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November 21, 2013
Tonight’s Agenda
 Check in on grades and deadlines
 Proofreading tips
 Review of the rubric for final drafts
 Unity and coherence

 Chapter 8, Beyond Words
 Let’s chat
 Final Draft

 Rough Draft

 Outline

 Annotated Bibliography
Proofreading Tips
 Wait 24 hours
 Read it once on the screen and again on paper
 Read multiple times for different issues
 Recruit a proofreading buddy

 Read it out loud
 Read it backwards
Unity and Coherence
 Unity is achieved when each sentence of each

paragraph and each paragraph of the essay needs to be
there in order to support the thesis
 Coherence is achieved when all the information
presented is about one idea, sometimes called
“sticking to the topic.”
 Next to the thesis statement, the topic sentences of the
paragraphs are the most important tools in achieving
unity and coherence.
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PPT ENC 1101 Fall 2013 Class 13

  • 2. Tonight’s Agenda  Check in on grades and deadlines  Proofreading tips  Review of the rubric for final drafts  Unity and coherence  Chapter 8, Beyond Words  Let’s chat
  • 3.
  • 4.  Final Draft  Rough Draft  Outline  Annotated Bibliography
  • 5. Proofreading Tips  Wait 24 hours  Read it once on the screen and again on paper  Read multiple times for different issues  Recruit a proofreading buddy  Read it out loud  Read it backwards
  • 6. Unity and Coherence  Unity is achieved when each sentence of each paragraph and each paragraph of the essay needs to be there in order to support the thesis  Coherence is achieved when all the information presented is about one idea, sometimes called “sticking to the topic.”  Next to the thesis statement, the topic sentences of the paragraphs are the most important tools in achieving unity and coherence.
  • 7.
  • 8.