The document provides examples and guidance for writing a strong critical analysis essay. It analyzes an example essay on extending the school day, identifying several areas for improvement. Specifically, the example essay lacks essential elements like a clear thesis and coherence between paragraphs. It also uses ineffective sentences with issues like fragments and run-on sentences. While it provides some relevant facts, it fails to effectively argue how these support the thesis. The conclusion further discusses costs rather than summarizing the main points. In summary, the document deconstructs a weak critical analysis essay and highlights opportunities for stronger argumentation, coherence, and following critical analysis conventions.