GOOD
MORNING!
WELL-
WRITTEN
TEXT
Properties of
well-written
text
( Unity, coherence
and cohesion)
At the end of the lesson, the students will be
able to:
a.Define coherence and cohesion
b.Identify the key features of a coherent and
cohesive text.
c.Differentiate coherence and cohesion through
semantic web.
d.Rewrite the given paragraph applying
transitional devices to create a coherent
paragraph.
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Unity is achieved when a composition
contains one focused idea. In a unified
text, all the supporting ideas are
relevant to the main thought. Without
unity, the text will be confusing.
Unity
My mother is a good cook.
My sister is also a good
cook.
1. Computers are essential tools for writers. The use of pen and paper is
also very handy. That is, if someone wanted to write about anything,
anywhere. But computers provide writers efficient means for revising
their works. Because computers allow text to be easily changed and
moved. Hence, computers are more efficient for revisions.
2. Computers are essential tools for writers. They provide writers
efficient means for revising their works. Because computers allow text
to be easily changed and moved. Hence, computers are more efficient
for revisions.
Example
Coherence
- defined as the quality of being logical, consistent, and
able to be understood.
-Means the connection and organization of ideas in
a text to create unity.
- to achieve coherence, every good paragraph must
have unity or oneness of ideas. Sentences in a
paragraph are unified and directed by a topic
sentence.
Cohesion
refers to the act of forming a whole unit. It is
the glue that holds a piece of writing together.
-To achieve cohesion, you need to know how to
use cohesive devices, certain words or phrases
that serve the purpose of connecting two
statements, usually by referring back to what
you have previously written or said.
COHESIVE DEVICES/TRANSITIONAL DEVICES
Pronouns
Ex. Myra awarded as the employee of the month because she was
responsible in her job.
Conjunctions
Ex. Myka and Lara will be attending my party.
Repetition
Ex. The problem with contemporary art is that it is not easily
understood by most people. contemporary art is deliberately
abstract, and that means it leaves the viewer wondering what she is
looking at.
Synonym (substitution)
Ex. There was a lot of food, but she only ate the bread.
additive adversative Causal Sequential
Moreover
What is more
In addition(to,
this)
additionally
Though
(and) still
(and) yet
Either way
Accordingly
As a result
Consequently
For this
reason,
In the (first,
second third, etc.)
To begin with
Initially
Secondly
Some Transitional devices
Cohesive but not coherent: “My favorite color is blue. Blue sports cars
go very fast. Driving in this way is dangerous and can cause many car
crashes. I had a car accident once and broke my leg. I was very sad
because I had to miss a holiday in Europe because of the injury.
Coherent and cohesive: “My favorite color is blue. I like it because it is
calming, and it relaxes me. I often go outside in the summer and lie of
the grass and look into the clear sky when I am stressed. For this
reason, I’d have to say my favorite color is blue. “
To summarize, coherence refers to how the
ideas of the text flow logically and make a
text semantically meaningful as a whole.
Cohesion is what makes the elements (e.g.
the words, phrases, clauses, and sentences)
of a text stick together to form a whole.
coherence Cohesion
Unity
Applying coherence and cohesion, compose a sentence in
the following cohesive devices basing on the things that you
can observe in your surroundings.
1.Because (of)
2.As a result
3.They, them
4.However
5. Therefore
TRY ME!
Choose the correct transitional devices that must be inserted in each sentence.
1. Many students cannot get a place on a regular degree course. (Because of,
Despite) this, home based study and distance learning are more popular than
ever.
2.(Because of, Despite) the global pandemic, learning should continue.
3.(Every, No) student must practice independent learning due to the current
health situation.
4.There may be a threat to our health (and, but) that does not mean that we
should stop learning.
5. (Aside from, Another) physical well-being, mental health should be taken into
consideration nowadays.
TRY ME!
Read the paragraph and rewrite the paragraph by organizing the flow
of ideas. Make sure that the links are made clear between each point.
I live in a house in Melaka. It is my second home. It isn’t old or
modern. The house is normal Malaysian house. My house is smaller
than my neighbor. We can say it is near the sea. It takes about 10
minutes to go to the seaside on foot. We have one bedroom, one living
room. We also have two other rooms, too. We use them as a dining room.
Naturally, we have a kitchen, a bathroom, and a toilet. I live with my
parents. Our house has a little garden; my parents spend their time
there to grow vegetables and fruit.
TRY ME!

PPT FOR UNITY, COHERENCE AND COHESION.pptx

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    At the endof the lesson, the students will be able to: a.Define coherence and cohesion b.Identify the key features of a coherent and cohesive text. c.Differentiate coherence and cohesion through semantic web. d.Rewrite the given paragraph applying transitional devices to create a coherent paragraph. LEARNING OBJECTIVES
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    Unity is achievedwhen a composition contains one focused idea. In a unified text, all the supporting ideas are relevant to the main thought. Without unity, the text will be confusing. Unity
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    My mother isa good cook. My sister is also a good cook.
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    1. Computers areessential tools for writers. The use of pen and paper is also very handy. That is, if someone wanted to write about anything, anywhere. But computers provide writers efficient means for revising their works. Because computers allow text to be easily changed and moved. Hence, computers are more efficient for revisions. 2. Computers are essential tools for writers. They provide writers efficient means for revising their works. Because computers allow text to be easily changed and moved. Hence, computers are more efficient for revisions. Example
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    Coherence - defined asthe quality of being logical, consistent, and able to be understood. -Means the connection and organization of ideas in a text to create unity. - to achieve coherence, every good paragraph must have unity or oneness of ideas. Sentences in a paragraph are unified and directed by a topic sentence.
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    Cohesion refers to theact of forming a whole unit. It is the glue that holds a piece of writing together. -To achieve cohesion, you need to know how to use cohesive devices, certain words or phrases that serve the purpose of connecting two statements, usually by referring back to what you have previously written or said.
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    COHESIVE DEVICES/TRANSITIONAL DEVICES Pronouns Ex.Myra awarded as the employee of the month because she was responsible in her job. Conjunctions Ex. Myka and Lara will be attending my party. Repetition Ex. The problem with contemporary art is that it is not easily understood by most people. contemporary art is deliberately abstract, and that means it leaves the viewer wondering what she is looking at. Synonym (substitution) Ex. There was a lot of food, but she only ate the bread.
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    additive adversative CausalSequential Moreover What is more In addition(to, this) additionally Though (and) still (and) yet Either way Accordingly As a result Consequently For this reason, In the (first, second third, etc.) To begin with Initially Secondly Some Transitional devices
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    Cohesive but notcoherent: “My favorite color is blue. Blue sports cars go very fast. Driving in this way is dangerous and can cause many car crashes. I had a car accident once and broke my leg. I was very sad because I had to miss a holiday in Europe because of the injury. Coherent and cohesive: “My favorite color is blue. I like it because it is calming, and it relaxes me. I often go outside in the summer and lie of the grass and look into the clear sky when I am stressed. For this reason, I’d have to say my favorite color is blue. “
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    To summarize, coherencerefers to how the ideas of the text flow logically and make a text semantically meaningful as a whole. Cohesion is what makes the elements (e.g. the words, phrases, clauses, and sentences) of a text stick together to form a whole.
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    Applying coherence andcohesion, compose a sentence in the following cohesive devices basing on the things that you can observe in your surroundings. 1.Because (of) 2.As a result 3.They, them 4.However 5. Therefore TRY ME!
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    Choose the correcttransitional devices that must be inserted in each sentence. 1. Many students cannot get a place on a regular degree course. (Because of, Despite) this, home based study and distance learning are more popular than ever. 2.(Because of, Despite) the global pandemic, learning should continue. 3.(Every, No) student must practice independent learning due to the current health situation. 4.There may be a threat to our health (and, but) that does not mean that we should stop learning. 5. (Aside from, Another) physical well-being, mental health should be taken into consideration nowadays. TRY ME!
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    Read the paragraphand rewrite the paragraph by organizing the flow of ideas. Make sure that the links are made clear between each point. I live in a house in Melaka. It is my second home. It isn’t old or modern. The house is normal Malaysian house. My house is smaller than my neighbor. We can say it is near the sea. It takes about 10 minutes to go to the seaside on foot. We have one bedroom, one living room. We also have two other rooms, too. We use them as a dining room. Naturally, we have a kitchen, a bathroom, and a toilet. I live with my parents. Our house has a little garden; my parents spend their time there to grow vegetables and fruit. TRY ME!