Personality   Seventh grade was when it all started. The
feature       song “Careless Whisper,” by George Michael,
              hooked Orion into the musical world, and kept
lead by 9th   him there. With its catchy melody by his side,
              Orion was able to excel at alto saxophone, and
grader        find a supportive group of friends that share
              similar interests as him.

              “It’s the song that got me into music.” Orion
              says, when referring to “Careless Whisper”. He
              and his friends have been playing that song for
              several years now, and it still holds a special
              meaning for them. Orion described how he
              and his five other band friends played Careless
              Whisper after band practice one day. “We
              played it over and over,” he said. “We even got
              some of the teachers to come out and dance!
              Our friends came out and walked with us and
              they talked, and we just kept playing.”
Other people to interview
• Adminstrators
• Teachers
• Student leaders
• Parents
• Grandparents
• Community members
• Business people
JOURNALISM MEANS PUBLISHING


Top Three and Free ways to publish


                Blogger
               WordPress
                Tumblr
PUBLISH FREE ON GOOGLE SITES
C MAGAZINE (Palo Alto High)
PRINT WITH APRINTIS.COM
JOURNALISM is Opinion Writing.
           It ties to CCSS


• All kids are opinionated starting at birth…by
  the time they are in elementary school they
  want to run the show.

• Give them an opportunity to write about
  something they care about and be
  independent
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.1.1 Write opinion pieces in
  which they introduce the topic or name the
  book they are writing about, state an opinion,
  supply a reason for the opinion, and provide
  some sense of closure
MY THREE DAUGHTERS—MY FIRST
  CLASS—VERY SELF DIRECTED
PARENTS ARE A CHILD’S FIRST
              TEACHERS

• They are also the most influential of all the
  teachers.
• Parents are part of the educational team
MY PHILOSOPY WITH MY CHILDREN


  • Trust
  • Respect
  • Independence
  • Collaboration
  • Kindness
WORKS IN THE CLASSROOM,
            TIES INTO CCSS
• It empowers students
• Fosters collaboration
• Helps teachers implement the project based
  CCSS curriculum
• Motivates students
• Makes kids feel valued
857 students
drop out every
     hour
Reasons for dropping out

• School not relevant to real world
   • Feel disconnected to school
        • Difficult home life
         • Economic issues
Help them feel connected
• Give them a chance to express their ideas
  (OPINION WRITING)
• Let them work together in groups (MORE FUN
  TO WORK WITH YOUR FRIENDS)
• Have them write everyday about what is
  important to them (or react to what is going
  on in the world) (USE GOOGLE DOCS TO
  SHARE)
EXAMPLES OF STUDENT OPINION
            WRITING

• STUDENTS CAN WRITE ABOUT
  – Local issues
  – Family issues
  – School issues
  – International issues
  – Class issues
  – So many topics
WRITING STANDARD



CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.1.2 Write
  informative/explanatory texts in which they
  name a topic, supply some facts about the
  topic, and provide some sense of closure.



      NEWS WRITING
              Ties to the CCSS
WRITING STANDARD



 CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.4.8 Recall relevant
 information from experiences or gather
 relevant information from print and digital
 sources; take notes and categorize information,
 and provide a list of sources.
NEWS WRITING
What is News Writing?


•   Collecting information and or data
•   Distinguishing fact from opinion
•   Evaluating sources
•   Evaluating information
•   Writing it up in the inverted pyramid
    format, most important to least
    important
You don’t need a dedicated
          journalism program


• Opinion writing can be done in an English
  class, a social studies class, a science class

• Easiest classes to integrate journalism into is
  5th through 9th grade English classes
Book Reviews instead of
           Book Reports


Have students read professional book reviews
• Ask them to support their opinions about the
  book with examples and quotes
• You can still ask them to evaluate plots,
  characterization, theme....
• Have students peer edit using Google Docs
• Publish the reviews in a blog online
WRITING STANDARD



 CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.1.5 … focus on a topic,
 respond to questions and suggestions from
 peers, and add details to strengthen writing as
 needed.
WRITING STANDARD



 CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.1.6 …..use a variety of
 digital tools to produce and publish writing,
 including in collaboration with peers
PEER EDITING
PEER EDITING
Everything turned in online & shared
From: Key Design Consideration

Standards for 6–12 ELA requires much greater
  attention to a specific category of
  informational text—literary nonfiction—than
  has been traditional.
Key Design Consideration--CCSS
Students need to be proficient in reading
  complex informational text independently in a
  variety of content areas.
Have kids read the news everyday
• EXAMPLES
  – New York Times
  – Local newspapers
  – Time Magazine
  – Atlantic Monthly
  – HuffingtonPost
  – Many more….
TED PRIZE 2013—Sugara Mitra
HAPARA
Kids are not afraid of making mistakes


  But through schooling we
  stigmatize mistakes
  By the time they graduate they are
  good at memorizing but not
  thinking
Promote learning with badges
WHY ???
• Why don’t schools change??

• 1. Schools of education have not changed
• 2. Teachers teach the way they were taught
• 3. Teachers are reluctant to give up any
  control to students
• 4. Teachers are given scripted curriculum
Everyone is interested in education

Let’s see if we can make a difference in getting
                       kids
            engaged (not threatened)
                 in their learning

   Let’s see if we can implement the CCSS
Videos to watch
SEARCH
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=v9yZco8bwI8

The power of Docs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=TYPjJK6LZdM


Video at the end
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g9PvlEWAr5I

Writing and the common core

  • 1.
    Writing and theCommon Core State Standards Esther Wojcicki Founder, Palo Alto High School Journalism Program California State Teacher Credentialing Commission Teacher of the Year in 2002.
  • 2.
    Discussion topics today • What are the Common Core State Standards in Writing and Language Arts? • The challenge: including non-fiction in the classroom • How to meet the State Standards • requirements in your classroom • Examples from the real world
  • 3.
  • 4.
    Not much haschanged in 100 years • Little or no project based learning • Lots of worksheets—now online • Little student control of learning • Collaboration is seen as cheating • CHANGE IS IN THE COMMON CORE STATE STANDARDS
  • 5.
    What should schooltoday look like ? CREATIVE, INNOVATIVE, EXCITING, COLLABORATIVE
  • 6.
  • 7.
  • 8.
  • 9.
  • 10.
  • 11.
  • 12.
  • 13.
    Teach kids toshare CREATIVE COMMONS
  • 14.
  • 15.
    Let them workin groups
  • 16.
  • 17.
  • 18.
    Not afraid totake risks
  • 19.
  • 20.
  • 21.
    Teach by respecting them
  • 22.
  • 23.
    Probably not ina school near you 80% of teachers LECTURE full-time
  • 24.
  • 25.
  • 26.
    Schools today discouragecreativity • TESTS, TESTS, TESTS • STANDARDIZED CURRICULUM • SCRIPTED EDUCATION • WORKSHEETS
  • 27.
    All kids havetremendous capacity for innovation We educate innovation and creativity out of them with all the testing and controlled curriculum
  • 28.
    We are educatingkids for a future that we don’t know We need to teach them to think, to find information for themselves. not to memorize useless facts
  • 29.
    How do youget creativity into the schools? Add project based learning into the scripted curriculum
  • 30.
    Make school RELEVANT Letthem explore and write about their world
  • 31.
    WHY JOURNALISM? Journalism is the most effective and authentic project based learning for all students WHY? It’s real
  • 32.
    Why Journalism? • Itties directly to the Common Core State Standards • The Common Core State Standards can help change the classroom
  • 33.
    CCSS---Key Design Consideration Research and media skills blended into the Standards as a whole ....students need the ability to gather, comprehend, evaluate, synthesize, and report on information and ideas, to conduct original research in order to answer questions or solve problems, and to analyze and create a high volume and extensive range of print and nonprint texts in media forms old and new. The need to conduct research and to produce and consume media is embedded into every aspect of today’s curriculum...
  • 34.
    WRITING STANDARD CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.3.10 Writeroutinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences.
  • 35.
    Journalism is research, primary research It provides….the ability to gather, comprehend, evaluate, synthesize, and report on information and ideas, to conduct original research….
  • 36.
    WRITING STANDARD CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.1.7Participate in shared research and writing projects …
  • 37.
    Come up witha story idea Pay attention to what is happening in the world around you
  • 38.
    ability to gatherinformation... How to Search intelligently on the web
  • 39.
  • 40.
    LESSON PLANS &ACTIVITIES
  • 41.
  • 42.
    A GOOGLE ADAY CHALLENGE
  • 43.
  • 44.
    JOURNALISM MEANS INTERVIEWING Studentsneed to know how to interview, how to ask good questions, how to do primary research. Students learn by doing…(John Dewey)
  • 45.
    WRITING STANDARD CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.3.3Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences.
  • 46.
    Example: PERSONALITY FEATURE At the beginning of the school year, have students interview each other and write a personality feature (profile) about each other
  • 47.
    The NY TimesLearning Network has 100s of resources supporting the teaching of journalism
  • 49.
  • 50.
  • 51.
    Personality Seventh grade was when it all started. The feature song “Careless Whisper,” by George Michael, hooked Orion into the musical world, and kept lead by 9th him there. With its catchy melody by his side, Orion was able to excel at alto saxophone, and grader find a supportive group of friends that share similar interests as him. “It’s the song that got me into music.” Orion says, when referring to “Careless Whisper”. He and his friends have been playing that song for several years now, and it still holds a special meaning for them. Orion described how he and his five other band friends played Careless Whisper after band practice one day. “We played it over and over,” he said. “We even got some of the teachers to come out and dance! Our friends came out and walked with us and they talked, and we just kept playing.”
  • 52.
    Other people tointerview • Adminstrators • Teachers • Student leaders • Parents • Grandparents • Community members • Business people
  • 53.
    JOURNALISM MEANS PUBLISHING TopThree and Free ways to publish Blogger WordPress Tumblr
  • 54.
    PUBLISH FREE ONGOOGLE SITES
  • 57.
    C MAGAZINE (PaloAlto High)
  • 58.
  • 59.
    JOURNALISM is OpinionWriting. It ties to CCSS • All kids are opinionated starting at birth…by the time they are in elementary school they want to run the show. • Give them an opportunity to write about something they care about and be independent
  • 60.
    CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.1.1 Write opinionpieces in which they introduce the topic or name the book they are writing about, state an opinion, supply a reason for the opinion, and provide some sense of closure
  • 61.
    MY THREE DAUGHTERS—MYFIRST CLASS—VERY SELF DIRECTED
  • 62.
    PARENTS ARE ACHILD’S FIRST TEACHERS • They are also the most influential of all the teachers. • Parents are part of the educational team
  • 63.
    MY PHILOSOPY WITHMY CHILDREN • Trust • Respect • Independence • Collaboration • Kindness
  • 64.
    WORKS IN THECLASSROOM, TIES INTO CCSS • It empowers students • Fosters collaboration • Helps teachers implement the project based CCSS curriculum • Motivates students • Makes kids feel valued
  • 65.
  • 66.
    Reasons for droppingout • School not relevant to real world • Feel disconnected to school • Difficult home life • Economic issues
  • 67.
    Help them feelconnected • Give them a chance to express their ideas (OPINION WRITING) • Let them work together in groups (MORE FUN TO WORK WITH YOUR FRIENDS) • Have them write everyday about what is important to them (or react to what is going on in the world) (USE GOOGLE DOCS TO SHARE)
  • 68.
    EXAMPLES OF STUDENTOPINION WRITING • STUDENTS CAN WRITE ABOUT – Local issues – Family issues – School issues – International issues – Class issues – So many topics
  • 72.
    WRITING STANDARD CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.1.2 Write informative/explanatory texts in which they name a topic, supply some facts about the topic, and provide some sense of closure. NEWS WRITING Ties to the CCSS
  • 73.
    WRITING STANDARD CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.4.8Recall relevant information from experiences or gather relevant information from print and digital sources; take notes and categorize information, and provide a list of sources.
  • 74.
    NEWS WRITING What isNews Writing? • Collecting information and or data • Distinguishing fact from opinion • Evaluating sources • Evaluating information • Writing it up in the inverted pyramid format, most important to least important
  • 77.
    You don’t needa dedicated journalism program • Opinion writing can be done in an English class, a social studies class, a science class • Easiest classes to integrate journalism into is 5th through 9th grade English classes
  • 78.
    Book Reviews insteadof Book Reports Have students read professional book reviews • Ask them to support their opinions about the book with examples and quotes • You can still ask them to evaluate plots, characterization, theme.... • Have students peer edit using Google Docs • Publish the reviews in a blog online
  • 79.
    WRITING STANDARD CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.1.5… focus on a topic, respond to questions and suggestions from peers, and add details to strengthen writing as needed.
  • 80.
    WRITING STANDARD CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.1.6…..use a variety of digital tools to produce and publish writing, including in collaboration with peers
  • 81.
  • 82.
  • 83.
    Everything turned inonline & shared
  • 84.
    From: Key DesignConsideration Standards for 6–12 ELA requires much greater attention to a specific category of informational text—literary nonfiction—than has been traditional.
  • 85.
    Key Design Consideration--CCSS Studentsneed to be proficient in reading complex informational text independently in a variety of content areas.
  • 86.
    Have kids readthe news everyday • EXAMPLES – New York Times – Local newspapers – Time Magazine – Atlantic Monthly – HuffingtonPost – Many more….
  • 88.
  • 90.
  • 91.
    Kids are notafraid of making mistakes But through schooling we stigmatize mistakes By the time they graduate they are good at memorizing but not thinking
  • 93.
  • 102.
    WHY ??? • Whydon’t schools change?? • 1. Schools of education have not changed • 2. Teachers teach the way they were taught • 3. Teachers are reluctant to give up any control to students • 4. Teachers are given scripted curriculum
  • 103.
    Everyone is interestedin education Let’s see if we can make a difference in getting kids engaged (not threatened) in their learning Let’s see if we can implement the CCSS
  • 104.
    Videos to watch SEARCH http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=v9yZco8bwI8 Thepower of Docs http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=TYPjJK6LZdM Video at the end http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g9PvlEWAr5I