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Writing the Rough Draft
The purpose of this assignment is three-fold.
1. First, almost every piece of writing that you complete at the college level will involve arguing for a specific viewpoint. Even essays that simply are informative are trying to convince the reader of the validity of the information. This essay will allow you to demonstrate that you understand how to compose an effective piece of persuasive writing.
2. Second, you will be required to write many research papers as you complete your academic career. This essay allows you to demonstrate that you understand how to effectively cite the information you gather from completing the research assignments that led up to writing this essay.
3. Finally, this essay gives you the chance to discuss something you feel is important, either for your own information or for the general population, and you get a guaranteed audience.
General Guidelines for Writing the Essay & Tips for Putting it Together
· Write a 6-8 page essay that discusses your research topic. Begin with a catchy first sentence and interesting first paragraph that explains why you chose this topic and why someone should read about this topic. If you wrote a good story for your Research Proposal, that story can become the introduction for your research essay.
· The first paragraph or two should discuss the issue, problem, or topic that you researched. It should provide any background information that is necessary for the reader to understand the essay, and it should define any unfamiliar terms. Once you introduce the topic and provide background information, then you should state your thesis and the main reasons for your thesis. You will continually refer back to the thesis statement throughout the paper, AND everything in the paper will be connected to the thesis statement. This will help you keep your focus and go deep rather than broad into the information you gathered.
· After you have introduced your topic and stated the thesis, explain your first sub-claim (a sub-claim is a claim that supports the main idea or thesis). Remember this is an essay so you should have one main point that you are trying to communicate. You may have found out many, many things that you cannot include. What is the most important information? What's the best way to get that across to your readers?
· Each paragraph is also like a mini-essay. Each paragraph will have one main point or idea that you are developing. Then you will explain the main idea and give examples.
· Use transitions between paragraphs and ideas so that the essay flows.
· Be sure to introduce your quotes and paraphrased ideas. You might want to review the lesson from the Summary folder that discusses paraphrasing, summarizing, and quoting. Do NOT just drop a quote into your paper without an introduction and discussion.
· Be sure to use ethos, pathos, and logos to strengthen your argument and appeal to your audience. Follow this link for a discussion of the rhetorical appeals an.
Wallace 1 Jessica Wallace Composition I Comparis.docxmelbruce90096
Wallace 1
Jessica Wallace
Composition I
Comparison Contrast Essay
October 15, 2013
Cats are the Purrfect Companions:
Why Cats Make Better Pets than Dogs
The debate over cats versus dogs isn’t exactly a hot-button issue, but most of us probably know
someone who is either a self-proclaimed cat person or dog person. Few people would deny that cats are
more independent than dogs, while dogs tend to be more obedient. But which of these popular animals
is really better when it comes to choosing a pet? Actually, there is no contest: Cats are better than dogs
because of the noise level, the exercise requirements, and grooming habits.
When it comes to noise, cats win every time. Cat owners don’t have to worry about their guests
being accosted by loud barking—or worse, growling—every time they come over. Even if a canine
companion isn’t acting aggressively, it will often beg for attention in a frenzy of barking, whining, and
leaping at anyone who is in the room. Cats, on the other hand, are more likely to observe from afar until
they are in the mood to say hello in the form of a polite “meow.” In fact, it would be safe to say that
even the loudest cat is quieter than most any dog. Certainly, cat owners never have to worry about the
neighbors calling to say that the cat’s hissing is keeping them awake.
Aside from the potential noise level, another reason why cats make better pets than dogs is the
exercise that dogs require. Imagine this scenario: Work lasted longer than expected, it’s already late, a
thunderstorm is raging outside, but there is no getting around the fact that the dog needs to be walked.
Find the leash, bring the poop bags, and get out the umbrella all because Fido demands a walk.
Meanwhile, the cats sits patiently on the windowsill and stays dry while the dog goes out to do its
business. A quick trip to the litter box is all the cat needs, and the owner can simply scoop out the
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Training Your Cat. Inside this
eBook, you will discover the topics
about cat training basics,
understand your cat, know how to
administer discipline correctly,
learning about resources and how
to use them, keeping kitty safe,
training for biting and scratching,
litter box training and the issues
with not training your cat.
This manual will help you teach your dog the basics of obedience. The beginner level exercises will introduce fundamental control commands and give you basic control of your dog. While the approach I’ve taken in this manual will meet the needs of a wide range of pet owners and their dogs, it’s by no means the only effective one.Nor are the methods the last word in all dog-training issues.
If the techniques in this guide aren’t right for your dog’s particular training needs, ask your veterinarian to recommend a dog obedience trainer.A well-trained dog makes for a better behaved pet, a better relationship between pet and owner, and a safer city. Be patient with your pooch, and yourself. You’re both on the learning curve. Happy training!
GETTING STARTED
Before you start the training program, some preparation is needed.
First, read the Week 1 lesson plan, including the “Introduction to dog training,” and follow all the instructions. It will give you some useful background and explain some of the theory behind the training. Completing Week 1 may not take the whole week, but be sure you have read and understood this section before you start training.
There is one lesson plan per week for Weeks 2 - 8. Each builds on the skills of the previous week(s), so it’s important to complete the preceeding lesson before advancing to the next.
Spend a whole week on each lesson plan. Don’t skip ahead.
For best results, train your dog at least 30 minutes each day. Two 15-minute sessions are ideal.
Read the whole lesson plan for the week before starting. As you read, visualize what you’re trying to achieve. Try to picture what the exercises will look like – and how you’ll teach the skill. It’s very helpful to reread individual sections before starting to teach – or even go through the motions without the dog at first.
Writing the Rough DraftThe purpose of this assignment is three-f.docxambersalomon88660
Writing the Rough Draft
The purpose of this assignment is three-fold.
1. First, almost every piece of writing that you complete at the college level will involve arguing for a specific viewpoint. Even essays that simply are informative are trying to convince the reader of the validity of the information. This essay will allow you to demonstrate that you understand how to compose an effective piece of persuasive writing.
2. Second, you will be required to write many research papers as you complete your academic career. This essay allows you to demonstrate that you understand how to effectively cite the information you gather from completing the research assignments that led up to writing this essay.
3. Finally, this essay gives you the chance to discuss something you feel is important, either for your own information or for the general population, and you get a guaranteed audience.
General Guidelines for Writing the Essay & Tips for Putting it Together
· Write a 6-8 page essay that discusses your research topic. Begin with a catchy first sentence and interesting first paragraph that explains why you chose this topic and why someone should read about this topic. If you wrote a good story for your Research Proposal, that story can become the introduction for your research essay.
· The first paragraph or two should discuss the issue, problem, or topic that you researched. It should provide any background information that is necessary for the reader to understand the essay, and it should define any unfamiliar terms. Once you introduce the topic and provide background information, then you should state your thesis and the main reasons for your thesis. You will continually refer back to the thesis statement throughout the paper, AND everything in the paper will be connected to the thesis statement. This will help you keep your focus and go deep rather than broad into the information you gathered.
· After you have introduced your topic and stated the thesis, explain your first sub-claim (a sub-claim is a claim that supports the main idea or thesis). Remember this is an essay so you should have one main point that you are trying to communicate. You may have found out many, many things that you cannot include. What is the most important information? What's the best way to get that across to your readers?
· Each paragraph is also like a mini-essay. Each paragraph will have one main point or idea that you are developing. Then you will explain the main idea and give examples.
· Use transitions between paragraphs and ideas so that the essay flows.
· Be sure to introduce your quotes and paraphrased ideas. You might want to review the lesson from the Summary folder that discusses paraphrasing, summarizing, and quoting. Do NOT just drop a quote into your paper without an introduction and discussion.
· Be sure to use ethos, pathos, and logos to strengthen your argument and appeal to your audience. Follow this link for a discussion of the rhetorical appeals an.
Wallace 1 Jessica Wallace Composition I Comparis.docxmelbruce90096
Wallace 1
Jessica Wallace
Composition I
Comparison Contrast Essay
October 15, 2013
Cats are the Purrfect Companions:
Why Cats Make Better Pets than Dogs
The debate over cats versus dogs isn’t exactly a hot-button issue, but most of us probably know
someone who is either a self-proclaimed cat person or dog person. Few people would deny that cats are
more independent than dogs, while dogs tend to be more obedient. But which of these popular animals
is really better when it comes to choosing a pet? Actually, there is no contest: Cats are better than dogs
because of the noise level, the exercise requirements, and grooming habits.
When it comes to noise, cats win every time. Cat owners don’t have to worry about their guests
being accosted by loud barking—or worse, growling—every time they come over. Even if a canine
companion isn’t acting aggressively, it will often beg for attention in a frenzy of barking, whining, and
leaping at anyone who is in the room. Cats, on the other hand, are more likely to observe from afar until
they are in the mood to say hello in the form of a polite “meow.” In fact, it would be safe to say that
even the loudest cat is quieter than most any dog. Certainly, cat owners never have to worry about the
neighbors calling to say that the cat’s hissing is keeping them awake.
Aside from the potential noise level, another reason why cats make better pets than dogs is the
exercise that dogs require. Imagine this scenario: Work lasted longer than expected, it’s already late, a
thunderstorm is raging outside, but there is no getting around the fact that the dog needs to be walked.
Find the leash, bring the poop bags, and get out the umbrella all because Fido demands a walk.
Meanwhile, the cats sits patiently on the windowsill and stays dry while the dog goes out to do its
business. A quick trip to the litter box is all the cat needs, and the owner can simply scoop out the
Commented [SL1]: Try to create a catchy title. This two-
part title (first part is more creative, second part is more
straightforward) is a good way to get the reader’s attention
Commented [SL2]: This paper starts with a bit of
background, and then goes into the specific thesis.
Commented [SL3]: Remember to underline the thesis!
Commented [SL4]: This is the topic sentence of this
paragraph. Each paragraph needs a topic sentence, and
then the paragraph itself should elaborate on and support
that topic sentence
Commented [SL5]: Dashes should be used very sparingly.
They are used to interject parenthetical words that you
really want to emphasize. Again, do not overuse them. In
this case, the writer really wanted to emphasize the fact
that dogs might growl at guests, so dashes were used
instead of parentheses.
Commented [SL6]: This transition sentence helps the
paper move smoothly from the previous topic to this one
Commented [SL7]: Here are the two grammar rules for
colon .
Training Your Cat. Inside this
eBook, you will discover the topics
about cat training basics,
understand your cat, know how to
administer discipline correctly,
learning about resources and how
to use them, keeping kitty safe,
training for biting and scratching,
litter box training and the issues
with not training your cat.
This manual will help you teach your dog the basics of obedience. The beginner level exercises will introduce fundamental control commands and give you basic control of your dog. While the approach I’ve taken in this manual will meet the needs of a wide range of pet owners and their dogs, it’s by no means the only effective one.Nor are the methods the last word in all dog-training issues.
If the techniques in this guide aren’t right for your dog’s particular training needs, ask your veterinarian to recommend a dog obedience trainer.A well-trained dog makes for a better behaved pet, a better relationship between pet and owner, and a safer city. Be patient with your pooch, and yourself. You’re both on the learning curve. Happy training!
GETTING STARTED
Before you start the training program, some preparation is needed.
First, read the Week 1 lesson plan, including the “Introduction to dog training,” and follow all the instructions. It will give you some useful background and explain some of the theory behind the training. Completing Week 1 may not take the whole week, but be sure you have read and understood this section before you start training.
There is one lesson plan per week for Weeks 2 - 8. Each builds on the skills of the previous week(s), so it’s important to complete the preceeding lesson before advancing to the next.
Spend a whole week on each lesson plan. Don’t skip ahead.
For best results, train your dog at least 30 minutes each day. Two 15-minute sessions are ideal.
Read the whole lesson plan for the week before starting. As you read, visualize what you’re trying to achieve. Try to picture what the exercises will look like – and how you’ll teach the skill. It’s very helpful to reread individual sections before starting to teach – or even go through the motions without the dog at first.
Operation “Blue Star” is the only event in the history of Independent India where the state went into war with its own people. Even after about 40 years it is not clear if it was culmination of states anger over people of the region, a political game of power or start of dictatorial chapter in the democratic setup.
The people of Punjab felt alienated from main stream due to denial of their just demands during a long democratic struggle since independence. As it happen all over the word, it led to militant struggle with great loss of lives of military, police and civilian personnel. Killing of Indira Gandhi and massacre of innocent Sikhs in Delhi and other India cities was also associated with this movement.
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In Odoo, the multi-company feature allows you to manage multiple companies within a single Odoo database instance. Each company can have its own configurations while still sharing common resources such as products, customers, and suppliers.
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June 3, 2024 Anti-Semitism Letter Sent to MIT President Kornbluth and MIT Cor...Levi Shapiro
Letter from the Congress of the United States regarding Anti-Semitism sent June 3rd to MIT President Sally Kornbluth, MIT Corp Chair, Mark Gorenberg
Dear Dr. Kornbluth and Mr. Gorenberg,
The US House of Representatives is deeply concerned by ongoing and pervasive acts of antisemitic
harassment and intimidation at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT). Failing to act decisively to ensure a safe learning environment for all students would be a grave dereliction of your responsibilities as President of MIT and Chair of the MIT Corporation.
This Congress will not stand idly by and allow an environment hostile to Jewish students to persist. The House believes that your institution is in violation of Title VI of the Civil Rights Act, and the inability or
unwillingness to rectify this violation through action requires accountability.
Postsecondary education is a unique opportunity for students to learn and have their ideas and beliefs challenged. However, universities receiving hundreds of millions of federal funds annually have denied
students that opportunity and have been hijacked to become venues for the promotion of terrorism, antisemitic harassment and intimidation, unlawful encampments, and in some cases, assaults and riots.
The House of Representatives will not countenance the use of federal funds to indoctrinate students into hateful, antisemitic, anti-American supporters of terrorism. Investigations into campus antisemitism by the Committee on Education and the Workforce and the Committee on Ways and Means have been expanded into a Congress-wide probe across all relevant jurisdictions to address this national crisis. The undersigned Committees will conduct oversight into the use of federal funds at MIT and its learning environment under authorities granted to each Committee.
• The Committee on Education and the Workforce has been investigating your institution since December 7, 2023. The Committee has broad jurisdiction over postsecondary education, including its compliance with Title VI of the Civil Rights Act, campus safety concerns over disruptions to the learning environment, and the awarding of federal student aid under the Higher Education Act.
• The Committee on Oversight and Accountability is investigating the sources of funding and other support flowing to groups espousing pro-Hamas propaganda and engaged in antisemitic harassment and intimidation of students. The Committee on Oversight and Accountability is the principal oversight committee of the US House of Representatives and has broad authority to investigate “any matter” at “any time” under House Rule X.
• The Committee on Ways and Means has been investigating several universities since November 15, 2023, when the Committee held a hearing entitled From Ivory Towers to Dark Corners: Investigating the Nexus Between Antisemitism, Tax-Exempt Universities, and Terror Financing. The Committee followed the hearing with letters to those institutions on January 10, 202
7. Persuasive writing is written work that tries to
convince a reader to do something or to believe
what you believe about a certain topic. I
t takes
a position for or against something.
8.
9. The 5-paragraph essay:
1.Introduction/Thesis statement
2. Argument 1with support
3. Argument 2 with support
4. Argument 3 with support
5. Conclusion
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12. Thirdly,research!
I
n order to convince the reader
you need more than just an
opinion;you need facts or
examples to back your opinion.
So, be sure to do the research!
18. What makes a good introduction?
•It grabs or “hooks” the reader’s
attention by using one or more of the
following strategies:
–A quotation
–An interesting fact
–A question
–A writer’s point of view
•Supporting details (1or 2 sentences)
•The author’s position is clearly
stated in the thesis statement.
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20. “Did you know that dogs are more trainable than other pets,
can protect you, and promote a more active lifestyle?”
Youcouldopenwithaninteresting fact
Example:
21. How much do you really love your dog?
Youcouldopenwithaquestion:
22. “Dogs are the smartest pets ever ”
.
Youcouldopenwithwriter’sopinion:
23. Next:SupportingdetailsandThesisstatement
•Supporting details are examples, facts, steps, or other kinds of
evidence that explain the main idea.
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t May consist of 2 or 3
sentences E.g.
There is really no denying it. Goldfish, hamsters, and cats do not
compare. Some of them also are trained to assist police and other
law enforcement officers. “what makes dogs so great?” You may ask.
24. Next:CreatingaThesisStatement
•A thesis statement is one sentence at the end of your
introduction that states your opinion.
•First, choose 2 or 3 main focus points to discuss in your essay. These
points will become the focus of the paragraph.
That’s easy. It’s because they are affectionate, smart, and easy to
care for.
25. Whydogsmakethebestpet?
Paragraph 1
:Intro and thesis statement
"Did you know that dogs are more trainable than other pets, can
protect you, and promote a more active lifestyle?”. There is really no
denying it. Goldfish, hamsters, and cats do not compare. Some of
them also are trained to assist police and other law enforcement
officers. “what makes a dog so great?” You may ask. That’s easy. It’s
because they are affectionate, smart, and easy to care for.
26.
27. ThreeSupportingParagraphs
•Use each of the main arguments you used in your introductory
paragraph and expand on each giving facts and reasons.
•In our example, you would write one paragraph about "why dogs are
affectionate”
, one paragraph about "
why dogs are easy to care for”
and one paragraph about "why dogs are smart”.
28. Paragraph2:whydogsareaffectionate?
•Ifyou have a tough day school, what do you want to come home
to? Do you want to come home to a cat that just looks at you so
bored until you feed it? No way! How about coming home to a loving
dog instead? If you are sad, a good dog will comfort you right away.
A dog will jump up on your lap and lick your face until you can’t help
but smile.
29.
30. Paragraph3:whydogsareeasytocarefor?
•Dogs are easy to take care for
. As long as you feed them, love them
and train them, caring for a dog is a breeze. You don’t have to worry
about cleaning out a dirty litter box or fish bowl.
31.
32. Paragraph4:whydogsaresmart?
•Dogs are also super smart. They can play fun games, like fetch. This
means they are easy to train. You can teach them to use the
bathroom outside. Most dogs learn this pretty fast and don’t forget it.
You can also teach a dog tricks. With some patience and positive
reinforcement, you can train them to put on your dog on a show.
33.
34. Concludeor endyour essay…
What makes a good conclusion?
·Last paragraphs summarize your main
point.
·End your essay:Call the reader to
action
35. Paragraph5:ConcludingParagraph:
I
n closing,it’s so joyful to have a dog at home. I
t can
cause positive vibes and happiness in the family. If
you’re thinking about getting a new pet,Isuggest
you choose a dog. After all, they’re men’s best
friends.