This document outlines revisions made to a student's capstone project on designing an IoT-based greenhouse gardening system for tomatoes. The revisions address comments on improving several sections of the paper, including enhancing the background study, clarifying whether the design is new or existing, focusing the scope and limitations on the system capabilities, developing an input-output model for the conceptual framework, and explaining only the methods used for data gathering, design, fabrication, testing, and evaluation. The revisions provide justification for the design components, execution and analysis of the data gathering and design plans, presentation of the prototype development and testing results, inclusion of a summary of findings supported by data, conclusions supported by the summary, and recommendations in a bulleted format