Two criminals are discussing plans to sell stolen oxygen tanks from a heist. They argue over splitting the profits, with one criminal wanting a 60/40 split in his favor since it was his plan. As their argument escalates, police officers outside slowly open the door and catch the criminals off guard. After a brief struggle, the police officers shoot and subdue the criminals. They then depart with the crates of stolen oxygen.

1. COURSEWORK SCRIPT
By Liberty Wilson and Joseph Anning
SCENE 1 - DAY INT. CRIMINALS TALKING

2. SCENE 1 - DAY INT. CRIMINALS TALKING
Two criminals are stood across from each other at a table in
the middle of a dimly lit room, with neon light flooding in
from the window, crates of stolen oxygen stacked nearby. A
small oxygen tank with a mask is sat on the table. They are
discussing their plans.
CRIMINAL 1
How much are we selling for?
CRIMINAL 2
80 per tank
CRIMINAL 1
100.
CRIMINAL 2
Fine, I say we ship them early
tomorrow.
CRIMINAL 1
Too risky. We’ll ship late tonight.
I’ll round the others.
CRIMINAL 2
Jesus, I can’t believe we managed
this.
CRIMINAL 1
We haven’t done anything yet.
CRIMINAL 2
Apart from robbing a multi-billion
oxygen company!
CRIMINAL 1
If you keep this attitude we’re
gonna get caught and this whole
operation will be done for. Get it?
CRIMINAL 2
Yes.
CRIMINAL 1
Pass the oxygen then.
(Passes oxygen)
CRIMINAL 1
Once we’ve crossed the border and
got rid of it we’ll spilt the money
and go our ways.
CRIMINAL 2
50/50 right.
CRIMINAL 1
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60/40. You get 40. I made this
plan.
CRIMINAL 2
That’s not fair. That wasn’t the
deal.
CRIMINAL 1
You’re getting nothin’ if you
aren’t careful.
CRIMINAL 2
Try me.
CRIMINAL 1
(angrily)
SHUT YOUR MOUTH BEFORE I SHUT IT
FOR YOU.
(Bangs table with fists)
CRIMINAL 2
(annoyed)
ALRIGHT THEN, DO IT.
SCENE 2 - DAY INT. POLICE BY DOOR
Stood outside the door to the flat, two private police
officers are getting ready to storm in and take the crates of
oxygen back.
They signal to each other and one slowly reaches for the door
handle, waits for confirmation from the other and slowly
starts to turn the door handle.
The door handle clicks
The criminals, ready to fight suddenly stop and look at each
other.
POLICE OFFICER 1
Oh for...
CRIMINAL 1
Gasps
CRIMINAL 2
What the...
The police officers burst through the door and after a brief
struggle shoot the criminls.
SCENE 3 - DAY INT. POLICE LEAVE
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4. SCENE 3 - DAY INT. POLICE LEAVE
The two police officers walk along the corridor with the
stacked crates of oxygen.
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