A study conducted by a university professor found that drinking red wine in moderation, as shown in lab tests on mice, can increase mobility and balance in elderly humans. The study identified beneficial compounds in red wine and blueberries that were shown to have these effects. However, the study only used mice and did not account for human subjects' medical histories or diets, so the effects on humans are not certain. It may be more sensible to get these compounds through eating fruit rather than drinking the amount of wine needed to match the benefits.

1. M. Galloway
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Article 1: Scientists Find ‘Miracle Molecule’ In Red Wine, Blueberries
Good
1.In this case study they identify the benefit of drinking red wine in moderation well
through a lab study done on mice which accurately portray results that can be found in
humans.
2.They also tell of the increase in mobility and balance, which would decrease many
injuries within elderly people
3.The case study is done by a actual professor in a university.
4.They do well to outline the amount of wine to fruit comparison in order receive the
same effects.
5.They find new a discovery when testing this product.
Bad
1.They enforce the idea of drinking red wine but downgrade it in comparison to fruit
throughout the passage.
2.We don’t know if they’re has actually been a study done on humans.
3.We don’t know the medical history of any the people being studied
4.We don’t know the eating habits of any them
5.Makes it more sensible to eat fruit than to drink wine because of the fact you would
have to drink the whole bottle compared to a handful of fruit.