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Writing 2
    IECP
  Fall 2012
Nikki Mattson
Agenda
• Idiom
• Peer reviewing + editing
• Reading and writing integration
Peer reviewing
•   Complete the checklist about your partner’s essay
•   Share your answers with your partner
•   Give Nikki your checklist
•   Complete the editing worksheet
•   Share your edits with your partner
•   Give Nikki your editing worksheet
Name of Editor:____________________                   Name of Essay writer:________________________

   Part of sentence with an error       Type of   Correction
   Example:                             error

   My sister she had to wear a school   pronoun   My sister had to wear a school uniform.
   uniform.
   1.




   2.




   3.




   4.




   5.
Integrating Reading + Writing
• Goals
• Higher-level skills - critical thinking,
  summarizing, responding to a text
Pre-reading
Reading
• 1) Read the article. You may read silently or aloud with your partner.
  (15 minutes)
• 2) Complete “Main Ideas” and “Details” (10 minutes)
• 3) Discuss your responses with your partner (5 minutes)
• 4) Check the answers as a whole class (5 minutes)
• 5) Write 5-8 sentences for each “What Do You Think” question.
Your responses will be discussed and collected during class on
Thursday. (10 minutes)
HW
• Complete your “What do you think”
  responses (5-8 sentences for each
  question).
• Edit your essay (with your partner’s
  feedback) and bring the final copy to class
  on Thursday.

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Day 23

  • 1. Writing 2 IECP Fall 2012 Nikki Mattson
  • 2. Agenda • Idiom • Peer reviewing + editing • Reading and writing integration
  • 3.
  • 4. Peer reviewing • Complete the checklist about your partner’s essay • Share your answers with your partner • Give Nikki your checklist • Complete the editing worksheet • Share your edits with your partner • Give Nikki your editing worksheet
  • 5. Name of Editor:____________________ Name of Essay writer:________________________ Part of sentence with an error Type of Correction Example: error My sister she had to wear a school pronoun My sister had to wear a school uniform. uniform. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5.
  • 6. Integrating Reading + Writing • Goals • Higher-level skills - critical thinking, summarizing, responding to a text
  • 8.
  • 9.
  • 10.
  • 11.
  • 12. Reading • 1) Read the article. You may read silently or aloud with your partner. (15 minutes) • 2) Complete “Main Ideas” and “Details” (10 minutes) • 3) Discuss your responses with your partner (5 minutes) • 4) Check the answers as a whole class (5 minutes) • 5) Write 5-8 sentences for each “What Do You Think” question. Your responses will be discussed and collected during class on Thursday. (10 minutes)
  • 13. HW • Complete your “What do you think” responses (5-8 sentences for each question). • Edit your essay (with your partner’s feedback) and bring the final copy to class on Thursday.