The document summarizes a workshop on finding the heart of your story and developing your original idea. The workshop covers generating original ideas, focusing an idea from divergent to convergent thinking, examining if an idea is just a story or something more meaningful, turning an idea into a narrative outline, and important elements of writing like characterization, plotting, and action. Attendees are provided materials and guidance to develop their story ideas.
4. Finding the Heart of Your Story: Your Original Idea
âThis session will help attendees explore the most basic â yet
most important â element of the writing craft, the original idea
that is the essence of your story. We will first examine how
generating this original idea works for both fiction and non-
fiction. We will deep-dive into where original ideas come from
and then progress to how to shape that kernel of an idea into
novel, narrative non-fiction, or even a screenplay. Attendees will
be provided with online access to all workshop material.â
7. A Few PreliminariesâŚ.
⢠Three promises:
â This will be a focused morning and early afternoon
â Weâll learn somethingâŚand weâll have fun
â Youâll have access to these slidesâŚtake notesâŚor notâŚ.
⢠Three assumptions:
â You all are interested in nurturing your story idea
â You would like to turn your idea into a novel orâŚ.
â You didnât wake up last Tuesday morning with this notion
⢠And a word about Power PointâŚ.
8. Finding the Heart of Your Story:
Your Original Idea
⢠Your Original Idea: The Spark That Starts the Process
⢠Fanning the Flame: From a Spark to a Fire
⢠Focusing Your Idea: Divergent to Convergent
⢠Is It Just a Story â Or Something More?
⢠Turing the Fire Into a Narrative
⢠Taming the Beast and Writing Your Novel
10. Finding the Heart of Your Story:
Your Original Idea
⢠Your Original Idea: Spark That Starts the Process
⢠Fanning the Flame: From a Spark to a Fire
⢠Focusing Your Idea: Divergent to Convergent
⢠Is It Just a Story â Or Something More?
⢠Turing the Fire Into a Narrative
⢠Taming the Beast and Writing Your Novel
11. Your Original Idea:
The Spark That Starts the Process
⢠The coolest thing about writing!
⢠Only you are the steward of your original idea
⢠Can you state your idea in one sentence?
⢠Ideas can be absolutely anything
⢠Outward vs. inward focus
⢠A few examples
12. Only You Are the Steward of Your Original Idea
⢠It is your idea and your idea alone
⢠You have to nurture it, donât share it yet
⢠It is the foundation of your book
⢠Above all else, it is the spark of inspiration for you
⢠Donât do too much, let it germinate
⢠Come up with another idea, is the first still the best?
13. Can You State Your Idea In One Sentence?
⢠If you canât do this, start over and find a new one
⢠This one sentence ignites your creative focus
⢠It is often the core of the pitch to sell your book
⢠Remembering just one sentence keeps you focused
16. Ideas Can Be Absolutely Anything
⢠A high concept
⢠A theme
⢠A plot
⢠A character
⢠A âwhat ifâ
⢠A setting or scene
17. Outward vs. Inward Focus
⢠A situation idea is outward focused
⢠Your situation idea focuses on a plot and a problem
⢠A character idea is inward focused
⢠Your character idea focuses on character and intent
⢠The key to success is to have your book do both
18. Ideas Can Be A High Concept
⢠In a post-apocalyptic world, what if the top .1% is
delineated by length of life rather than wealth?
⢠Burners
19. Ideas Can Be A Theme
⢠What is more important? Honor or loyalty?
⢠Duty, Honor, Country
20. Ideas Can Be A Plot
⢠On the same day, six different years, the Time Patrol
must keep the shadow from changing our timeline.
⢠Time Patrol
21. Ideas Can Be A Character
⢠A housewife and female assassin must uncover the
truth of the men in their lives in order to uncover
their destiny.
⢠Bodyguard of Lies
22. Ideas Can Be A What If
⢠What if people going into the Witness Protection
Program really disappear?
⢠Cut Out
23. Ideas Can Be A Setting or Scene
⢠An international treaty bans weapons in Antarctica:
What if the U.S. put nuclear weapons there and lost
track of them?
⢠Eternity Base
25. New York Times, Publisherâs
Weekly & USA Today Best-
Seller!
What if a prince in a Middle
Eastern country wanted to get
the United States to attack
another country so his
country could later win a fight
with that country?
26. New York Times, Publisherâs
Weekly & USA Today Best-
Seller!
How does the commanding
officer of a U.S. Navy ship
keep the North Koreans from
capturing her crew after they
run aground on a small island
after losing a gun battle with
North Korean ships?
27. First book of the Rick Holden Thriller
Series - from
Braveship Books
What if the most senior officers in the
United States military are so
dissatisfied with the President that
they concoct a scheme to have the
President direct a major military
operation, and then have that
operation fail in order to drive the
President out of office?
28. Second book of the Rick Holden
Thriller Series - from
Braveship Books
What if the Islamic Republic of
Iran is killing Americans in
terrorist attacks and other actions
and the United States is not taking
action? And what is a carrier strike
group commander with a wide
array of strike assets at his
disposal decides to create and
incident that has Iranâs
fingerprints all over it and uses
this as an excuse to extract his
own vengeance on Iran? Can he
be stopped?
29. Finding the Heart of Your Story:
Your Original Idea
⢠Your Original Idea: The Spark That Starts the Process
⢠Fanning the Flame: From a Spark to a Fire
⢠Focusing Your Idea: Divergent to Convergent
⢠Is It Just a Story â Or Something More?
⢠Turing the Fire Into a Narrative
⢠Taming the Beast and Writing Your Novel
30. Fanning the Flame: From a Spark to a Fire
⢠Is your idea different?
⢠No? Now what?
⢠Every idea has been done before
⢠âItâs been done beforeâ is the first hurdle
⢠Check out the Internet Movie Database for log lines
⢠Try Kipling
31. âDeconstructingâ a Movie Log Line
The subject of the sentence will describe (1) an
imperfect but passionate and active protagonist. The
verb will depict (2) the battle. And the direct object will
describe (3) an insurmountable antagonist who tries to
stop the protagonist from reaching (4) a physical goal
on account of (5) the stakes, if the goal is not reached.
32. âDeconstructingâ Your Idea:
Putting It On Trial for Itâs Life
⢠Is there a plot?
⢠Are there a protagonist and an antagonist?
⢠Is the verb in your idea an active one?
⢠Is there an inherent conflict that needs to be solved?
33. I keep six honest serving-men
(They taught me all I knew);
Their names are What and Why and When
And How and Where and Who.
Rudyard Kipling
The Elephantâs Child
34. Fanning the Flame: From a Spark to a Fire
⢠Since every idea has been done before, now what?
⢠Your idea turns into a story as you fan the flame
⢠Fan the flame with Kiplingâs help:
â What? Plot
â Who? Characters
â Why? Whatâs at stake
â Where and When? Setting
â How? Beginning, Middle, and End
⢠Your idea wonât change
⢠You are going to do it differently
35. Finding the Heart of Your Story:
Your Original Idea
⢠Your Original Idea: The Spark That Starts the Process
⢠Fanning the Flame: From a Spark to a Fire
⢠Focusing Your Idea: Divergent to Convergent
⢠Is It Just a Story â Or Something More?
⢠Turing the Fire Into a Narrative
⢠Taming the Beast and Writing Your Novel
36. Focusing Your Idea: Divergent to Convergent
⢠Spend a lot of time on divergent thinking
⢠Save plenty of time for convergent thinking
37. Dean Koontz
On Generating New Story Ideas
⢠Read!
⢠Write!
⢠Tickle the imagination and generate story ideas by
playing around with exotic titles
⢠Type out a bunch of narrative hooks and find one
that is intriguing
⢠Prime the idea pump by building up a couple of
characters in enormous detail
⢠Whatever you write, you must begin your novel by
plunging the hero or heroine into terrible trouble
38. Finding the Heart of Your Story:
Your Original Idea
⢠Your Original Idea: The Spark That Starts the Process
⢠Fanning the Flame: From a Spark to a Fire
⢠Focusing Your Idea: Divergent to Convergent
⢠Is It Just a Story â Or Something More?
⢠Turing the Fire Into a Narrative
⢠Taming the Beast and Writing Your Novel
39. Is It Just a Story â
Or Something More?
⢠The king died and then the queen died.
â A story
⢠The king died and then the queen died of grief.
â A plot
⢠The queen died, and no one knew why, until it was
discovered that it was through grief at the death of
the king.
â A mystery
40. Is It Just a Story â Or Something More?
⢠What are you selling?
⢠The âIntentâ
â The âwhyâ behind the âwhatâ
â What do you want the reader to feel?
â Is there a beginning, middle and end?
â The payoff to the reader is the resolution
⢠The âShiverâ
â What excites you about your idea?
â What will excite those you tell it to?
â Is there emotion and passion?
â Can your reader relate to your plot and your characters?
41. Finding the Heart of Your Story:
Your Original Idea
⢠Your Original Idea: The Spark That Starts the Process
⢠Fanning the Flame: From a Spark to a Fire
⢠Focusing Your Idea: Divergent to Convergent
⢠Is It Just a Story â Or Something More?
⢠Turing the Fire Into a Narrative
⢠Taming the Beast and Writing Your Novel
42. Turing the Fire Into a Narrative
⢠Before you start slamming together sentences:
â Treatment
â Narrative Outline
⢠An enormous amount of work â why do it:
â You have to convince yourself itâs a book
â You may have to convince others
â A surefire way to avoid writerâs block
â Youâre not chained to it â things happen
43. Letâs Deconstruct
a Novel Treatment
⢠Cover
⢠Organization
⢠Organizing Impulse and High Concept
⢠The âOldâ OpCenter Dies
⢠The âNewâ OpCenter is Born
⢠New Character Details
â Preamble
â Those who spend a great deal of time
physically at OpCenter
â Those who deal with crises overseas
in each scenario
â Those who deal with crises
domestically in each scenario
⢠OpCenter Plot and Scenario Plan
â Preamble
â Short Plot Synopsis
⢠For us, this was 17,000+ words
44. Letâs Deconstruct
a Narrative Outline
⢠Cover
⢠Front matter
⢠Chapter summaries
â Separate sections
â One or two paragraphs per
section
⢠Epilogue
⢠For us, this was 19,000+
words
45. Finding the Heart of Your Story:
Your Original Idea
⢠Your Original Idea: The Spark That Starts the Process
⢠Fanning the Flame: From a Spark to a Fire
⢠Focusing Your Idea: Divergent to Convergent
⢠Is It Just a Story â Or Something More?
⢠Turing the Fire Into a Narrative
⢠Taming the Beast and Writing Your Novel
46. Letâs talk about three of the most
important ingredients in writing a
successful thrillerâŚ
49. âThere are only two plots: The hero takes a journey and
a stranger comes to town.â
Timothy Spurgin
âThe Art of Readingâ
The Great Courses
50. The Classic Plot
⢠The writer introduces a hero or heroine who has just been â
or is about to be â plunged into terrible trouble
⢠The hero or heroine attempts to solve his or her problem but
only slips deeper into trouble
⢠As they try to climb out of the hole theyâre in, complications
arise, each more terrible than the one before, until the
situation could not become more hopeless, then one final
unthinkable complication arises and makes matters worse.
⢠At last, deeply affected and changed by his awful experiences
and intolerable circumstances, the hero learns something
about himself and the human condition. He then understands
what he must do to get out of the dangerous situation in
which he has wound up. He takes the necessary actions and
either succeeds or fails, succeeding more often than not.
51. âYou can distill anydrama â a Greek tragedy, a
Shakespearian play, a modern novel, a TV drama or
comedy, whatever â into a simple equation: âWhat do
these guys want, why do they want it, and whatâs
keeping them from getting it?ââ
Bill Bleich
Writing advice
52. James Hall â Hit Lit
⢠Gone with the Wind
⢠Peyton Place
⢠To Kill a Mockingbird
⢠Valley of the Dolls
⢠The Godfather
⢠The Exorcist
⢠Jaws
⢠The Dead Zone
⢠The Hunt for Red October
⢠The Firm
⢠The Bridges of Madison County
⢠The Da Vinci Code
53. Letâs take a deep-dive into one well-known
way to design or deconstruct a plotâŚ.
57. A Movie Log Line
The subject of the sentence will describe (1) an
imperfect but passionate and active protagonist. The
verb will depict (2) the battle. And the direct object will
describe (3) an insurmountable antagonist who tries to
stop the protagonist from reaching (4) a physical goal
on account of (5) the stakes, if the goal is not reached.
58. What is Your Story?
⢠Take five minutes to do a âlog lineâ for your story
⢠Partner up! Try your log line on your partner
⢠Rewrite your log line based on that feedback
⢠Now switch roles, rinse, repeat
⢠Write your log lines again large and neatly
⢠âHold those thoughtsâ â and weâll see whatâs next
59. A Movie Log Line
The subject of the sentence will describe (1) an
imperfect but passionate and active protagonist. The
verb will depict (2) the battle. And the direct object will
describe (3) an insurmountable antagonist who tries to
stop the protagonist from reaching (4) a physical goal
on account of (5) the stakes, if the goal is not reached.
61. Letâs Use This to Dissect a
Book We All Are Familiar With
⢠Pride and Prejudice
⢠Ulysses
⢠War and Peace
⢠Anna Karenina
⢠Don Quixote
⢠Little Women
⢠The Wizard of Oz
62.
63. The Wizard of Oz
Exposition
The exposition stage of the story sets the scene and introduces
the characters. In The Wizard of Oz, the exposition is everything
that happens from the beginning of the story to the tornado. We
meet all the major characters. Dorothy runs away with Toto and
meets Professor Marvel; and on her way back to the farm,
Dorothy is overtaken by the storm.
64. The Wizard of Oz
Inciting Incident
Next comes the inciting action, which is the event that
introduces conflict into the story. This is a bit tricky in The Wizard
of Oz, because there are two elements in the story that might be
called the conflict:
⢠One is the conflict between Dorothy and Miss Gulch, because Miss
Gulch wants Dorothyâs dog put to sleep. This is what causes Dorothy to
run away from home, leading to the blow to the head she receives
during the tornado. In this sense, we might consider Miss Gulchâs
threat the inciting moment.
⢠But this conflict becomes more complicated when the tornado
transports Dorothy to the Land of Oz. There, Dorothyâs house lands on
the Wicked Witch of the East and kills her, and the Wicked Witch of
the West threatens to kill Dorothy in revenge.
65. The Wizard of Oz
Rising Action
The rising action is where the plot becomes more complicated
and exciting, building tension. This includes Dorothyâs departure
from Munchkinland, her meetings with the Scarecrow, the Tin
Man and the Cowardly Lion, her arrival in Emerald City; her
audience with the Wizard, and her capture by the witch:
⢠During this part of the story, small obstacles are thrown in the path of
Dorothy and her companions, and the two conflicts mentioned during
the inciting incident are reemphasized.
⢠The two conflicts are then explicitly linked when the Wizard tells
Dorothy heâll help her get back to Kansas if she brings him the witchâs
broom.
⢠Dorothy and her companions then face their most difficult challenge,
with Dorothy getting carried away by the flying monkeys and her
companions breaking into the witchâs castle to rescue her.
66. The Wizard of Oz
Climax
The climax is the most dramatic and exciting event in the story.
In The Wizard of Oz, the climax comes when Dorothy and her
friends are trapped in the witchâs castle, and Dorothy kills the
witch by dousing her with a bucket of water. At that moment,
much of the storyâs tension is released because at least one of
the conflicts, the one between Dorothy and the witch, is ended,
and the plot begins its descent down the other side of the
pyramid.
67. The Wizard of Oz
Falling Action
The next element is the falling action, which is made up of
events that result directly from the moment of climax. The
element after that is called the resolution, where the characterâs
conflict is resolved:
⢠After Dorothy has killed the witch, she take the broomstick back to the
Wizard. He solves the problems of Dorothyâs three companions, and
agrees to take Dorothy back to Kansas himself.
⢠This is the falling action: it shows the results of the death of the witch,
but it doesnât resolve Dorothyâs second conflict, the fact that she
wants to go home to Kansas.
68. The Wizard of Oz
Resolution
The resolution comes when the Wizard accidentally takes off in
his balloon without Dorothy, and Dorothy learns from Glinda the
Good Witch that she could have taken herself back to Kansas at
any time just by using the ruby slippers. At this point, Dorothyâs
conflict is finally resolved. The threat from the witch is
liquidated, and she realizes that she always had the power to go
home.
69. The Wizard of Oz
DĂŠnouement
The denouement is the ending of the story, when order is
restored. At this point, we are often shown the characters one
more time so we can see what happened to them. In The Wizard
of Oz itâs the final scene in Dorothyâs bedroom, where she is
reunited with Aunt Em and Uncle Henry and the now-familiar
farmhands:
⢠In some stories the denouement simply shows that order has been
restored, and the world is now back to the way it was. But this isnât
usually the case, and itâs certainly not the case in The Wizard of Oz.
⢠Dorothy is back home, but everything is not back to the way it was
before she went to Oz. Dorothyâs understanding of herself and her
place in the world have profoundly changed.
71. âThere are only two plots: The hero takes a journey and
a stranger comes to town.â
Timothy Spurgin
âThe Art of Readingâ
The Great Courses
72. âThere are only two plots: The hero takes a journey and
a stranger comes to town.â
Timothy Spurgin
âThe Art of Readingâ
The Great Courses
73. James Hall â Hit Lit
⢠Gone with the Wind
⢠Peyton Place
⢠To Kill a Mockingbird
⢠Valley of the Dolls
⢠The Godfather
⢠The Exorcist
⢠Jaws
⢠The Dead Zone
⢠The Hunt for Red October
⢠The Firm
⢠The Bridges of Madison County
⢠The Da Vinci Code
74. Presenting Character Traits Thoughtfully
⢠How many major and minor characters to have
⢠All major characters must have a biography
⢠Develop a âjob descriptionâ for each character
⢠You will know what your characters will do
⢠You are writing a novel â not a movie script
â You have to get your characters from Point A to Point B
â Your characters are not dead when theyâre off the page
⢠What is each character doing?
â On stage
â Off stage
75. Take a female character who is on her way to her high school
reunion. Sheâs 50, attractive, divorced, and has had no contact
with her graduating class since she left Iowa for Berkley in
1985. There was a guy she jilted when she went off to
school. Develop her.
⢠Personal: strengths, weaknesses, phobias, attitude toward
men, attitude toward all others, etc.
⢠Family: siblings, relationship with mom/dad, rivalries
⢠Relationships: good/bad/difficult, marriage(s), children?
⢠Occupation: attorney, doctor, college professor, executive,
runs a dot.com startup, etc.
⢠Physical: height, weight, hair color, best feature, worst
feature, etc.
Present her in a way thatâs not a âpolice blotterâ
76. Think of a Compelling Character
⢠Take three minutes to create an antagonist
⢠Partner up! Try your antagonist on your partner
⢠Rewrite your character based on that feedback
⢠Now switch roles, rinse, repeat
⢠Write your character again large and neatly
⢠âHold those thoughtsâ â and weâll see whatâs next
77. Important Qualities for
Heroes, Heroines and Strangers
⢠Virtue
⢠Competence
⢠Courage
⢠Likeability
⢠Imperfections
⢠Change:
â Layers
â Arcs
79. New York Times, Publisherâs
Weekly & USA Today Best-
Seller!
Letâs color in one character,
Anne Sullivan, Op-Centerâs
Deputy Director
80. âAnne Sullivan was a retired General Services
Administration super grade who had made a career in
Washington. She knew all about the government,
including government contracting, hiring, firing, and
funding, and how to sidestep the issues. These were
things Williams never had to deal with, even during
his multiple tours in Washington.â
81. âUnlike Williams, Sullivan came from money. Her
father had fashioned a successful and lucrative career
in finance with Bain Capital Ventures. Between that
family money and her GSA retirement, she was
looking forward to a comfortable life. She enjoyed the
D.C. social and cultural scene and traveled often,
primarily to Europe and especially to Ireland. That
plan was interrupted when Williams recruited herâ
charmed her, really, she readily admittedâto be his
deputy.â
82. New York Times, Publisherâs
Weekly & USA Today Best-
Seller!
Letâs color in one character,
Kate Bigelow, Commanding
Officer, USS Milwaukee
(LCS-5) Freedom-Class Littoral
Combat Ship
83. âKate Bigelow was a graduate of the U.S. Naval Academy. Sheâd
gone to the Academy for two reasons: to play lacrosse and to
sing. Coming out of Montgomery Blair Prep in Silver Spring,
Maryland, her two passions had been playing lacrosse and
singing in her school glee club and church choir. She was an all-
state midfielder and also had a strong voice. Her grades were
good if not outstanding, but the Academy womenâs lacrosse
coach saw her play and liked what she saw. Lacrosse was a
rough sport, even the womanâs game, and Kate Bigelow, while
owning a technically sound game, was not above flattening an
opposing player with a legal hit. She started for three years on
the lacrosse team, beating Army two of those three years, and
had sung in the Catholic Choir and the Naval Academy Glee
Club.â
84. âKate had graduated in the upper half of the bottom third of
the Class of 2002. Sheâd never really considered a full career in
the Navy as a seagoing officer, two things intervened that kept
her from leaving the service. She found she liked U.S. Navy
sailors and she had a knack for leading them. Secondly, she
found command intoxicating. There was nothing like it on the
outside, so she stayed in the Navy. She had previously
commanded an MCM ship like Defender that now followed
them out of Sasebo.â
85. First book of the Rick Holden
Thriller Series - from
Braveship Books
Letâs color in one character,
Lieutenant Laura Peters,
Intelligence Officer, U.S.
Southern Command
86. For Laura Peters, it was an opportunity for professional growth
that might not come her way again. It was not surprising she
loved what she was doing. The daughter and only child of a
Navy chief petty officer, she had been the apple of her father's
eye. Master Chief Donald Peters had risen through the ranks as
far as he could, but he always wanted to be an officer. That
goal, unfortunately, had eluded him. When it was clear his
marriage would produce no sons, he regaled Laura with the
opportunities that beckoned in the Navy. The master chief
knew enough about how the Navy worked and what it looked
for in its officersâand particularly its need to recruit more
women officersâthat he groomed his daughter throughout
high school to make her a shoe-in for winning a Navy ROTC
scholarship.
87. She had thrived at the University of Virginia, earning top
grades, and lettering in cross-country, squash, and tennis.
Sensing that the Navy was still not enlightened enough to fully
accept women as equal partners commanding ships and
aircraft squadrons, she opted for the intelligence field upon
graduation, correctly surmising that it would provide a more
level professional playing field and afford her the opportunity
to prove herself and advance through the ranks. In her seven
years since graduation she had sought out only the toughest
assignments, usually registering firsts, breaking ground where
female officers had not gone before.
88. Second book of the Rick
Holden Thriller Series - from
Braveship Books
Letâs color in one character,
Lieutenant Anne Claire
OâConnor, F/A-18E/F Super
Hornet Pilot, USS Carl Vinson
89. Anne Claire OâConnor came by her bent for naval aviation
naturally. The only child of now-retired Captain Jeff âBoxmanâ
OâConnor, who had flown F-4 Phantoms in Vietnam and gone
on to command his own carrier air wing, she had grown up in
the midst of the lore of naval aviation. An honor student and
varsity athlete at Coronado High School in southern California,
she had won an appointment to the U.S. Naval Academy and
had excelled there as a swimmer. Tall, slim and attractive, at
five foot nine and a lithe 130 pounds, Anne OâConnor turned
heads. She knew her good looks didnât help her blend as a
naval aviatorâthere were fewer than two dozen women
among Carl Vinsonâs over two hundred pilots and naval flight
officers. Unlike everything else she did in her life, she failed in
her mission to not stand out.
90. OâConnor was also worried. Not of what would happen in the
air. No, she was worried because of Bingo. Commander Craig
âBingoâ Reynolds was the Stingers executive officer and he was
not the kinder, gentler type. As a brand-new lieutenant,
OâConnor had absorbed more than a fair share of Bingoâs
wrath. She didnât know if he was trying to make it hard on her
because she was one of only four women officers in the
squadron. She was terrified because he would be in the
Stingersâ Ready Room and would see her come in late.
OâConnor looked out on the waters of the Arabian Gulf and into
the perpetual haze that hung in the skies. As she got ready to
taxi her aircraft back to its original position on deck, she
wondered what part she would play in any conflict. One thing
she did knowâsheâd be ready.
92. When he finished packing, he walked out onto the
third-floor porch of the barracks brushing the dust from
his hands, a very neat and deceptively slim young man
in the summer khakis that were still early morning
fresh.
James Jones
(From Here to Eternity, opening sentence)
93. "Jones packs a hell of a lot into that first line. He tells
you it's summer, he tells you it's morning, he tells you
you're on an Army post with a soldier who's obviously
leaving for someplace, and he gives you a thumbnail
description of his hero. That's a good opening line."
Ed McBain in Killer's Payoff
94. Plot or Characterization
⢠You have to have plot to make the reader turn pages
⢠People are the story and the whole story
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⢠Plot has the entertainment value to pull the reader
along
⢠The characters are the vehicle, the tools through
which you tell your story
⢠Readers want you to tell them a story
⢠Dialogue brings your characters to life!
95. WhewâŚthatâs a lot of informationâŚIâm
drowning
Can you distill it down into everyday
terms?
What do you mean by plot- and character-
focused?
99. âI do not over-intellectualize the production process. I
try to keep it simple: Tell the damned story.â
Tom Clancy
100. What About Action?
⢠Action evolves naturally from the plot
⢠There is no âformulaâ for having action in your novel
⢠As Clancy said, donât overthink the action
⢠That said, here are some things to consider:
â Different kinds of novels lend themselves to more or less
â Write all the action you can â then consider Goldilocks
â If riveting, hold-your-breath action is anywhere â up front
â Balance scene and summary to bound action scenes
101. Finding the Heart of Your Story:
Your Original Idea
⢠Your Original Idea: The Spark That Starts the Process
⢠Fanning the Flame: From a Spark to a Fire
⢠Focusing Your Idea: Divergent to Convergent
⢠Is It Just a Story â Or Something More?
⢠Turing the Fire Into a Narrative
⢠Taming the Beast and Writing Your Book
102. Now You Have Homework:
Nurture Your Log Line
Use Your Antagonist for Other Characters
103. Resources
⢠E.E. Forster Aspects of the Novel
⢠Francine Prose Reading Like a Writer
⢠Richard Curtis How To Be Your Own Literary Agent
⢠James Hall Hit Lit
⢠Dr. Linda Seger
â The Art of Adaptation
â Advanced Screenwriting
⢠Robert Masello
â Robertâs Rules of Writing
â Writer Tells All
⢠The Great Courses, especially, Jane Friedman How to Publish
Your Book
104. A Word About Surveys:
Comments Typically Come in Three Types
⢠You rocked my world and my life is now changed forever
for the better â Iâm a completely new person
⢠Iâd rather have a root canal than have to sit through this
again â and I think you should pay for it
⢠I got something (a lot, a little) out of this workshop, but if
the instructor does this next year, he should:
â Do more ofâŚ.
â Do less ofâŚ.
â Go fasterâŚ.
â Go slowerâŚ.
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