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  • 8. New Jersey Registered Holistic Scoring Rubric Used for the "Writing to Speculate" (Picture Prompt) and Persuasive Writing Items   Inadequate Command Limited Command Partial Command Adequate Command   Strong Command Superior Command Score: 1 2 3 4 5 6 Content and Organization May lack opening and/ or closing May lack opening and/ or closing May lack opening and/ or closing Generally has opening and/or closing Opening and closing Opening and closing Minimal response to topic; uncertain focus Attempts to focus May drift or shift focus Usually has single focus Single focus Single focus Sense of unity and coherence Key ideas developed Single, distinct focus Unified and coherent Well- developed No planning evident; disorganized Attempts organization Few, if any, transitions between ideas Some lapses or flaws in organization May lack some transitions between ideas Ideas loosely connected Transitions evident Logical progression of ideas Moderately fluent Attempts compositional risks Logical progression of ideas Fluent, cohesive Compositional risks successful Details random, inappropriate, or barely apparent Details lack elaboration, i. e., highlight paper Repetitious details Several unelaborated details Uneven development of details Details appropriate and varied Details effective, vivid, explicit, and/ or pertinent Usage No apparent control Severe/ numerous errors Numerous errors Errors/ patterns of errors may be evident Some errors that do not interfere with meaning Few errors Very few, if any, errors Sentence Construction Assortment of incomplete and/ or incorrect sentences Excessive monotony/ same structure Numerous errors Little variety in syntax Some errors Some variety Generally correct Variety in syntax appropriate and effective Few errors Precision and/or sophistication Very few, if any, errors Mechanics Errors so severe they detract from meaning Numerous serious errors Patterns of errors evident No consistent pattern of errors Some errors that do not interfere with meaning Few errors Very few, if any, errors
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