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Video Feedback
 “I really liked your idea for you music video, it was
  creative and well planned”
 “I liked the idea of the glow sticks, I’ve never seen
  anything like it, so I think it would look really good. I
  wouldn’t change anything because all the ideas go
  well with the lyrics”.
 ”In singer/songwriters music videos you normally see a
  storyline, your video has one so it think it looks good
  and is similar to singer/songwriters music videos”.
 “I like it, but I think there is too much of the glow stick
  scene”
 “The ideas are really good and go with the tempo,
  but I think something needs changing”.
Digipak Feedback
 “The digipak was really exciting and creative”. “It is bright and
  has a big focus on the artist, and clear writing, so you don’t have
  to guess who it is”.

 “I really like the splashed effect of the paint, but its not really
  relevant to the video, like the glow sticks on the CD tray are”.

 “The colors are really bright and would definitely attract me to
  buy it on a shop self or online”.

 “The close up of the artist lets people know who it is, and would
  be easy to find in a shop”.
Advert Feedback
 “The advert is really realistic and looks
  really professional, I would definitely want
  to buy the album when seeing that”

 “It is really clear and gives people the
  information they need when looking at it”

 “It looks quite boring”

 “It draws attention to the album itself
  rather than other artwork on the poster”

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Draft feedback

  • 5. Video Feedback  “I really liked your idea for you music video, it was creative and well planned”  “I liked the idea of the glow sticks, I’ve never seen anything like it, so I think it would look really good. I wouldn’t change anything because all the ideas go well with the lyrics”.  ”In singer/songwriters music videos you normally see a storyline, your video has one so it think it looks good and is similar to singer/songwriters music videos”.  “I like it, but I think there is too much of the glow stick scene”  “The ideas are really good and go with the tempo, but I think something needs changing”.
  • 6. Digipak Feedback  “The digipak was really exciting and creative”. “It is bright and has a big focus on the artist, and clear writing, so you don’t have to guess who it is”.  “I really like the splashed effect of the paint, but its not really relevant to the video, like the glow sticks on the CD tray are”.  “The colors are really bright and would definitely attract me to buy it on a shop self or online”.  “The close up of the artist lets people know who it is, and would be easy to find in a shop”.
  • 7.
  • 8. Advert Feedback  “The advert is really realistic and looks really professional, I would definitely want to buy the album when seeing that”  “It is really clear and gives people the information they need when looking at it”  “It looks quite boring”  “It draws attention to the album itself rather than other artwork on the poster”