I have a capital
“N” in all three
of my pages
such as content,
front cover, and
lastly double
page spread. I
wanted to make
it as obvious as
possible to my
audience that all
three pages
belong to one
magazine, and I
believe I have
successfully
achieved that,
by viewing the
feedback videos
from a member
of the audience.
I have added
titles such as
“news, reviews,
live” making it
easier for the
audience to get to
the page that
interests them
most, with the use
of subtitles, and
then a brief
description of
what each page
consists of e.g.
under “LIVE”
informs the
audience on the
gigs that are
taking place in
order to attract
them.
I also added
healthy tips in
terms of healthy
eating/weight
loss. I wanted to
replicate the
conventional
format of a real
magazine.
I chose to use a large mid-shot image of a female, with a big fur
coat, and her hair covering half her face, which instantly
informs the audience on the wealthy lifestyle, the celebrities
live. The pose and the way the female is grabbing her fur coat
shows the audience that she looks tough and fearless, which is
what I’m trying to imply and address to my audience. This also
shows them that its not just males within the music industry
(specifically grime/rap) that have this “tough, bad boy” image.

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  • 1.
    I have acapital “N” in all three of my pages such as content, front cover, and lastly double page spread. I wanted to make it as obvious as possible to my audience that all three pages belong to one magazine, and I believe I have successfully achieved that, by viewing the feedback videos from a member of the audience. I have added titles such as “news, reviews, live” making it easier for the audience to get to the page that interests them most, with the use of subtitles, and then a brief description of what each page consists of e.g. under “LIVE” informs the audience on the gigs that are taking place in order to attract them. I also added healthy tips in terms of healthy eating/weight loss. I wanted to replicate the conventional format of a real magazine. I chose to use a large mid-shot image of a female, with a big fur coat, and her hair covering half her face, which instantly informs the audience on the wealthy lifestyle, the celebrities live. The pose and the way the female is grabbing her fur coat shows the audience that she looks tough and fearless, which is what I’m trying to imply and address to my audience. This also shows them that its not just males within the music industry (specifically grime/rap) that have this “tough, bad boy” image.