We notice something menazing in all the
advices Peggy heard from other women at
the agency
We noticed something menacing in all the
pieces of advice Peggy heard/received
from other women at the agency
And this can make the serie hard to be
seen by women at the twenty first century
And this can make the TV series hard to
watch for women in the twenty first
century / unpalatable to women…
Despite one of the main characters is a
woman named Joan...
Despite the fact that one of the main
characters is a woman named Joan...
There is a direct critic to the bad manners
in that time people used to be
There is a direct criticism to/of the bad
manners people used to have/display at
that time
The starting episode of the series Mad Men
sets you, or should I say surrounds you of
a doubly artificial world composed of a
perfect mix of the falsehoods of
advertising word...
The starting episode of the series Mad Men
revolves around / immerses you in a
doubly artificial world composed of a
perfect mix of the falsehoods / fallacies of
the advertising world...
The clothes, the clocks, the furniture bring
us to a world disappeared.
The clothes, the clocks, the furniture
bring/take us back to a long-lost / long-
gone world.
In this moment Don has the idea to find
the difference with the other companies
"it's toasted" is the slogan he finds and
save the meeting
In/at this/that moment Don has the idea
of searching for the difference with the
other 5 companies. "It's toasted" is the
slogan he comes up with and saves the
meeting
Although his great success the boss asks
him to improve the relation with the other
customer...
Despite his great success, his boss asks
him to improve the relations with the other
customer...
All these questions are behind the awarded
series Mad Men produced by Matthew
Weiner and broadcasted their seven
seasons by the AMC TV
All these questions are behind the award-
winning series Mad Men whose seven
seasons were broadcast(ed) by AMC TV
and produced by Matthew Weiner.
In its first episode are already introduced
most of important issues which are
constantly present in all the seasons.
Most of the important issues which will be
ubiquitous / recurrent in all seven seasons
are already introduced in this/the (very)
first episode
A hit show which has win more awards
than Titanic and may have heritage its
elegance.
A hit show which has won more awards
than Titanic and may have inherited its
elegance.
This recreation of the adrenalitic days of
this business people and their intense
nights will not leave you indifferent
This recreation of the adrenaline-fuelled
days of these business people and their
intense nights will not leave you
indifferent
Who wouldn't want to be Don Draper, the
handsome, brilliant, well payed executive
that always is able to save the day for the
company while is having an affair with a
beautiful self-confident college...
Who wouldn't want to be Don Draper, the
handsome, brilliant, well-payed executive
that/who is always able to save the day
for the company while (he is) having an
affair with a beautiful self-confident
colleague...
Pete Campbell, the young and ambitious
Head of Accounts who pretend Draper's
position...
Pete Campbell, the young and ambitious
Head of Accounts who covets Draper's
position...
Before than now, I did not know this TV
series, despite its amount of prices.
Until now (Hitherto), I did not know this
TV series, despite its many / great number
of prizes.
Sterling Cooper is working to reassure
their largest client, Lucky Strike, in the
face of medical researches demonstrating
that smoking is harmful for health.
Sterling Cooper is working to reassure
their largest client, Lucky Strike, in the
face / in the wake of medical studies
demonstrating that smoking is harmful
(for one’s health).
The topic is focus on the personal
relationship that characterized the
publicity world of the sixties and the
seventies in US.
The episode focuses on the personal
relationships that characterized the
advertising world of the sixties and the
seventies in the US.

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  • 1.
    We notice somethingmenazing in all the advices Peggy heard from other women at the agency We noticed something menacing in all the pieces of advice Peggy heard/received from other women at the agency And this can make the serie hard to be seen by women at the twenty first century And this can make the TV series hard to watch for women in the twenty first century / unpalatable to women… Despite one of the main characters is a woman named Joan... Despite the fact that one of the main characters is a woman named Joan... There is a direct critic to the bad manners in that time people used to be There is a direct criticism to/of the bad manners people used to have/display at that time
  • 2.
    The starting episodeof the series Mad Men sets you, or should I say surrounds you of a doubly artificial world composed of a perfect mix of the falsehoods of advertising word... The starting episode of the series Mad Men revolves around / immerses you in a doubly artificial world composed of a perfect mix of the falsehoods / fallacies of the advertising world... The clothes, the clocks, the furniture bring us to a world disappeared. The clothes, the clocks, the furniture bring/take us back to a long-lost / long- gone world. In this moment Don has the idea to find the difference with the other companies "it's toasted" is the slogan he finds and save the meeting In/at this/that moment Don has the idea of searching for the difference with the other 5 companies. "It's toasted" is the slogan he comes up with and saves the meeting
  • 3.
    Although his greatsuccess the boss asks him to improve the relation with the other customer... Despite his great success, his boss asks him to improve the relations with the other customer... All these questions are behind the awarded series Mad Men produced by Matthew Weiner and broadcasted their seven seasons by the AMC TV All these questions are behind the award- winning series Mad Men whose seven seasons were broadcast(ed) by AMC TV and produced by Matthew Weiner. In its first episode are already introduced most of important issues which are constantly present in all the seasons. Most of the important issues which will be ubiquitous / recurrent in all seven seasons are already introduced in this/the (very) first episode
  • 4.
    A hit showwhich has win more awards than Titanic and may have heritage its elegance. A hit show which has won more awards than Titanic and may have inherited its elegance. This recreation of the adrenalitic days of this business people and their intense nights will not leave you indifferent This recreation of the adrenaline-fuelled days of these business people and their intense nights will not leave you indifferent Who wouldn't want to be Don Draper, the handsome, brilliant, well payed executive that always is able to save the day for the company while is having an affair with a beautiful self-confident college... Who wouldn't want to be Don Draper, the handsome, brilliant, well-payed executive that/who is always able to save the day for the company while (he is) having an affair with a beautiful self-confident colleague...
  • 5.
    Pete Campbell, theyoung and ambitious Head of Accounts who pretend Draper's position... Pete Campbell, the young and ambitious Head of Accounts who covets Draper's position... Before than now, I did not know this TV series, despite its amount of prices. Until now (Hitherto), I did not know this TV series, despite its many / great number of prizes. Sterling Cooper is working to reassure their largest client, Lucky Strike, in the face of medical researches demonstrating that smoking is harmful for health. Sterling Cooper is working to reassure their largest client, Lucky Strike, in the face / in the wake of medical studies demonstrating that smoking is harmful (for one’s health). The topic is focus on the personal relationship that characterized the
  • 6.
    publicity world ofthe sixties and the seventies in US. The episode focuses on the personal relationships that characterized the advertising world of the sixties and the seventies in the US.