G00 Career Documents Showcase - Yourname - 02 Dec 2013

1. CAREER DOCUMENTS SHOWCASE
CAREER DOCUMENTS 1
JOB AD 1
LETTER 1
CV
CAREER DOCUMENTS 2
JOB AD 2
LETTER 2
RESUME
CAREER DOCUMENTS SHOWCASE BY
ZHANG ZHIGUANG
(CHINA)
60%
TRANSMITTAL
43%
DOCUMENTS
43%
PERSUASION
49%
zhang.zhiguang.noah@gmail.com
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ASSESSMENT RUBRIC: LETTER OF TRANSMITTAL
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3. ASSESSMENT RUBRIC: CAREER DOCUMENTS
43%
PASS
01. IMAGE FILE: Two job advertisements are selected
PASS
02. IMAGE FILE: Each job ad can be attached or uploaded as a separate image file
FAIL
PASS
03. CV PRACTICE: One job ad requires a CV
FAIL
04. RESUME PRACTICE: One job ad requires a resume
PASS
05. LETTER FORMAT 1: A one-page letter in full block format
FAIL
06. LETTER FORMAT 2: A one-page letter in modified block format
FAIL
07. SENDER FORMAT 1: One letter uses a letterhead
FAIL
08. SENDER FORMAT 2: One letter uses a full signature
FAIL
09. PERSUASION: Reader is convinced to interview the sender
FAIL
10. CV: A short CV targets all the receiver’s needs
FAIL
11. RESUME: A short resume targets all the receiver’s needs
FAIL
12. ORIGINALITY: Nothing in the documents can be proven as plagiarized
PASS
13. VERACITY: All contents can be proven true by certificates, documents, etc.
PASS
14. ATTACHMENTS: All attachments are mentioned in the letter (no “please find”)
PASS
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4. ASSESSMENT RUBRIC: PERSUASION ELEMENTS
43%
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Letter 2
01. CONTENT: There are no content errors
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FAIL
02. FORMAT: There are no formatting errors
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FAIL
03. MECHANICS: There are no errors in mechanics
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FAIL
04. LANGUAGE REGISTER: A professional tone is used
PASS
PASS
05. ADDRESSEE: The letter addresses a specific person
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FAIL
06. FOCUS: The letter focuses on receiver and benefits to receiver
PASS
PASS
07. TARGET: Each item in the job ad is addressed
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08. TARGET: Any unconnected item is clearly connected
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09. STRUCTURE: First and last paragraphs include a positive idea + something
about the receiver’s company or institution
FAIL
FAIL
10. STRUCTURE: One paragraph summarize receiver needs (job specs)
PASS
PASS
11. STRUCTURE: One paragraph summarizes what sender can do
PASS
PASS
12. STRUCTURE: One paragraph summarizes what receiver can do to benefit
from the sender’s offerings or abilities
PASS
PASS
13. BREVITY & CONCISENESS: There no unnecessary words or elements
FAIL
FAIL
14. PROFESSIONALISM: The overall effect is clean and business-like.
PASS
PASS
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5. CAREER DOCUMENT 1
APPLICATION WITH CV
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6. YOU FORGOT THIS
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7. Dr. Abdullah Chen Yin
Manager of Administration and Business Analysis
Multinational petrochemical company
Souq Al Qalaa, Sanaaya Road, Industrial Area, Near Castle Road Round-About, Doha
Dear Manager
In response to your recent advertisement (gulfcuttings.com) which seems to be in need of Business
Analyst. Your job requires Bachelor’s degree in Accountancy or Finance (BBA or B.Sc), probably 2
years experience in Accounting or Finance with fluency in verbal and written English and knowledge
of additional language is a plus.
You may be surprised to know that I will be offering one month of internship service for free. I am
applying for the job from August 2014 to September 2014. I can fulfill most of requirements to start
working with your advertisement.
Your company can benefit from my fully qualified education in fluent English speaking and writing.
Moreover, I am studying to prepare profit and loss statements and monthly closing and cost
accounting reports. I have various managing and analyzing finance package knowledge as well as
mathematics. Working for Multinational petrochemical company is my aspiration.
You might be interested in my attached CV for what I said above. Thank you for your time and
consideration. I look forward to speaking with you about this employment opportunity at least an
interview. Please feel free to call me via my Email, Skype, LinkedIn.
Yours Sincerely
Zhang Zhiguang(Mr.)
Albukhary International University
Jalan Tun Abdul Razak, 50200 Alor Setar
Kedah, Malaysia
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8. Zhang Zhiguang
Current Address: Jalan Tun Abdul Razak, Alor Setar 05200, Kedah,
Malaysia
Permanent Address: No. 32, Zuola Village, Chengguan Town, Lintan,
Gansu Province, China, 747500
Website: My Career Showcase
Email: zhang.zhiguang.noah@gmail.com
Phone (Malaysia): +60 12 960328
Referees
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Mr. Mahai, Manager of marketing department, Loan
enterprise
Contact no.: (+60) 126289620 E-mail: mahai.aiu@gmail.com
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Mr. Muhammad Hessan, Human resources manager,
Loan enterprise
Contact no.: (+60) 126893777 E-mail: Muhammad.aiu@gmail.com
Education Information
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Bechelor of Business Administration, (Ongoing)
o
Albukhary International University, Malaysia
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Mathematic Analysis, (2009-2011)
o
Lanzhou college, Gansu province of China
.
Public Service and Volunteer Work
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Organizer of community service programs, Albukhary
International University, (2012-present)
o
Responsibilities:
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Guide the programmers
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Plan for the tentative of the activities
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Worked as a moderator .
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Active Albukhary Debate Society member, Albukhary
International University, (2012-present)
o
Responsibilities: Organize and conduct certain debate
competitions under ADS projects
Languages spoken and Ability
Languages
Speaking
Writing
English
Fluent
Fluent
Chinese
Fluent
Fluent
Arabic
Modrate
Good
Malay
Modrate
Modrate
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9. CAREER DOCUMENT 2
APPLICATION WITH RESUME
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10. YOU FORGOT THESE
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11. MR. B VENKATESH RAO
Managing Director of Uttara foods and Feeds Pvt Ltd. (UFFPL).
Uttara House, 2 Wellesley Road, Camp, Pune
30 November 2012
Dear Director
Your advertisement which requires a person from support function in any multinational organization
with a pleasant personality and excellent communication skills for a position of travel desk executive for
your Pune Office.
You might be pleased to know that i will be offering first three weeks for free as you can monitor and
supervise. I am passionate that I want to make end-to-end travel arrangement for domestic and
international travel. I am currently majoring Bachelor of Business Administration in Albukhary
International University in Kedah, Malaysia which is necessary to perform this job correctly. Additionally,
I have various experience in travelling foreign countries.
Your travel industry will benefit my experiences in a foreign country I am living. I am also confident that
I will have much to add to your company’s activities.
You are welcome at anytime to contact me through my Email, Skype and LinkedIn which detailed in my
resume or you can call me at 017-2960328 if you need to discuss this in details.
Yours sincerely
Zhang Zhiguang
Business Administration Scholar
School of Business
Albukhary International University
Alor Setar, 05200 Malaysia
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12. Zhang Zhiguang
Current Address: Jalan Tun Abdul Razak, Alor Setar 05200, Kedah,
Malaysia
Permanent Address: No. 32, Zuola Village, Chengguan Town, Lintan,
Gansu Province, China, 747500
Website: My Career Showcase
Email: zhang.zhiguang.noah@gmail.com
Phone (Malaysia): +6017-2960328
Experience
AiU Debate Society
Participating (April 2012 – Present)
Won the certificate of successful Participation in IEP Intergroup Debate
Project 2012 of CHAIKANA DEBATE AND PUBLIC SPEAKING SOCIETY.
AiU Impromptu Speech competition
Speaker (22-13 February 2013)
Won the certificate of successful Participation in AiU IMPROMPTU
SPEECH COMPETITION
Education
Albukhary International University (Ongoing)
Bachelor of Business Administration
THE LANGUAGE HOUSE (January 2012)
Obtained the Certificate of Completion in result of A in level 5
No.2 Lintan High School
The Certificate of General High School of The People’s Republic of China
Skills
Languages
English
Chinese
Arabic
Malay
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Speaking
Fluent
Fluent
Modrate
Good
Writing
Fluent
Fluent
Good
Modrate
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