The document discusses a review of an article about the movie Frozen. The reviewer likes the informal language used in the article and that it includes both factual information and personal interview points, making it interesting. The content is informative yet informal like a conversation. It uses exclamation points and comments to convey expression and personality. The purpose is to inform about Frozen's success while also entertaining and connecting with readers through parent and child interviews. Slang words create a friendly, conversational tone. There were no spelling errors, proving careful proofreading. The heading and title were informal but engaging.

1. Overall Iam veryhappywiththe way thisarticle hasbeenwrittenandlayout.Ilike the informal language used,andalsothe factthere are personal,
interview pointstothe article alongwithfactual points,makingitinteresting.
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The content used in this article is informative, interesting,
and informal, making it fun to read, whilst getting facts and
opinions of the general public and the film, it is read as if
she is speaking to the audience face to face in an informal
and friendly way. She also uses exclamation marks and
added comments to give the different expressions and
personal look and read of the article.
The purpose of this
article is to inform us
about facts and
figures of the movie,
Frozen’s, success
and also connect and
entertain us on a
personal level with
interviews with
parents and why we
love it, children and
adults. Making it
interesting to read
whether you are a
fan of frozen or not.
The article is defiantly
chatty and informal,
as slang words are
used throughout to
create a friendly and
conversational theme
to the article.
Overall, I have found that there were
no spelling mistakes in this article, this
proves that she has already spell
checked her work and made sure it is
professional before its used. I think it
was very well written and grabbed
your attention, making sense with the
different parts and points of the article,
all fitting together to create an
interesting read.
The heading on this article
was a long sentence
leading you into the article
its self; I liked this as it
was informal and also
made you want to read on.
And the title of the whole
page was an extract from
the article which I liked
and think she should keep.