2. CAVEAT EMPTOR
It is possible that you may answer all of the
questions and still not have a screenplay
worth making if the dramatic action in the
script is predictable, stale, obvious, clichéd
or formulistic.
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3. It’s the CHARACTERS, stupid!!!
Characters in the script
Audience
Tribe
Screenwriter
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4. The Characters in the script
Dramatically, what CHARACTER/S
has/have the most significant problem in the
story?
What is this PROBLEM or OPPORTUNITY
confronted by this character/s at the
beginning of the main story?
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5. Objectives, actions, opposition
What is the character’s INITIAL GOAL in
response to this problem/opportunity?
What PLANS OF ACTION does the
character initiate for achieving this goal?
Who or what or what provides the
OPPOSITION to the character’s plans of
action?
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6. Obstacles/complications
What major OBSTACLE/s or
COMPLICATION/s other than the opposing
force confronts the character/s after deciding
upon the initial plan of action?
In what manner or aspect is/are this/these
character/characters EMOTIONALLY
COMPELLING?
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7. STAKES / RISK
STAKES : In terms of the character’s
ultimate goal, what is at risk?
What if anything raises the stakes or
increases the threat during the course of
the story?
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8. CHANGE
How does the character’s problem
and/or goal CHANGE during the
story and what NEW plans of action
does this bring about?
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9. Climax & Resolution
What is the CLIMAX of the story? Ii it
(emotionally) satisfactory? If so, WHY?
If not, WHY NOT?
Is the character’s initial problem in any
way AMPLIFIED or RECONTEXTUALISED by the climax?
Explain.
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10. The emotional logic
SCENE SEQUENCING and LOGIC: Does
each scene contribute to advancing or
retarding the main character’s progress
towards a clear goal?
Is there a clear cause & effect relationship from
one scene to the next? Please note any scenes
that are not doing so.
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11. AUDIENCE
For the screenwriter, alone, to answer:
To whom is the story addressed, and what
impact/result would you like it to have,
and why?
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12. TRIBE
For the screenwriter, alone, to answer:
Who is it that is speaking THROUGH the
writer, or FOR WHOM is the writer
speaking?
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14. THEME & PREMISE
What is the DRAMATIC ISSUE as
dramatised by the core emotional
energy? In other words, what is the
story ABOUT? What is its THEME?
What is the story’s PREMISE - the
central TRUTH about human and/or
non-human reality conveyed by the
characters’ actions?
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SOCIETAL - (I.e.: the significant groups,
clans, sub-cultures to which the
characters belong)
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CULTURAL -- (i.e.: what separates
“my kind” from “their kind”? Who is
the “US” and who is the “THEM”,
tribally?)
INTELLECTUAL -- (i.e.: the ways in
which the characters go about obtaining
or realising whatever it is that they
value)
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LEGAL – (i.e.: the ways in which the
tribes’ enforcement of their values
impacts upon the actions of the
characters)
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POLITICAL – (i.e.: the ways in which
tribal governance impacts on the actions
of the characters)
ECONOMIC – (i.e.: the ways in which
the system of exchange and barter and
trade impacts upon the values and actions
of the characters)
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SPIRITUAL – (i.e.: the ways in which the
characters’ spiritual notions or values
impact upon or influence their actions)
TIME (period and duration)
LOCATION/s
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