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The Argumentative
Essay:
Persuade Your Audience—
Don’t Fight With Them!
Goals
• Understand what an argumentative essay is
• Learn argument strategies:
– Summary
– Quoting
– Agree or Disagree
– Gray Areas
– Make use of counterarguments
• Some mistakes to avoid
• Practice creating argument statements
What is an Argumentative Essay?
The purpose of an argumentative
essay is to organize and present
your well-reasoned conclusions in
order to persuade the audience to
accept—or at least seriously
consider—your point of view.
Begin at the End!
A “well-reasoned conclusion” is
one that is arrived at step by step,
guiding the reader through
your logic with illustrations
and explanations,
until your conclusion seems inevitable.
Think Before You Write
• Make your reasoning clear to yourself
BEFORE you write your final draft.
• State your ideas step by step before
trying to draw the conclusion.
• There has to be evidence for each
premise (step) and an explanation of how
you arrived at your conclusion.
Strategy Depends on Audience
Which steps you take
toward the conclusion of
your argument depends
on your audience
and the goals you have
for your writing.
Profile Your Audience
This is not “profiling” with intent to
discriminate against anyone.
Instead, you are making sure you reach
your audience without offending them!
Five Key Questions
1. Do you have a specific intended audience?
2. Who is your intended audience? What are their
personal characteristics?
3. What is their job, profession, or field of expertise?
4. What does your audience know about your topic?
What could they NOT know about your topic,
considering their personal characteristics?
5. What is their level of need/interest regarding your
writing? How will your audience use your writing?
The Audience Is Skeptical
Your audience has thoughts, beliefs, assumptions,
and values. Anticipate them.
Did they use different premises to come to a
different logical conclusion? Did they use intuition
or emotion in developing their beliefs or
assumptions?
Take care to consider their opposition to your
argument and be sure to address possible
criticism while you support your claims.
An Argument = A Conversation!
The act of arguing in academic writing is the
act of entering a conversation (Graff and
Birkenstein ix).
In any conversation, you need to know what
others have said before you can respond.
The same is true in academic writing. You
have to establish for your readers what
has been said about your topic before
asserting your own claims about it.
Strategies
The book They Say/I Say: The Moves That
Matter in Academic Writing by Gerald Graff and
Cathy Birkenstein features numerous phrases
and examples of “templates,” or models of
expressions and strategies for exploring your
academic arguments.
Here are just a handful of strategies to put forth
an argument . . .
Summary First
What has been said may be
• other written works
• a bill being debated in the legislature
• your audience’s preconceptions
• or a film you just watched
—whatever it is, you must first summarize it so that
your readers know why you will be arguing about it.
This summary may be a few sentences of your
introduction, or it may be part of the step-by-step logic
of your reasoning toward your conclusion.
Example of Summary and Response
Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.’s “Letter from Birmingham Jail”
In 1963, eight religious leaders issued a public statement
against the protests King was leading. King responded to their
statements and the kinds of notions their sympathizers might
have been thinking, arguing against each one as he built his
case for the justness of his actions and his cause.
In one passage, King writes, “You deplore the
demonstrations taking place in Birmingham. But your statement,
I am sorry to say, fails to express a similar concern for the
conditions that brought about the demonstrations” (King qtd. in
Graff and Birkenstein 5).
While King uses the word “you,” because he was directly
addressing his audience, he might just as well have used
“they”—they say such-and-such, but I say this.
This is the essence of academic argument.
Summarizing
• Americans today tend to believe that
_________.
• The standard way of thinking about topic X
has it that ______.
• It is often said that ________.
• My whole life I have heard it said that
________ (22).
Setting up a challenge to common beliefs:
Summarizing
• Although I should know better by now, I
cannot help thinking that ______.
• At the same time that I believe _____, I also
believe ______ (23).
Challenging a belief of your own:
Summarizing
• Although none of them have actually said so directly,
my teachers have often given me the impression that
________.
• [While] X does not say so directly, she apparently
assumes that ______ (23).
Go beyond what was literally said and summarize
an implication:
Unless satirizing, suspend your own opinions as you summarize what
“They” believe in order to represent it accurately. At the same time,
focus your summaries on what pertains to your arguments. Avoid lists:
e.g., “First the author says . . . Then he says . . . Next, . . . etc.”
Summarizing
• In discussions of X, one controversial issue has been
_____. On the one hand, [Author A] argues [position
statement]. On the other hand, [Author B] contends
____. Other [authors] even maintain _____. My own
view is _____ (24).
Note: the contents following “My own view is” are all that is
necessary in a third-person argument statement.
Discussing an issue with many sides in a debate:
Examples
Click “Writing Exercises, “cancel” the registration
option, then select “Model papers”:
http://bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/writersref6e/
Player/Pages/Main.aspx
Practice: Work Backward
• My research indicates that there are dangerous
levels of Chemical X in the Columbia River.
• The novel by Author W has critical flaws.
• Female students get shut out of class discussions
by male students.
(Graff and Birkenstein 26-27)
Make up summaries of what “They Say” that would
lead to these “I Say” argument statements:
Quoting
• Choose quotes that support your argument—not
necessarily agreeing, but about what you are saying.
• Introduce each quote with who said it and how it was
said. (Dr. Whiplash contends . . .)
• Follow EVERY quote with explanation of the meaning
of the quote and how it relates to your argument.
• Make sure the quote is really about what you are
discussing—wanting their words to mean as you wish
doesn’t make it so!
(Graff and Birkenstein 40-41)
Besides summary, use a more direct approach:
Quoting
Use vivid “signal verbs”
Rather than simple, dull verbs like “says,”
“states,” and “talks about”—which are required in
journalistic reporting—characterize the nature of the
author’s purpose for writing (35).
Making a claim: claim, argue, insist, observe
Expressing agreement: support, recognize, do not deny,
Questioning or disagreeing: contradict, deny, refute, reject
Recommending: advocate for, demand, urge, warn (37).
Avoid Quoting Mistakes
• Don’t underquote, misquote, or overquote.
Underquoting is leaving out too much of the text of a
passage to understand it. Overquoting usually results
from not understanding a text well enough to explain it
(Graff and Birkenstein 40).
If you’re stumped by what you’re reading, try using your
social networks—ask what other readers are making of
a text to gauge your gut reaction.
Introductions to Quotes
• Writing in the journal Commentary, X
complains that “_________.”
• In X’s view, “__________.”
• X agrees when he writes, “__________.”
• X disagrees when she writes, “________.”
• X is alarmed when she finds “__________” (43).
(MLA, APA, and CMS use different tenses in their signal
phrases.)
Explaining Quotes
• Basically, X is saying ________.
• In making this comment/remark, X argues
that _________.
• X’s point is that ________ (44).
While every quotation situation is not the same, it is better to
risk “overexplaining” than to do too little. Even an audience
that knows the full context of the material you are quoting
needs to be told what you make of the text (44).
I agree/disagree/a little of both/neither
Go ahead and say “I agree,” or “I disagree” or “I agree
that ____, but I cannot agree that ____.” Then you can
launch into however complex your argument (Graff and
Birkenstein 52).
If agreeing or disagreeing cannot apply, you still need a
strong, driving idea to motivate your choices of
summary and quotation in your argument (53).
Disagreeing—Explain Why
• X’s argument fails to take relevant factors into account
• " " is based on faulty or incomplete evidence
• " " rests on questionable assumptions
• " " misses the real problem altogether!
You can even argue that what one person thinks is new
and revelatory is actually old news (54).
Agreeing—Then Adding to It
• I agree that ______ because my experience [of]
________ confirms it (57).
• Though her remark was a humorous aside, her
comedic intuition is supported by research that states
“_________.”
Nuanced Approach
• Yes, but . . .
• Although I agree up to a point, I still insist . . . (59).
• X is right that ______, but she seems on more dubious
ground when she claims that ____ (60).
Go For the Gray Areas!
An argument may be disagreeing or agreeing.
You just have to say to what and why.
That is not being
wishy-washy or
flip-flopping.
Rather, it is
engaging in a
nuanced, thoughtful
argument.
You can also
both agree
and disagree
with aspects
of the same
thing.
Two Minds?
• I do support X’s position that ______, but I find Y’s
argument about _____ and Z’s research on _____
to be equally persuasive (61).
When genuinely ambivalent—feeling two ways about
something—it is intellectually honest to say so.
If something is complex, don’t oversimplify it just to
make it easy for you or your audience to choose sides.
Clarify Theirs From Yours
• X overlooks what I consider an important point
about ____.
• I wholeheartedly endorse what X calls _____.
• These conclusions, which X discusses in ______,
add weight to the argument that ______ (70-71).
Signal idea ownership:
Strengthen Your Argument by
Inviting Your Enemies
Discuss the objections your harshest critics might level
against your claims.
Although some readers might object, saying ______, in
fact, it is the case that _____ (75).
By entering into a serious dialogue with your opponents,
you will come across as an open-minded, more
confident critical thinker.
If you can’t imagine any opposition, either you’re not
trying, or your thesis is not an argument.
Point Your Finger
• (Group identity label) would probably argue that ______.
However, they are failing to realize that _______.
“Group identity label” refers to names given to or
adopted by groups of a common point of view, for
example, conservatives, liberals, skeptics, true believers,
sociologists, lexicographers, men, women, Americans,
Asians, oenophiles (wine-lovers), technorati, apologists,
or researchers.
But Don’t Be Rude!
Employing a label can drift into the territory of slurs,
but it more often helps the reader know who you see
specifically as your opponents.
To avoid stereotyping, use qualifiers like “most” or
“not all” to recognize the realistic variation within
groups (79-80).
Likewise, if you skip over details to make a quick joke
about your opponents, then those who don’t already
agree with you will likely resist your ideas (83).
Respond to Counter-Arguments
• Yes, criminals who threaten the community should be
punished, but not all who break the letter of the law are
violent or dangerous. People who steal cable TV are
breaking laws, but it causes far more harm to society to
pillage retirement accounts or foreclose on homes.
You can overcome fair representations of your opponents’
views by giving a well-developed “yes, but . . .” response.
However, if “their” opposing argument is more persuasive
than yours, you should revise your argument and your
thinking. Grasping onto beliefs that don’t stand up to the
light of reality aren’t worth holding on to.
Your Argument Matters
• Who your claims pertain to
• The real-world effects of your claims
Show why your argument matters—answer the
“Who cares?” and “So what?” questions (88-91).
Who Cares?
Who your argument pertains to may not be your literal
audience. Rather, it may be another group they are
interested in learning about.
What do geneticists think is new and exciting
research these days?
What do teenagers really think of fast food?
Your audience probably isn’t geneticists or teenagers,
but readers would want to know they are to whom your
argument matters.
Indicate Who Cares
• X used to think _____. But recently _____ suggests
that _____.
• This interpretation challenges the work of those critics
who have long assumed that _____.
• But who really cares? At the very least [______] who
assumed [______] should care. (91)
You can be as specific as you see fit.
So What?
• In a world increasingly ______, this is ______. (94)
• While______ may seem silly, it is important to realize ____.
• These conclusions/This discovery will have significant
applications in ____ as well as in ____. (95)
So what if one group thinks A and another thinks Z?
Appeal to something your audience does care about!
You can move from what may seem like a petty dispute or
an obscure object of fascination for a few to the broader
implications of the matter:
What if Audience Already Cares?
You still need to answer the “So what?”
Remind readers who may be experts why what
you are presenting matters. It will support your
argument and engage your readers better.
Remember, if you don’t care about your
argument, your audience won’t, either.
Practice
• Topic: pet ownership
• Audiences:
– Middle-class elementary school-age kids
– 25-y.o. Indian women in Seattle
– Dog show enthusiasts
Invent an argument statement for an audience
What might each group care about? Already know?
Need to know? What points could you make about
owning a pet?
Mistakes to Avoid
• “Only idiots believe . . .”
Those believers may be your audience!
Analyze and criticize ideas, not people.
• Failure to reread leads to self-contradiction.
Revise with a critical eye on content before all else.
• “They Say/I Say” conversation-type structure is not the
same as conversational tone or style.
Be conscious of the purpose of your argument and
your audience’s expectations then choose
appropriate words.
In Conclusion
• Have a point to your argument—make your own
decisions about your topic
• Identify your audience
• Explain what “They” say about your topic
• Respond to what “They” say with your argument
• Address potential objections with respect
• Show why your audience should care
Suggested Reading
Graff, Gerald and Cathy Birkenstein. They Say/I Say: The
Moves That Matter in Academic Writing. New York:
W. W. Norton, 2006.
Purdue OWL (Online Writing Lab). “Logic in Argumentative
Writing.” 22 May 2009. Purdue University. 26 May 2009
<http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/659/01/>.
---. “Using Appropriate Language.” 29 Apr 2009. Purdue
University. 26 May 2009
<http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/608/01/>.
Weida, Stacy. “Establishing Arguments.” 20 Feb 2009.
Purdue University. 26 May 2009
<http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/588/01/>.

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Kayleen_Workshop_Argumentative-Essay.ppt

  • 1. The Argumentative Essay: Persuade Your Audience— Don’t Fight With Them!
  • 2. Goals • Understand what an argumentative essay is • Learn argument strategies: – Summary – Quoting – Agree or Disagree – Gray Areas – Make use of counterarguments • Some mistakes to avoid • Practice creating argument statements
  • 3. What is an Argumentative Essay? The purpose of an argumentative essay is to organize and present your well-reasoned conclusions in order to persuade the audience to accept—or at least seriously consider—your point of view.
  • 4. Begin at the End! A “well-reasoned conclusion” is one that is arrived at step by step, guiding the reader through your logic with illustrations and explanations, until your conclusion seems inevitable.
  • 5. Think Before You Write • Make your reasoning clear to yourself BEFORE you write your final draft. • State your ideas step by step before trying to draw the conclusion. • There has to be evidence for each premise (step) and an explanation of how you arrived at your conclusion.
  • 6. Strategy Depends on Audience Which steps you take toward the conclusion of your argument depends on your audience and the goals you have for your writing.
  • 7. Profile Your Audience This is not “profiling” with intent to discriminate against anyone. Instead, you are making sure you reach your audience without offending them!
  • 8. Five Key Questions 1. Do you have a specific intended audience? 2. Who is your intended audience? What are their personal characteristics? 3. What is their job, profession, or field of expertise? 4. What does your audience know about your topic? What could they NOT know about your topic, considering their personal characteristics? 5. What is their level of need/interest regarding your writing? How will your audience use your writing?
  • 9. The Audience Is Skeptical Your audience has thoughts, beliefs, assumptions, and values. Anticipate them. Did they use different premises to come to a different logical conclusion? Did they use intuition or emotion in developing their beliefs or assumptions? Take care to consider their opposition to your argument and be sure to address possible criticism while you support your claims.
  • 10. An Argument = A Conversation! The act of arguing in academic writing is the act of entering a conversation (Graff and Birkenstein ix). In any conversation, you need to know what others have said before you can respond. The same is true in academic writing. You have to establish for your readers what has been said about your topic before asserting your own claims about it.
  • 11. Strategies The book They Say/I Say: The Moves That Matter in Academic Writing by Gerald Graff and Cathy Birkenstein features numerous phrases and examples of “templates,” or models of expressions and strategies for exploring your academic arguments. Here are just a handful of strategies to put forth an argument . . .
  • 12. Summary First What has been said may be • other written works • a bill being debated in the legislature • your audience’s preconceptions • or a film you just watched —whatever it is, you must first summarize it so that your readers know why you will be arguing about it. This summary may be a few sentences of your introduction, or it may be part of the step-by-step logic of your reasoning toward your conclusion.
  • 13. Example of Summary and Response Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.’s “Letter from Birmingham Jail” In 1963, eight religious leaders issued a public statement against the protests King was leading. King responded to their statements and the kinds of notions their sympathizers might have been thinking, arguing against each one as he built his case for the justness of his actions and his cause. In one passage, King writes, “You deplore the demonstrations taking place in Birmingham. But your statement, I am sorry to say, fails to express a similar concern for the conditions that brought about the demonstrations” (King qtd. in Graff and Birkenstein 5). While King uses the word “you,” because he was directly addressing his audience, he might just as well have used “they”—they say such-and-such, but I say this. This is the essence of academic argument.
  • 14. Summarizing • Americans today tend to believe that _________. • The standard way of thinking about topic X has it that ______. • It is often said that ________. • My whole life I have heard it said that ________ (22). Setting up a challenge to common beliefs:
  • 15. Summarizing • Although I should know better by now, I cannot help thinking that ______. • At the same time that I believe _____, I also believe ______ (23). Challenging a belief of your own:
  • 16. Summarizing • Although none of them have actually said so directly, my teachers have often given me the impression that ________. • [While] X does not say so directly, she apparently assumes that ______ (23). Go beyond what was literally said and summarize an implication: Unless satirizing, suspend your own opinions as you summarize what “They” believe in order to represent it accurately. At the same time, focus your summaries on what pertains to your arguments. Avoid lists: e.g., “First the author says . . . Then he says . . . Next, . . . etc.”
  • 17. Summarizing • In discussions of X, one controversial issue has been _____. On the one hand, [Author A] argues [position statement]. On the other hand, [Author B] contends ____. Other [authors] even maintain _____. My own view is _____ (24). Note: the contents following “My own view is” are all that is necessary in a third-person argument statement. Discussing an issue with many sides in a debate:
  • 18. Examples Click “Writing Exercises, “cancel” the registration option, then select “Model papers”: http://bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/writersref6e/ Player/Pages/Main.aspx
  • 19. Practice: Work Backward • My research indicates that there are dangerous levels of Chemical X in the Columbia River. • The novel by Author W has critical flaws. • Female students get shut out of class discussions by male students. (Graff and Birkenstein 26-27) Make up summaries of what “They Say” that would lead to these “I Say” argument statements:
  • 20. Quoting • Choose quotes that support your argument—not necessarily agreeing, but about what you are saying. • Introduce each quote with who said it and how it was said. (Dr. Whiplash contends . . .) • Follow EVERY quote with explanation of the meaning of the quote and how it relates to your argument. • Make sure the quote is really about what you are discussing—wanting their words to mean as you wish doesn’t make it so! (Graff and Birkenstein 40-41) Besides summary, use a more direct approach:
  • 21. Quoting Use vivid “signal verbs” Rather than simple, dull verbs like “says,” “states,” and “talks about”—which are required in journalistic reporting—characterize the nature of the author’s purpose for writing (35). Making a claim: claim, argue, insist, observe Expressing agreement: support, recognize, do not deny, Questioning or disagreeing: contradict, deny, refute, reject Recommending: advocate for, demand, urge, warn (37).
  • 22. Avoid Quoting Mistakes • Don’t underquote, misquote, or overquote. Underquoting is leaving out too much of the text of a passage to understand it. Overquoting usually results from not understanding a text well enough to explain it (Graff and Birkenstein 40). If you’re stumped by what you’re reading, try using your social networks—ask what other readers are making of a text to gauge your gut reaction.
  • 23. Introductions to Quotes • Writing in the journal Commentary, X complains that “_________.” • In X’s view, “__________.” • X agrees when he writes, “__________.” • X disagrees when she writes, “________.” • X is alarmed when she finds “__________” (43). (MLA, APA, and CMS use different tenses in their signal phrases.)
  • 24. Explaining Quotes • Basically, X is saying ________. • In making this comment/remark, X argues that _________. • X’s point is that ________ (44). While every quotation situation is not the same, it is better to risk “overexplaining” than to do too little. Even an audience that knows the full context of the material you are quoting needs to be told what you make of the text (44).
  • 25. I agree/disagree/a little of both/neither Go ahead and say “I agree,” or “I disagree” or “I agree that ____, but I cannot agree that ____.” Then you can launch into however complex your argument (Graff and Birkenstein 52). If agreeing or disagreeing cannot apply, you still need a strong, driving idea to motivate your choices of summary and quotation in your argument (53).
  • 26. Disagreeing—Explain Why • X’s argument fails to take relevant factors into account • " " is based on faulty or incomplete evidence • " " rests on questionable assumptions • " " misses the real problem altogether! You can even argue that what one person thinks is new and revelatory is actually old news (54).
  • 27. Agreeing—Then Adding to It • I agree that ______ because my experience [of] ________ confirms it (57). • Though her remark was a humorous aside, her comedic intuition is supported by research that states “_________.”
  • 28. Nuanced Approach • Yes, but . . . • Although I agree up to a point, I still insist . . . (59). • X is right that ______, but she seems on more dubious ground when she claims that ____ (60).
  • 29. Go For the Gray Areas! An argument may be disagreeing or agreeing. You just have to say to what and why. That is not being wishy-washy or flip-flopping. Rather, it is engaging in a nuanced, thoughtful argument. You can also both agree and disagree with aspects of the same thing.
  • 30. Two Minds? • I do support X’s position that ______, but I find Y’s argument about _____ and Z’s research on _____ to be equally persuasive (61). When genuinely ambivalent—feeling two ways about something—it is intellectually honest to say so. If something is complex, don’t oversimplify it just to make it easy for you or your audience to choose sides.
  • 31. Clarify Theirs From Yours • X overlooks what I consider an important point about ____. • I wholeheartedly endorse what X calls _____. • These conclusions, which X discusses in ______, add weight to the argument that ______ (70-71). Signal idea ownership:
  • 32. Strengthen Your Argument by Inviting Your Enemies Discuss the objections your harshest critics might level against your claims. Although some readers might object, saying ______, in fact, it is the case that _____ (75). By entering into a serious dialogue with your opponents, you will come across as an open-minded, more confident critical thinker. If you can’t imagine any opposition, either you’re not trying, or your thesis is not an argument.
  • 33. Point Your Finger • (Group identity label) would probably argue that ______. However, they are failing to realize that _______. “Group identity label” refers to names given to or adopted by groups of a common point of view, for example, conservatives, liberals, skeptics, true believers, sociologists, lexicographers, men, women, Americans, Asians, oenophiles (wine-lovers), technorati, apologists, or researchers.
  • 34. But Don’t Be Rude! Employing a label can drift into the territory of slurs, but it more often helps the reader know who you see specifically as your opponents. To avoid stereotyping, use qualifiers like “most” or “not all” to recognize the realistic variation within groups (79-80). Likewise, if you skip over details to make a quick joke about your opponents, then those who don’t already agree with you will likely resist your ideas (83).
  • 35. Respond to Counter-Arguments • Yes, criminals who threaten the community should be punished, but not all who break the letter of the law are violent or dangerous. People who steal cable TV are breaking laws, but it causes far more harm to society to pillage retirement accounts or foreclose on homes. You can overcome fair representations of your opponents’ views by giving a well-developed “yes, but . . .” response. However, if “their” opposing argument is more persuasive than yours, you should revise your argument and your thinking. Grasping onto beliefs that don’t stand up to the light of reality aren’t worth holding on to.
  • 36. Your Argument Matters • Who your claims pertain to • The real-world effects of your claims Show why your argument matters—answer the “Who cares?” and “So what?” questions (88-91).
  • 37. Who Cares? Who your argument pertains to may not be your literal audience. Rather, it may be another group they are interested in learning about. What do geneticists think is new and exciting research these days? What do teenagers really think of fast food? Your audience probably isn’t geneticists or teenagers, but readers would want to know they are to whom your argument matters.
  • 38. Indicate Who Cares • X used to think _____. But recently _____ suggests that _____. • This interpretation challenges the work of those critics who have long assumed that _____. • But who really cares? At the very least [______] who assumed [______] should care. (91) You can be as specific as you see fit.
  • 39. So What? • In a world increasingly ______, this is ______. (94) • While______ may seem silly, it is important to realize ____. • These conclusions/This discovery will have significant applications in ____ as well as in ____. (95) So what if one group thinks A and another thinks Z? Appeal to something your audience does care about! You can move from what may seem like a petty dispute or an obscure object of fascination for a few to the broader implications of the matter:
  • 40. What if Audience Already Cares? You still need to answer the “So what?” Remind readers who may be experts why what you are presenting matters. It will support your argument and engage your readers better. Remember, if you don’t care about your argument, your audience won’t, either.
  • 41. Practice • Topic: pet ownership • Audiences: – Middle-class elementary school-age kids – 25-y.o. Indian women in Seattle – Dog show enthusiasts Invent an argument statement for an audience What might each group care about? Already know? Need to know? What points could you make about owning a pet?
  • 42. Mistakes to Avoid • “Only idiots believe . . .” Those believers may be your audience! Analyze and criticize ideas, not people. • Failure to reread leads to self-contradiction. Revise with a critical eye on content before all else. • “They Say/I Say” conversation-type structure is not the same as conversational tone or style. Be conscious of the purpose of your argument and your audience’s expectations then choose appropriate words.
  • 43. In Conclusion • Have a point to your argument—make your own decisions about your topic • Identify your audience • Explain what “They” say about your topic • Respond to what “They” say with your argument • Address potential objections with respect • Show why your audience should care
  • 44. Suggested Reading Graff, Gerald and Cathy Birkenstein. They Say/I Say: The Moves That Matter in Academic Writing. New York: W. W. Norton, 2006. Purdue OWL (Online Writing Lab). “Logic in Argumentative Writing.” 22 May 2009. Purdue University. 26 May 2009 <http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/659/01/>. ---. “Using Appropriate Language.” 29 Apr 2009. Purdue University. 26 May 2009 <http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/608/01/>. Weida, Stacy. “Establishing Arguments.” 20 Feb 2009. Purdue University. 26 May 2009 <http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/588/01/>.