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Module 7  |   Editing for Conciseness  Winning Business Proposals
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[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Eliminate Repeated Words or Ideas Module 7  |   Editing for Conciseness
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[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Eliminate Pointless Words Module 7  |   Editing for Conciseness
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[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Eliminate Hedge Phrases Module 7  |   Editing for Conciseness
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[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Eliminate Redundancies  Module 7  |   Editing for Conciseness
Be economical with words I f you can remove words from  a sentence, or sentences from  a paragraph and lose no meaning,  you’re not yet as concise as you can be . Module 7  |   Editing for Conciseness
Are you an in-house trainer or a sales trainer / consultant?  Want a full set of these slides to integrate into your own programs? These are available to all bulk purchases of the latest edition of ‘Winning Business Proposals’ who purchase 200 copies or more in hard copy or electronic formats. For pricing information or any other enquiries: please use the contact form on  www.deiricmccann.com   Would you like a full set of all 7 modules of this course in an editable PowerPoint format?

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  • 16. Be economical with words I f you can remove words from a sentence, or sentences from a paragraph and lose no meaning, you’re not yet as concise as you can be . Module 7 | Editing for Conciseness
  • 17. Are you an in-house trainer or a sales trainer / consultant? Want a full set of these slides to integrate into your own programs? These are available to all bulk purchases of the latest edition of ‘Winning Business Proposals’ who purchase 200 copies or more in hard copy or electronic formats. For pricing information or any other enquiries: please use the contact form on www.deiricmccann.com Would you like a full set of all 7 modules of this course in an editable PowerPoint format?