The document provides feedback on a magazine layout, praising the consistent fonts, appealing strapline, good imagery and captions. It suggests adding page numbers to articles, lightening some text, and varying images more by location, shot and angle in the future. The document also notes fixes made for a final version, such as darkening black text to match the page, adding page numbers, and changing a color to have more contrast.

3. Excellent layout and eye flow Good imagery Consistent fonts from cover Appealing strapline Good caption Interesting editor’s note Good editorial pillars Page numbers missing from articles Off-black lines at the top right “ Features” could be lighter Try to balance the images with more contrast, less brightness In future: vary the locations, very the shot and angle.

4. Final TOC The black has been darkened so as to match the rest of the page Page numbers added Colour changed so it has a larger contrast with the ‘whats inside kicker’