errors in technical writing final project for CS-II UET Lahore, KSK campus.

1. WELCOME

2. GROUP MEMBERS
• ZAIN ALI BUTT
– 2010-BT-MECH-14
• ALI RAZA
– 2010-BT-MECH-33

3. • NATIONAL FOOD INDUSTRIES
• SHEZAN INTERNATIONAL
• MURREE BREWERY
• MITCHELL'S FOODS
• UNILEVER INTERNATIONAL

4. HOME PAGE

6. • STYLE
– US English formal
• Use of words
– total 211
– Semi technical wording
• Sentence length
– 75% above 20 words
– 25% below 20 words

7. • Paragraph
– 3 paragraphs
– Font size 11pt
– Black font color with white background
• Content
– Mix
• Conciseness
– Highly shortness in last paragraph

8. • Passive words
• Confused words
• Complex words
• Extra use
• Errors

11. HISTORY
• Style
– Us English , semi formal
• use of words
– 177 words
– Semi technical wordings
• Sentence length
– 50% above 20 words
– 50% below 20 words
• Paragraph
– 1 paragraphs
– Font size 11pt
– Font color black with
white background and
headings are red.

12. • Confused words
• Misused words
• Errors

16. • Language
– US English formal
• Use of words
– 255 words
– Technical words
• Sentence length
– 80 % above 20 words
– 20% below 20 words

17. • Paragraph
– 4 paragraphs
– 11pt font size
– Light brown font color with dark brown whiskey color
back ground
• Content
– Truly written
• Conciseness
– Fully short and to the point

18. • EXTRA WORDS
• COMPLEX WORDS
• PASSIVE VERBS
• CONFUSED WORDS
• ERRORS

20. ABOUT US PAGE

21. • Style
– US English, formal
• use of words
– 170 words
– Semi technical wordings
• Sentence length
– 50% above 20 words
– 50% below 20 words
• Paragraph
– 3 paragraphs
– Font size 15pt
– Font color black with
sky-blue background
DATA ANALIZATION

22. • Content
– Mix
• Conciseness
– Highly shortness in last
paragraph
• Passive words used
• Misused words
• Complex words
• Informal
• Hidden verbs
Cont…

26. • Style
– Us English , semi formal
• use of words
– 599 words
– Semi technical wordings
• Sentence length
– 25% above 20 words
– 75% below 20 words
• Paragraph
– 6 paragraphs and bullet
style
– Font size 11pt
– Font color black with white
background and headings
are blue.

27. • Content
– Mostly true but some
where pleasures.
• Conciseness
– Semi concise
• Passive words used
• Misuse words
• Complex words
• Other Errors