An unique perspective of how the ideal world would be in my perspective.

2. Hello! Today, oh,
this is a very
beautiful day...

3. Life is beautiful
like the flowers of
the field...

4. This is a story
about a girl who
loves everything
in life...

5. A girl who has a
sweet smile and
whose eyes
shimmers...

6. This girl is me, I
love doing things
in family and
going out with my
family...

7. THE END
Author: Mylena Costa Silva
Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura
Illustrator: Zuzol
Publisher: www.storybird.com
Period: II Semester - Summer 2014
A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”
CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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