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What is the primary idea of the
   content in the articles?

  There are many people who use cell phone
          while driving the car. I
t is a very dangerous act. This article is
           written about how to b
 an the use of cell phones in cars. Talking
            on a cell phone while
driving causes impairment on par with drunk
            driving. This article
   is very important for the driver of an
                 automobile.
Do you think the individual sections and
 headings in the document (articles) clearly
 represent the idea that was communicated.
 Explain the reasons behind your comments.

Yes, I do. This article has plainly written
            the procedure. For ex
 ample, step 1 is Check local laws related
  to driving while talking on a cell phone
 and driving while texting. Use these as a
  baseline for crafting your own family or
  business policy. So this article is very
               comprehensible.
What details are included in
          the articles?
   When say what kind of thing is written;
    about a method to prohibit that use a
 mobile telephone during driving,"According
   to a University of Utah study, talking
     on a cell phone while driving causes
impairment on par with drunk driving."It is
                written based
on a fact.In addition, I do that I confirm
                    a law.
Was there anything that was
 confusing? If so, what is it?
I did not understand it about the following
            sentences well."Check
local laws related to driving while talking
              on a cell phone and
    driving while texting. Use these as a
         baseline for crafting your
own family or business policy. According to
            the Governors Highway
    Safety Association, 25 states and the
 District of Columbia currently ban any use
of a cell phone, whether it's hands-free or
                     not,
             for novice drivers."
What is good about the writing?
        Why is it good?
  This article is written about reasons for
             banning cell phone use
when driving. It is very important. Traffic
             collisions, accidents
     and near misses are concerns for all
           drivers. Since a number of
 drivers use cell phones while driving, all
             drivers and passengers
      are potentially effected. Accidents
          reported by police officers
      suggest that driver distraction and
   inattention account for 25 percent to 50
           percent of traffic crashes
Are there any errors that need
       to be corrected?
              No, there aren't.
  Because in the first article is written
           accurately attention to
 headings How To Ban the Use of Cell Phone
                   in Cars.
     Even the second article is written
           accurately attention to
headings Reasons for Banning Cell Phone Use
                When Driving.
       Two articles meet to headings.
     Therefore,this article need not be
                 corrected.
What specific suggestions for
   improving the articles can
            you make?
I think that example of causing accident by
                using cellular
            phone while driving.
We are slow to notice after the accident is
                    caused.
   Other, we goes to the region where few
            accident that happens
 by using the cellular phone while driving.
I think that I should put method to prevent
               the accident the
       people in the region carry out.
Identify there basic differences between how your group
         would author a similar document and how this
         author or authored it(as you see it in the link).



I think that I should write how to ban the
             use of cell phones
                  in cars.
Because I think that this headings is good.
I think that I write advantage of to use of
           cell phones in cars.
I think that I write disadvantage of to use
          of cell phones in cars.

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Peer review exercise 4

  • 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? There are many people who use cell phone while driving the car. I t is a very dangerous act. This article is written about how to b an the use of cell phones in cars. Talking on a cell phone while driving causes impairment on par with drunk driving. This article is very important for the driver of an automobile.
  • 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. Yes, I do. This article has plainly written the procedure. For ex ample, step 1 is Check local laws related to driving while talking on a cell phone and driving while texting. Use these as a baseline for crafting your own family or business policy. So this article is very comprehensible.
  • 3. What details are included in the articles? When say what kind of thing is written; about a method to prohibit that use a mobile telephone during driving,"According to a University of Utah study, talking on a cell phone while driving causes impairment on par with drunk driving."It is written based on a fact.In addition, I do that I confirm a law.
  • 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? I did not understand it about the following sentences well."Check local laws related to driving while talking on a cell phone and driving while texting. Use these as a baseline for crafting your own family or business policy. According to the Governors Highway Safety Association, 25 states and the District of Columbia currently ban any use of a cell phone, whether it's hands-free or not, for novice drivers."
  • 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? This article is written about reasons for banning cell phone use when driving. It is very important. Traffic collisions, accidents and near misses are concerns for all drivers. Since a number of drivers use cell phones while driving, all drivers and passengers are potentially effected. Accidents reported by police officers suggest that driver distraction and inattention account for 25 percent to 50 percent of traffic crashes
  • 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? No, there aren't. Because in the first article is written accurately attention to headings How To Ban the Use of Cell Phone in Cars. Even the second article is written accurately attention to headings Reasons for Banning Cell Phone Use When Driving. Two articles meet to headings. Therefore,this article need not be corrected.
  • 7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make? I think that example of causing accident by using cellular phone while driving. We are slow to notice after the accident is caused. Other, we goes to the region where few accident that happens by using the cellular phone while driving. I think that I should put method to prevent the accident the people in the region carry out.
  • 8. Identify there basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author or authored it(as you see it in the link). I think that I should write how to ban the use of cell phones in cars. Because I think that this headings is good. I think that I write advantage of to use of cell phones in cars. I think that I write disadvantage of to use of cell phones in cars.