Shot # Scene # Type of shot Angle Movement Actors
required
One line
description
1 1 CU S N/A N/A Close up on a
puddle
2 1 CU S N/A Sam We see Sam’s
foot run into the
puddle.
3 1 MS S N/A Sam We see her
running down
the street
4 1 WS S CL Pan Sam We see Sam
continue to run
down the
street.
5 1 CU S N/A Sam We see Sam
look over her
shoulder
behind her.
6 1 Ariel H Tilt Sam We see Sam’s
face
7 1 ECU S N/A Sam We see her eye
and mascara
running down
her face.
8 1 WS H Tracking Sam We see Sam
run down the
road from a
high angle
making her
look weak and
vulnerable.
9 1 WS S N/A Sam We hear
diegetic sound
of arguments
going on in
Sam’s head-
she’s still
running.
10 1 MS from
behind
S Tracking Sam We see Sam
running down
an alley.
11 1 MS from the
right hand side
S Tracking Sam She’s still
running
12 1 MS from the
front
S N/A Sam She slows
down
13 2 TS S N/A Sam
Darren
We see Darren
being abusive
towards Sam in
a flashback.
14 2 OTS H N/A Sam
Darren
Darren hits
Sam in the
face.
15 3 WS S N/A Sam Sam looks
small and
vulnerable as
she runs
through a large
field.
16 4 Master S N/A Darren Darren enters
the kitchen.
17 4 CS S N/A N/A Close up on the
note – note not
in focus but
wedding ring is.
18 4 OTS S N/A Darren Darren reads
the note-
audience don’t
know what it
says.
19 4 Master S N/A Darren Darren throws
the note.
20 4 WS L N/A Darren We see Darren
run up the
stairs.
21 4 OTS S N/A Darren We see Darren
rummaging
through the
wardrobe
looking to see
if Sam has took
her belongings,
22 4 WS S N/A Darren We see lots of
Sam’s
belongings all
over the bed
and floor.
23 4 CS S N/A Darren We see
Darren’s face
as he leaves
the bedroom.
24 4 MS H N/A Darren We see Darren
walk down the
stairs.
25
4 MS S N/A Sam
Christine
We see a
flashback ofan
argument
between Sam
and her mother.
5 WS S Tracking Sam We see Sam
running through
some woods.
5 MS H N/A Sam We see Sam
stop in the
woods to catch
her breath.
5 MS S N/A Sam We see Sam
look in the
direction where
she hears a
twig snap from.
5 POV S Pan Sam We see the
point of view of
Sam as she
hears leaves
rustling in the
opposite
direction.
5 LS into ECS L N/A Sam
Figure
We see Sam
still looking
round and a
knife held by a
figure emerges.
5 CS H N/A N/A We see the bag
that Sam was
holding drop to
the floor.
5 ECS S Tracking Sam We see Sam’s
feet being
dragged across
the floor with
the name of the
film roll across
from behind her
feet.

Shot list improved

  • 1.
    Shot # Scene# Type of shot Angle Movement Actors required One line description 1 1 CU S N/A N/A Close up on a puddle 2 1 CU S N/A Sam We see Sam’s foot run into the puddle. 3 1 MS S N/A Sam We see her running down the street 4 1 WS S CL Pan Sam We see Sam continue to run down the street. 5 1 CU S N/A Sam We see Sam look over her shoulder behind her. 6 1 Ariel H Tilt Sam We see Sam’s face 7 1 ECU S N/A Sam We see her eye and mascara running down her face. 8 1 WS H Tracking Sam We see Sam run down the road from a high angle making her look weak and vulnerable. 9 1 WS S N/A Sam We hear diegetic sound of arguments going on in Sam’s head- she’s still running. 10 1 MS from behind S Tracking Sam We see Sam running down an alley. 11 1 MS from the right hand side S Tracking Sam She’s still running 12 1 MS from the front S N/A Sam She slows down
  • 2.
    13 2 TSS N/A Sam Darren We see Darren being abusive towards Sam in a flashback. 14 2 OTS H N/A Sam Darren Darren hits Sam in the face. 15 3 WS S N/A Sam Sam looks small and vulnerable as she runs through a large field. 16 4 Master S N/A Darren Darren enters the kitchen. 17 4 CS S N/A N/A Close up on the note – note not in focus but wedding ring is. 18 4 OTS S N/A Darren Darren reads the note- audience don’t know what it says. 19 4 Master S N/A Darren Darren throws the note. 20 4 WS L N/A Darren We see Darren run up the stairs. 21 4 OTS S N/A Darren We see Darren rummaging through the wardrobe looking to see if Sam has took her belongings, 22 4 WS S N/A Darren We see lots of Sam’s belongings all over the bed and floor. 23 4 CS S N/A Darren We see Darren’s face as he leaves the bedroom.
  • 3.
    24 4 MSH N/A Darren We see Darren walk down the stairs. 25 4 MS S N/A Sam Christine We see a flashback ofan argument between Sam and her mother. 5 WS S Tracking Sam We see Sam running through some woods. 5 MS H N/A Sam We see Sam stop in the woods to catch her breath. 5 MS S N/A Sam We see Sam look in the direction where she hears a twig snap from. 5 POV S Pan Sam We see the point of view of Sam as she hears leaves rustling in the opposite direction. 5 LS into ECS L N/A Sam Figure We see Sam still looking round and a knife held by a figure emerges. 5 CS H N/A N/A We see the bag that Sam was holding drop to the floor.
  • 4.
    5 ECS STracking Sam We see Sam’s feet being dragged across the floor with the name of the film roll across from behind her feet.