This document contains peer feedback and the author's own feedback on draft advertisements and a double page spread. The peer feedback suggests using different fonts and sizes to make the pieces more effective. It also recommends filling in gaps in the article and pulling a quote out more. The author agrees changes are needed, such as making the color scheme more consistent and prominent, structuring the layout better, and using a wider range of fonts. The author will make further changes based on this feedback.

1. ANCILLIARY DRAFT ANALYSIS
CHARLOTTE MARTIN

2. ADVERTISEMENT & DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD DRAFTS

3. PEER ANALYSIS / FEEDBACK
Grade (A)
I used different
fonts and sizes
which I aimed
to achieve. I
should make
the ‘the real
story’ bigger
and more
effective to add
to the different
font sizes and
variations.
I also need to
finish the article
and fill in the
gaps at the
Grade (B)
I used different fonts
and sizes, I should add
the blue colour from
my DPS into my article
which I agree with. I
used the blue to match
Penelope’s eyes, this
will be taken into
consideration.
Grade (B/A)
I need to use different
fonts to make the
advert effective,
instead of sticking with
just one.

4. PEER ANALYSIS / FEEDBACK
Grade (A)
The image reflects
the article and it
looks professional!
I need to fill the
gap above the first
image of the girl
(Jess) on the right
hand side. I will
add a different
section to the right
hand side of the
DPS.
I need to pull the
quote out a little
more to be more
effective and to
Grade (B)
My peer doesn’t like
the font on the title
and I agree. It’s
taking me a long
time to decide on a
font that I think
looks professional
and effective, so I
will take this on
board and try to
find a font that fits in
with the theme and
looks extremely
effective.

5. PEER ANALYSIS / FEEDBACK
Grade (A)
Both these
comments have
no improvements,
but they like the
colour scheme,
image and
layout. I like my
layout but I feel I
need to make the
colour scheme
more evident and
improve this
slightly.
Grade (A)
Again, these
comments say
the advert looks
professional,
which of course I
am aiming for. I
feel as if to
improve I need to
add different
fonts and add in
the colour
scheme more.

6. MY PERSONAL FEEDBACK
 I feel as if my DPS and Advert need to be improved due to the colour scheme not
being consistent throughout. Firstly, my DPS layout needs to be more structured and
have the main parts standing out more (the image, enlarged quote and headline).
 I want my advert to use a wider range of fonts and my colour scheme of blue to be
adapted into this too. I am very happy with the image of the attacker on the right,
but I want the image of Penelope to stand out a little more to balance out the
tension in the advert itself.
 This is my final draft and I will be making some more changes after the feedback I
have received from my peers.