The document provides feedback on a video, digipak, and poster. For the video, it notes improved performance shots but could still work on distractions, narrative clarity, effects, and lighting. For the digipak, it praises the image selection but notes shots don't relate and some text is unclear. For the poster, it likes that the picture relates to the video but finds the writing unclear and colors could be adjusted.

1. Video Feedback
•Accomplishment Improvements
•Improved performance shots •Close ups synced better
•Good framing •Some distraction in the background in
performance shots
•Good range of shots •Narrative quite hard to follow
•Balance of performance •Add more effects
•Some shots are too long
•Effective lighting •Sometimes genre isn’t clear
•Good “out of focus” effect with the camera •Some shots repeated
•Locations match the song and genre •Redo narrative shots
•Good variety •Poor lighting in the canteen shot
•Good length of shot
•Narrative clearer than previous filming
•Made progress since last viewing
•Graffito performance shot looks effective
•Song syncs well

2. Digipak Feedback
Accomplishment Improvements
•Good selection of images •Shots don’t relate
•Nice photos •Some text not very clear
•Clear text •Bike on cover should be used in video
•Good detail •Some panels are stretched
•Effective font •Pictures aren’t connected
•Shots fit with genre
•Costume matches genre

3. Poster Feedback
Accomplishment Improvements
•Picture relates with video •Writing is unclear
•Pixel effect •Colours could be changed
•Good photo
•Needs more information
•Needs to connect with the poster