The feedback sheet provides suggestions to improve the opening sequence of a thriller movie. It recommends adding tense sound effects to set the tone, smoothing out cuts between scenes to improve flow, and shortening scenes and the overall length to maintain viewer engagement. Minor adjustments to lighting and logos are also suggested to enhance clarity and professionalism.

1. Feed Back Sheet
“This is our rough cut for the opening sequence of
a thriller movie. How do you think we could
improve it to make it more effective?”
Some tense sound would make it a lot
better, you would get a feel for the film
The whole thing could flow better
Your production logo could move to work
better with the Sony logo. With a sound
over the top of it.
A name of the film would be helpful
There is some jumpy cuts from each scene it
would look a lot better if these were to be
smooth
It is quite long for a opening sequence
Some scene’s last to long (talking on the
phone)
There is a slight change of lighting between
the scenes, which confused me a little