1. Explain the complete organization of
the content in the document.
This group explains the shop that handles
the apparatus of electricity .
The purpose was started to offer convenient
electrical fittings to more people.
This business collects money from a
surrounding person and puts on the
advertisement of the company.
The target of this business is to obtain
the new employee.
Another target is analyze customer needs.

2. Do you think the individual sections and
headings in the document clearly represent the
idea that was communicated. Explain the
reasons behind your comments.
Do you think the individual sections and
headings in the document clearly represent
the idea that was communicated. Explain the
reasons behind your comments.

3. Do you think the individual sections and
headings in the document clearly represent the
idea that was communicated. Explain the
reasons behind your comments.
Various details are explained as a shop
that handles electrical fittings by group
F.
The purpose of the reason why this type of
business is important to send a clean
electrical energy indispensable for life to
more people.
Money is collected from a surrounding
person, and it puts on the advertisement of
the company.

4. Was there anything that was
confusing? If so, what is it?
No, there was not.
I did not think that there was especially a
confused amount.
The purpose and the plan of the business
are firmly explained and it says.
The role of the work of the target and the
member in the company is written in detail.
Therefore, there is no place in which it
should correct it.

5. What is good about the writing?
Whyfor the start-up of the
The reason
is it good?
enterprise that handled electrical fittings
was terrible easily.
Paying attention to environmental problems
that became problems in a modern world is
very admiration.
It is good to write the performance target
of the company.
Because I think that morale of the person
in the entire company goes up if there is a
target.

6. Are there any errors that need
to be corrected?
No,there are not.
Especially, I do not think the sentence
that should be corrected to be.
The purpose and the plan of the business
are firmly explained and it says.
The role of the work of the target and the
member in the company is written in detail.
Therefore, there is no place in which it
should correct it.

7. What specific suggestions for
improving the document can you
make?
There is especially no supported what.
The purpose and the plan of the business
are firmly explained and it says.
The role of the work of the target and the
member in the company is written in detail.
Therefore, there is no place in which it
should correct it.
The explanation of the business is given
almost clearly.

8. Identify three basic differences
between how your group authored the
document and how this group authored
it?
The first,I think that our groupit is
pointed out that the purpose of the
business is not clearly.
The second,the point where the plan of the
business is vague is a specific difference.
The third,the accomplishment of a goal of
the company was not clear.
Group F is very wonderful.