Ex#2
(1)What is the primary idea of the content in the document?
 Ripping a DVD from the disc onto your computer allows you to use the video footage from the DVD
multiple computer programs, such as media players and video editor. If you just want to create a
duplicate of the movie for backup, you can rip the movie file to your computer and burn the file straight
to disc. Contents of this document explain that how to rip DVD and create a duplicate of the movie for
backup.

(2)Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea
that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.
 Yes, I think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was
communicated. Reason of it, in this document, to be written the headline every main work, and
explaining it in detail. In addition, explanations of each step are concise sentences.


(3)What details are included in the document?
 This document is explaining how to rip a DVD from the disc onto your computer in every section
installments. For example, “DVD Decrypter”, “DVD Shrink and DVD-Burning Software”, ”Easy DVD
Clone”. Moreover, these sections are explained in over four steps installments and this explanation is
simplicity.


(4)Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?
 Yes, there was anything that was confusing. This is that explaining of how to download the programs
that need to rip the DVD, for example, DVD Decrypter, DVD Shrink and Easy DVD Clone, are not
written in detail. If someone fail the download the program, one
fail other procedure too.


(5) What is good about the writing? Why is it good?
 I think that good about the writing are as follow. There are three headline in this document (DVD
Decrypter, DVD Shrink and DVD-Burning Software, Easy DVD Clone), and every each headline have
over four steps, and explain the procedure how to rip the DVD from computer in detail. In additional, the
explanations are easily understand and clearly.


(6)Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
 There is no error.
(7)What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?
 Moreover, to change easy understanding document, should explain about downloading programs that
need to do the procedure. Next, when use the technical terms, add the meaning of the terms in the end of
the document because someone may be mistaken the step by being not able to understand the meaning of
the term.


(8)Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and
how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).
 Identify three basic differences are as follow. First, add to the explanation about program that should be
downloaded. Second, writing the headline after the introduction sentence, and skip to the step that explain
the procedure when click the headline. Third, add the notes about difficult technical term in last of
document.

R ex2

  • 1.
    Ex#2 (1)What is theprimary idea of the content in the document? Ripping a DVD from the disc onto your computer allows you to use the video footage from the DVD multiple computer programs, such as media players and video editor. If you just want to create a duplicate of the movie for backup, you can rip the movie file to your computer and burn the file straight to disc. Contents of this document explain that how to rip DVD and create a duplicate of the movie for backup. (2)Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. Yes, I think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Reason of it, in this document, to be written the headline every main work, and explaining it in detail. In addition, explanations of each step are concise sentences. (3)What details are included in the document? This document is explaining how to rip a DVD from the disc onto your computer in every section installments. For example, “DVD Decrypter”, “DVD Shrink and DVD-Burning Software”, ”Easy DVD Clone”. Moreover, these sections are explained in over four steps installments and this explanation is simplicity. (4)Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? Yes, there was anything that was confusing. This is that explaining of how to download the programs that need to rip the DVD, for example, DVD Decrypter, DVD Shrink and Easy DVD Clone, are not written in detail. If someone fail the download the program, one fail other procedure too. (5) What is good about the writing? Why is it good? I think that good about the writing are as follow. There are three headline in this document (DVD Decrypter, DVD Shrink and DVD-Burning Software, Easy DVD Clone), and every each headline have over four steps, and explain the procedure how to rip the DVD from computer in detail. In additional, the explanations are easily understand and clearly. (6)Are there any errors that need to be corrected? There is no error.
  • 2.
    (7)What specific suggestionsfor improving the document can you make? Moreover, to change easy understanding document, should explain about downloading programs that need to do the procedure. Next, when use the technical terms, add the meaning of the terms in the end of the document because someone may be mistaken the step by being not able to understand the meaning of the term. (8)Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). Identify three basic differences are as follow. First, add to the explanation about program that should be downloaded. Second, writing the headline after the introduction sentence, and skip to the step that explain the procedure when click the headline. Third, add the notes about difficult technical term in last of document.