Analysis on the write-ups of crowdfunding projects

1. Write Up Analysis Tanner Behrens

2. 3.) EV-1000 evaLIGHT - Personal Air Conditioner
6.) Travis- The Translator
9.) “Help us end waste plastic in watersheds
12.) Honest Pics

3. EV-1000 evaLIGHT -
Personal Air Conditioner

5. Clear, Concise,
to the point, tone
set was very
clean, audience
based, broken up
with pictures

8. Influential, purposeful, grabs the audience
through imagery and situations, develops trust

9. “Help Us End Waste Plastic in
Watersheds”

10. Project focuses on removing plastic waste
in Canada due to the pollution in its the
country's waters. Backing this project
will help convert the trash into useful
items

11. Too much information, bad
design, long unnecessary
paragraphs

14. Very long, informative but a bit too much, confused about
audience, lots of bullet points

15. https://www.indiegogo.com/products/ev-1000-evalight-p
ersonal-air-conditioner/coll
https://www.indiegogo.com/projects/travis-i-speak-80-lan
guages-so-can-you-travel#/
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1063873618/help-u
s-end-waste-plastic-in-watersheds?ref=category_newest
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/honestpicks/honest
-picks-a-search-engine-that-creates-informed?ref=categ
ory_newest