help UPSR pupils

1. WRITING : SEC C
• Students weakness:
- Wrong use of pronouns
- Change the characters to : I, my family
- Mixed pronouns are used
• Adding be verbs to past tense
- is saw

3. Encik
Kamal
and
his family
They
Their
them
themselves

4. Puan
Noor
She
her
hers
herself
Puan Noor’s

5. Encik
Kamal
He
His
him
himself Encik Kamal’s

6. After that,
Soon,
A few minutes later,
Then,
After two hours,
In a blink of eyes,
After a while,
Suddenly,
Out of the blue,
Later,
v
n
n
n
v
v
v
n
v

7. Linkers Subject (S) Verb (V) Object (O)
laid
built
served
ate
arrived
flag
Remember: If the children didn’t understand the words given ask them to use other
suitable words for the situation.

8. Linkers Subject (S) Verb (V) Object (O)
Who? laid mat
Who? built sandcastle
Who? served food
Who? ate food
Who? arrived beach
Who? put flag

9. Linkers Subject (S) Verb (V) Object (O)
Upon arriving, Puan Noor laid a mat under the shady
tree.
As fast as
lightning
Encik Kamal’s
children
built a sandcastle on the
beautiful sandy beach
After a while, Encik Kamal’s wife served some scrumptious
food on the mat
In a blink of
eyes,
The hungry family ate the food hungrily
After two
hours,
They arrived at the beach
Then, The children put a flag on top of the
sandcastle
Remember: These are not well arranged yet. The students have to rearrange the story
based on main idea and supporting details.

10. Last school holidays, Encik Kamal and his family went for a picnic at
the beach. They started the journey early in the morning. They
arrived at the beach at half past ten. Pn Noor laid the mat under
the shady tree. After that, she served the food on the mat.
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Meanwhile, the three children were having
a whale of time at the beach. Azim and his
sister built a sandcastle at the beach.
After two hours, they felt hungry. The
family ate the food together. They had a
good time swimming at the sea. They were
as happy as a lark on that day. They
wanted to go there again in future.
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(87 words)