The document provides feedback on improving a draft trailer. It recommends slowing down some visual effects and transitions. It also suggests re-shooting one character's reaction shot and fixing some blurred shots. Additionally, it advises taking specific shots that could be used individually for promotional materials, changing a light effect, and applying consistent filters and a film grain effect to give the trailer an old style look matching the film's narrative.

1. Feedback – Draft Trailer
• Slow down some visual effects and transitions such as fading
and dip to blacks.
• Re-shoot/change Adam's reaction shot before he crashes.
• Some shots looked blurred.
• Take some shots which are individual to our ancillary
posters/websites e.g. the children, the mask, the doll and
the sign.
• Change/edit the light which shines through the window.
• Change filters to have a 'consistent look' throughout the film
e.g. a sepia filter/yellow balance.
• Put a 'film grain' effect over the top to create an 'old style'
look to relate to the narrative of our film.